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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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Bachpan ki Yaadain




Chintu apne raste or manu soch me chintu kya karega Nisha ke sath ???yeh sawal chod gaya manu ke jehan me..

Ab iska jawab toh aanewala time ya Nisha ki kismat hi bata sakti hai …





Ab aage......



“Ab kya hoga Nisha ka ???”

“Kya hoga Nisha ke sath ???”

“Kya chintu use koi na koi problem me lekar aayega ???”

Kya Nisha uski baton kaa bharosaa karegi ??”

“Nahi Nisha meri bahut achi dost hai main usko kuch nahi hone dunga …ab or bacha hi kon hai dosti ke naam per mere pass…” in sab sawalon ne manu ke dimaag ka sukun or chain chin rakha tha .

Jahan ek taraf use Khushi thi ki pushpi ab chintu ke dubara kisi chakkar main nahi faasnewali or ab uske ghar per uski sahi se care ho sakegi …or sath hi pushpi se ab chintu kahin na kahin ulajhnewala nahi hai kam se kam siddha toh nahi…per

“ Nisha ka kya chintu ne kaha hai ki Nisha ko mujhse alag kar dega …or agar Nisha ko usne kuch kiya toh nahi Nisha ko hath lagane se pehle who hazar baar sochega phir yeh chintu karne kya wala hai???”

Manu jitna sochta utna hi ulajhta jata ..per uske sochne per bhi koi hal na nikalta …kyuki chintu kya karnewala tha yeh toh sirf or sirf chintu hi janta hai..

Manu ab Nisha ko bachane ka mann bana chuka tha ..per kya sirf mann banana hi kaafi hota hai …???

Khair manu ne ab chintu ki har harkat ko barki se dekhna shuru kar diya …per chintu toh chintu hi tha …jahan use dyaal se pitne ke baad uski Nafrat manu ke liye ghari or jada ghari ho chali thi …itna pitne ke baad koi normal insaan ho toh apne mann or gand dono ko kaabu me kar le per chintu pyara haan bhai chintu pyara bada dhith tha ..itne ke baad bhi nahi mana …or ab uska target thi Nisha sala karne ki kya sochta hai …hai jhaant bhar ka per saale ka dimaag manna padega kitna shaitani hai …



Khair manu pura jasoos ban chuka tha kyoki usne ab chintu ki harhakat per peni nazar bana li thi …isme uska sath diya pushpi ne bhi kyuki pushpi ne wada liya tha na ussse ki sab batayega …or ek wajah or bhi thi school me toh chintu per nazar rakhna asaan tha manu ke liye per ghar per kon rakta so isme usne pushpi ka sahara liya dono bangaye pure jasoos chintu ke ..per

Chintu thera chintu uske bartav se lagta hi nahi tha ki shayad kuch karega Nisha ko per manu ke pure hosh ude hue the ..nisha ke matter me who koi bhi chance nahi lena chahta tha ..

Udhar Nisha ki diwangi bhi ab sar chadkar bolne lagi thi har roz apni maa manju se manu ke topic per ghanton baat karti “ mummy manu yeh ……mummy manu who……..mummy jab main badi ho jaungi toh manu ke kadhe tak puchungi ya uske kaan tak…mummy mere manu per white color acha lagta hai per main ek baar use sky blue color ke shirt me dekhna chahti hun?? Manju bhi eka chi maa ki tarah uske sath uske har topic per apni rai rakhti thi …use apni beti ki diwangi per ek taraf Khushi thi ki chalo manu ke chakkar me ab uski beti uski sabse pakki Saheli hai …uske pass jada time spend karti hai …or uske or jada karib ho chali hai ..per kahin na kahin use Nisha ki diwangi per darr bhi lagta tha “ki pata nahi agar manu ne use mana kar diya ki use Nisha se pyaar nahi hai ya apne garib hone ke chalte uski beti se duri bana li toh Nisha tutkar bhikhar jayegi tab Nisha ko kaise sabhalungi main …???”

Yeh sawal uske dimaag me uski bhi tension bana dete the kyuki who bhi ab kahin na kahin nisha ki Khushi chahti thi ..per sath me who manu ko bhi ache se jaanti thi ki manu apne garibi or Nisha ke amir hone ke chalte ek baar ko Nisha se duri bana sakta hai …kyuki manju ne manu ki ankhon me wahi khuddari dekhi thi jo ashok ki annkhon me hua karti thi..jahan Nisha or uski family ka clear tha ki manu ek baar haan kare toh Nisha uski zindagi me shamil ho jayegi per manu ka na uski family ka kuch pata tha ki unka decision kya hoga …per manju khud ko yeh kehkar samjha liya karti thi ki amir logo se dunia riste jodti hai …per agar manu ke maa baap ne khud ki garibi dekhkar Nisha ke riste ko mana kar diya toh ???

Phir who khud ko ashok ki who baat yaad karke samjha leti “jo ladka abhi itna talented hai aage kya nahi kar sakta …”ashok ki yeh baat uske dimaag me aati toh dua karti “khaas jo bhi ho unki beti ko uska pyaar mil jaye “??

Ab aage kya hoga yeh toh dono ki kismat …per yahan ek baat maanni hogi jahan dunia main senkdo logo ke pyaar main khud unke maa baap uche or niche jaat baradari dharam or mazhab ucha nicha dekhkar bachon ke pyaar ko suli per latka diya karte the wahin ..yahan toh khud Nisha ki maa apni beti ke pyaar ki duain manga karti thi..ahsok bhi kahin na kahin is pyaar ke support me hi tha ..kyuki khud ashok or manju ki love marriage thi toh dono hi pyaar ki ehamiyat ko bakhobi samjhte the ….per har maa baap ki tarah unki fikra bhi jayaz thi ki pyaar apni jagah or limit apni jagah hai …

Khair manu or pushpi pichle 2 hafte se chintu per barbar nazar rakh rahe the ..per kuch bhi hath nahi lagraha tha …

Pushpi “bhai tujhe lagta hai chintu kuch karega ???”

Manu “didi main khud yahi dua karta hun kina kare ..per kya mere or aapke hath me kuch hai nahi na ??”

Pushpi”per aisa kar kya sakta hai who ki Nisha tujhse dosti tod de..tu khud sochkar dekh na???”

Manu “pata nahi didi maine toh aajtak chintu ka buran ahi socha per pata nahi use problem kya hai mujhse??”

Pushpi “ toh tujhe such me nahi pata ..???”

Manu ne naa me sar hilate hue kaha …

Pushpi ...”ab tu mujhse jhuth bhi bolne laga loog bhale hi tere baton me aajate hon per mere bhai teri yeh behan teri Aankhen padti hai…such bol jati varna lagungi >>” pushpi ne jhutha gussa dikhate hue kaha …

Manu “ didi ab aapse kya chupana chintu aaj se nahi bahut pehle se mujhe nicha dikahne me laga hua hai ,pehle mere sath ke dostoon ko badkaya uske baad aage ka aapko pata hi hai…”

Pushpi “ haan jaanti hun use bhi or tujhe bhi ki who tujhe dabata rahega or tu dosti ke naam per dabta rahega ..hain na ..???”pushpi jaise kuch dundh rahi thi manu ke bhitar ..

Manu “ nahi didi iske baad bhi dosti ke naam per main nahi dabsakta hun..per dabne ki ek wajah hai ..or plz puchna mat varna aapko na main keh sakunga na aap sun sakogi..”

Pushpi “ mujhse sab jaanna hai chahe acha ho y abura or koi bahana nahi ..varna “

Manu “ok didi aajkal aapke is varna se bada darr lagta hai jab dekho kaan garam ho jaate hain…acha baba toh suno ……didi usse dabne ya use jawab na dene ki wajah aap hain …kyuki main nahi chahata ki uske or mere bich ki duri ka asar meri didi or mere bich me ho…so use jawab de nahi pata …”

Pushpi “ tujhe mere chalte kisi kea age jhukne ki zarorat nahi hai…kyuki dunia ki koi bhi takat tere or mere bich me nahi aa sakti ..aage se jo kuch bhi ho muh toad jawab dena ok …”

Manu “ ok didi”

Pushpi “ acha sun tune jo class me hua tha Nisha ko bataya ???”

Manu “ didi us baat ka yahan usse kya lena dena Nisha se bhala .???”

Pushpi ne zor se manu sar per ek tapli maari(chanta/slap type)or manu apna sar sehlane laga …

Pushpi “ pagal insaan kaise nahi hai kya pata uska yahi plan ho tere baare me ki Nisha ko uncle ke baare me ulta siddha bolkar tere bare me uske dil me tere liye Nafrat bhar de or Nisha ko tujhse dur karde …soch kar dekh duffer ..???”

Manu “ pehle toh didi aap marna thoda kam karo aajkal aapke hathon ki power mere upper kuch jada hi nikal jati hai …..or haan aapne sahi kaha aisa toh maine socha hi nahi …yeh bhi ho sakta hai…ab ??”

Pushpi “ab kya “??

Manu “ ab kya karun??”

Pushpi “ are duffer Nisha ko apne trust me le or use pehle hi bata de ki chintu kyaa keh sakta hai jab who apna dimaag chala raha hai toh tujhe kisne roka hai…chal lagja kaam per ”

Manu “ yeh sahi kaha use trust me lena hi hoga varna mujhse pehle chintu ne kuch bhi kaha toh who meri baton per yakin nahi karegi…thanks didi ab yahi karunga pehle …”

Phir dono apne apne ghar chal diye …

Agle din school me manu ne Nisha se lunch me kisi or room me aane ko kaha …kyuki bhale hi chintu se manu ka clash tha per Nisha ke samne chintu manu ka sirf or sirf aam dost hi tha …or jab tak Nisha school me rehti thi..tab tak koi bhi ladka ya ladki manu ko kuch nahi kehta tha ab yeh chintu kaise manage karta tha chintu hi jaane ..per jis din Nisha nahi aati thi ..us din saare milkar aapne remaining days ki kasar nikal liya karte the manu ko zalil karne ki …

Khair Nisha ne jab kaha “aaj alag room kyu..??”

Manu “ kyuki koi khaas baat karni hai tumse jo chintu samne rahega toh nahi ho paayegi…”

Nisha ka dil machal gaya usne socha lagta hai jo pyaar ki aag uske dil me hai wahi manu ke dil me bhi hai …shayad manu aaj use purpose kar dega …

Nisha man me “ aaj agar mere manu ne mujhe purpose kiya toh kya hoga …kya kahungi main…kaise kahungi main usse ki



“dil ki baat dil tak puche yeh armaan hi kaafi hai..

Pyaar hai sirf itna kehdo, mere saajan tumhara yeh ahsaan hi kaafi hai..”





"Hay ek baar kehkar toh dekho mere saajan tumhari yeh Diwani kya kar jayegi..

Pyaar hai tumko mujhe se sirf itna kehdo verna yeh pagal gum me hi mar jayegi.."



Nisha……nisha …..nisha …manu Nisha ko pukar raha tha per Nisha apne mann me pata nahi kya kya soch rahi thi..usne toh khuli aankhon se who hasin pal mehsoos karne bhi shuru kar diye the …ki manu use kahega I love u Nisha …hay us samay thode nakhre dikhungi …manu se thoda or apni baat manvaungi …phir tab jaakar haan kahungi …

Nahi nahi kahin usne apna irada badal diya toh ..toh mera kya hoga ..or waise bhi usper marnewali yahan kam nahi hain kahin main koi nakra kiya or who bura maan gya toh na baba na mujhe koi chance nahi lena ..woh kahegaa or turant hi haan kar dungi ..mujhe bhi apne pyar ko pane ka pura haq hai..”



(ab nisha ko kya pata jinke baare me whoh soch rahi hai who bhi ab manu ke khilaaf chintu ke sath manu ko zalil karne ka koi mauka nahi choadti hai..kal tak jo Nisha ke samne manu ki achai ki tarifen kiya karti thi aaj wahi manu ko dekhkar muh bana leti thi…jaise manu koi badbudar cheez ho…kaise loog hote hain yahan jahan kaltak koi insaan acha lagta hai hero ki tarah per baap ka kaam ka sunkar sabhi use nicha dikane me lage the are bhai uske baap ke kaam se uska kya lena dena who kal bhi manu tha aaj bhi manu hai..woh kal bhi wahi insaan tha aaj bhi wahi insaan hai …farak manu me nahi..tha dekhne wale ki niyat me fark tha ..aaj bhi manu waisa hi tha agar koi usse madad magta toh who karta madad uski per ab unsabki beruki ke chalte manu ne bhi unsabhi se duri bana li thi..)



Khair Nisha ne bhi mann ban aliya tha ki manu bas ek baar kahe or who uski ho jaaye aanewali puri zindagi ke liye …



“Nisha ……..nisha …….nisha kahan khoyi hui ho…tumhari tabiyat toh thik hai ???” manu ne bechaini ke sath uske mathe per hath rakhkar pucha ..

Nisha uske hath rakhte hi apne me simat chali thi …nazare chuka kar boli ..”nahi thik hun bas aise kuch soch rahi thi..”

Manu “ tum pakaa thik ho na ..??”

Nisha haan me sar hilakar . kehti hai..”bilkul thik hun..”

Manu “ thank god main ghabra hi gaya tha …ki pata nahi tumhe hua kya hai..acha lunch me yaad se alag room me aajana acha chalta hun apna khayal rakhna ok …???”

Nisha han me sar hilati hai or mann me kehti hai…

“Hay

“Unke ek ishare se udjaati hain hosh humare, pass hone se dil apna nahi rehta,or unki ada ka kya kehna ..

Na aankhon me neend hai dil ko karar hai.. mera lutera phir bhi kehta bedardi se mujhe apna khayal rakhna..”



Khair lunch ka time hua or Nisha or manu apne bateye hue room me pahunche ..wahan koi or nahi tha. Udhar chintu regular jagah gaya jahan Nisha or manu me se koi mila nahi toh use bada gussa aaya ..per pure school me dundta kahan kahan so gusse me dant piskar khud se bola”sale chutiye ek din bach gya toh har din Nisha ko bacha lega kya Nisha sirf meri hai …aaj tune bahut galat kiya hai ..tumje iski saza zaror milegi manu …ab tu dekhta ja main kya karta hun..???”or gusse me pagal hokar wapas class me chala gya..



Udhar manu or Nisha jab room me puhunche toh room me sirf un dono ke alawa koi or nahi tha ..jahaan Nisha apne me samti hui thi kyuki use lag raha tha ki aaj uska who sapna jo har ladki apne jivan me dekhti hai ..pyar pane ka or koi aisa waisa nahi pehla pyaar dunia gawah hai ki kitne khusnaseeb loog honge who jinhe apna pehla pyaar naseeb hua hoga ..ab Nisha bhi khud ko un chand khush naseebo me gin rahi thi or ek taraf dil se dua kar rahi thi ki manu shyaad usse apne pyaar ka izhaar karde or Nisha bhi badle me haan kehkar apna pehla pyaar haasil kar le …

Wahin dusri taraf manu bada sanjida or tanha feel kar raha tha ki pata nahi Nisha ka reaction kya hoga jab who rajinder ke kaam ke baare me Nisha ko bateyga …kahin who bhi chintu ke batane ke baad jaise puri class ne usse akela or tanhaa choad diya tha waise hi choad degi ya use apna legi ek dost ki tarah ya ab Nisha uske liye dosti ki jagah humdardi ya daya dikhayegi ….manu kahin na kahin in sab me ulajh chuka tha…kahin na kahin soch raha tha ki agar Nisha use ab daya or humdardi se dekhgi toh kya uska wajood is dosti me khush reh sakega ya who yeh sab she sakega …

Aise kai sawal the jinke jawab sirf or sirf Nisha ke pass the manu himmat juttne me laga hua tha ki kahan se shruwat kare or kaise shuru kare aaj dono hi chahe Nisha ho ya manu dono ke mann me alag alag vichar the dono ke samne roz wala tiffin tha per khane ki tamanna shyad hi kisi ke dil me ho ..??

Nisha jahan apne aanewale kal ke spane saza rahi thi …wahin manu apne aane wale kal me Nisha ke bartav ko lekar soch me gum tha ..kal jiska koi thikana nahi hai …kal kabhi insaan ke hath me nahi hota na hi bita hua kal na hi aanewala kal …kon jane kal kya hoga per saari dunia kal ke piche bhagne me bussy hai bina yeh soche ki kal kiske hath me hai …saari dunia apna kala cha dekhna chahti hai …sab ache ki hi ummid karte hain kehte hain ummid per hi dunia kaayam hai …per kya such me kal per koi zor nahi ..kehna thoda muskil hai kal kya hoga hum aaj ko acha banakar aanewale kal me bhi acha ho iske liye soch sakte hain..

Khair dono apni soch me gum the dono apne hisab se is khamoshi ka andaza laga rahe the …kisi ko toh is khamoshi ko toadna hi tha ..toh manu apne me gum that oh pehl Nisha ne hi ki …”haan toh kaho kya baat hai…tumne aaj yahan kyu bulaya hai mujhe ..???”Nisha mann se dua kar rahi thi ki manu bas aaj uske pyaar ko usse ek baar kehkar toh dekhe …nisha saari dunia ki Khushi apni saari umar manu ke naam kar degi …

Manu apne khyaalo ke Bhawar se bahar nikala or shabd dundhne laga ki kaise shuru kare ..wahin Nisha ki bechani ab bardast ke bahar ho chali thi..usne manu ko dekha toh paya ki manu gehri soch me gum hai toh khud usne shuruwat ki “kya baat hai tum pareshaan lag rahe ho sab thik toh hai na .???”

Manu abhi bhi sahi shabdon ke jaal me faansa hua tha ki shuru kahaan se kare ?? phir bhi usne sar hilkar thik hona ka ishara kiya …

Nisha “hum dost hain na itna toh bharosaa kar hi sakte ho mujhper jo bhi baat hai kaho bhi ya mujhe itna gair samjhte ho..??”Nisha ne use himmat dete hue uska hath pakadkar kaha ..

Manu ne jab suna ki Nisha ko uski kitni parvah hai toh usne Nisha ked ono kandhe pakad kar uski ankhon me dekhkar kaha “ mere pass ab sirf tum hi toh ho , jise main kisi kimat per khona nahi chahta hun,,ab is dunia me sirf tum hi toh ho jise khona shayad ab main bardast nahi kar sakta …??”

Nisha ne jab yeh suna toh uske dil main ghantiyaan bazane lagi use laga ki manu ko such me usse kitna pyaar hai ,,uski kitni parvah hai Nisha manu ked ono hathon me samti hui khadi thi uski Aankhen manu ki aankhon me apne liye parvah or apne liye pyaar dundh rahi thi ..wahin manu bhi unki aankhon me apne liye parvaah dundh raha tha..

Nisha manu ke ander apne liye care dekh rahi thi…manu bhi uski aankhon me apne liye care dekh raha tha …

Manu”aaj kuch kehna chahta hun per tumhara jo bhi faisla ho aage mujhe manjoor hoga ..kyuki aanewale kal me humara rista chahe jo bhi ho main tumhari respect utni hi karunga jitni aaj karta hun..”manu ne bahut himmat ke sath kaha jime uska matlab yahi tha ki kalko agar tumbhi mujse duri banao toh tab bhi mujhe tumhari parvah hai ..

Nisha mann me “ mere saajan ab keh bhi do who 3 word ..or main tumhari ho jaungi ..bas keh bhi do ..

Hatt pagal tumne yeh kaise soch liya ki tumhare kisi bhi baat per main tumhe choad dungi ab toh zindagi hi tumse mera daaman chuda sakti hai …are tum bas himmat karo ek baar apne laabon se keh do ..main toh kabse tumhari hun…keh bhi do dekho ab yeh duri bardast nahi hogi mujhse or …kaho na keh bhi do ..”Nisha ke labo ki chupi se jada uske mann or uski aankhon me baatain chal rahi thi…

Manu “kuch toh kaho Nisha agar tumne mujhe dur kar diya toh pata nahi main kaise ji paunga …haan jiunga toh zaroor per pata nahi kaise .??”

Nisha ne manu ko apne seene se laga le aisa uska dil hua per saram or limit ka daayara usne nahi paar kiya …jabki uske dil me yeh sab sunkar kitni halchul hui thi yeh toh wahi janti thi..

Manu uske kandhe pakde hue uski aankhon me aanewale bhaavo ko samjhne ki koshish me laga hua tha …

Nisha “ ab kaho bhi tum mujhper ek baar bharosa toh kar ke dekho….” Aage uski zaban se who nikal nahi paya ki tum ek bar bharosa toh karke dekho..ek baar kehkar toh dekho..main toh tumhari hi hun..sirf keh do ek baar …hmmmphh kitna pagal hai mera naadan saajan akele tanha room me ek ladki ko lagbag apni bahoon me liye khada hai phir bhi soch raha hai …are kab kahoge..?nisha ke mann me dunia bhar ki jung chal rahi thi..

Manu ne shayd ab himmat juta li thi Nisha ke kehne ke baad ..

Manu “Nisha main tumse yeh kehna chahta hun ki main ek garib ghar ka ladka hun…”

Nisha “ haaan haan ache se jaanti hun tum kon ho kya ho mujhe issse koi problem nahi hai..ok tum mere liye kya ho yeh mera dil hi janta hai ..”Nisha jo sunna chahti thi uske liye manu ko himmat de rahi thi.kyuki who ache se janti thi ki manu kitna khuddar kisam ka insaan hai …per abhi shayad who sunna kuch or chahti thi..

Manu”Nisha tum shayad samjh nahi rahi ho …main yeh kehna chahta hunki …uske baad manu ne apne pita jo ek caretaker hain or aajkal kitni mehnat kar rahe hain jinko akele 3 ya 4 logo ka kaam karna padta hai sab bata diya…..”

Nisha khamoshi se sunti rahi sunte hue use ehsaas hua ki manu wasatav me kin pareshaniyon se jujhta hoga ,,pareshani jo aam logo ki zindagi me roz aati hain per amer logo ki zindagi unhi zaroraton ki jimmewari naukaron ki hoti hai..example dekar bore nahi karunga …samjh jao yaar aaploog bhi samjh sakte hain..acha thik hai phir bhi bata deta hun varna kal ko sawal yahi hoga ki aisi kon si special problem hoti hai..are bhai sabzi lene se cylinder badlna or samaan lana ghar ka uske sath kapade bartan jahan bade logo ke ghar in sab chote mote kaamo ko naukar handle kar lete hain wahi traveling me bhi unter hota hai jahan Nisha car se aati jaati thi shuru main per manu ke sath rehne ke chakker me ab paidal yatra karti thi taaki jada time speand kar sake uske sath ..wahin manu kyuki ab school bus chutwa di gayi thi afford na karne ki wajah se …karan dono maa baap milkar kama rahe the per ghar ke kahrche ka budget or us per Sumitra ki bewakoofi ki wajah se 70 hazar ki choat bas dono maa baap kaise manage karke dono bhaiyon ko us private school me pada rahe the wahi dono jante the…manu bhi sab samjhta tha so choti moti cheezo ka laalch ko kurban kar diya karta tha …kyuki ajay bhi ab thoda bada ho gaya tha so who bhi apne bhai ko dekhkar samjhdar hone laga tha per that oh bacha hi ..kabhi – kabhi zid kar jata tha ..so manu ko jab paise milte the toh who zid ajay ki manu puri kr diya karta tha..

pareshaniyon me palnewale bache apni umar se jada mature ho jaya karte hain kyuki kismat,waqt or real world se bada koi teacher nahi hai..manu bhi apni umar ke bachon se shayad insabhi baton ke chalte thoda jaldi mature ho gaya tha..

khair Nisha ke dil me bhi rajinder ke or Sumitra ke prati izzat paida ho chuki thi..ki kaise do maa baap lagbag dunia me apne bachoon ke liye har roz dunia me ek nayi jung lada karte the …kahin na kahin uske dil me dono ko dekhne ki bhawna zor per thi khud se apne mann me boli ..”hay mere saajan toh hain hi super per saasu maa or sasur ji bhi super se upper hain..hay abhi toh shaadi bhi nahi hui or maine unhe saas or sasur bhi maan liya main bhi kitni pagal hun are pehle yeh purpose toh karen ek baar uske baad picha nahi choadungi har ek badla lungi main bhi kya kya sochne lagti hun abhi toh bada bhi hona hai tab dekhte hai per mere saajan tum sirf mere ho sirf mere…” Nisha chupchap bethi manu ki har baat dhyaan se sun rahi thi or jab manu ne apni baat khatam kit oh bhi Nisha chup hi rahi manu ka dil betha ja raha tha ki pata nahi kya jawab de Nisha..

pata nahi Nisha ke mann me kya chal raha hoga yeh swal manu ko pareshan kar raha tha.. Nisha ka reaction per manu ki saari ummid tiki hui thi kya uski eklouti dost bhi use choad degi …akela pan kya hota hai kisi tanha insaan se puchna …

are puchne ki zarorat bhi nahi padegi ek baar uski aankhon me dhyaan se dekhna uski tanhai khud se kahegi aapse



“mat puch meri tahai ka alaam kya hai ,mera dil dunia ki bheed ko kahaan janta hai ..

meri tanhai ki dastan toh sirf mera wajood or mera tanha dil hi janta hai”





manu phir akele hone ke darr me simta hua Nisha ke chahre ko dekh raha tha …Nisha jo uski baat sunne ke liye pass padi bench per beth gayi thi ..per manu wahin gum gum kar bata raha tha …so Nisha apni jagah se uthkar manu ke pass aayi or usse kuch kehti us pehle hi …



“Nisha o Nisha lunch kab ka over ho gya hai class me chalo mam ne tumko dundne ko sabhi ko laga rakha hai..” ek ladki apni saans ko kaabu me karte hue boli …

Nisha kuch keh nahi paayi kehti bhi kaise ab who sirf do nahi the who tin the kisi or ke samne apne jazbaat kaise kehti who ..manu khud me simta hua Nisha ke laboon ko dekh raha tha ..ki shayad aaj uska dost use bhi khud se juda na kar de ..

Nisha ne phir kuch kehne ki koshish ki,,,”chal jaldi puri class lagi hai tujhe dundne me or tu yahaan bekar me khadi hai,,,uska bekaar word per thoda jada zor tha jo usne laanat bhari nazar se manu ko dekte hue kaha tha …

manu ko uski who nazar ander tak chir gayi thi ..yeh wahi ladki thi jiske liye usne raat bhar jaag kar uski practical ki file ka kaam karke diya tha..per aaj wahi ladki jo kabhi uske aage piche gumma karti thi aaj “bekaar” kehkar bezzat kar rahi thi….

us bekaar ka matlab manu samjh gaya tha jabki Nisha ko uske baare me pata hi that oh who bechari kya samjhti…who jaate jaate us ladki ki taraf dekhkar aage chalne ka ishara kiya or manu ki taraf dekhkar boli “ kal lunch me mera wait karna bata dungi ok bye …”

uske baad Nisha chali gayi akela manu ko choadkar ….jahan Nisha yeh sochkar gayi thi ki kal manu ko ache se apne dil ka haal batadegi ki manu uske liye kitna khaas hai..or who akela nahi hai Nisha har kadam uske sath hai ,,

manu ko kahan pata kya soch rahi hai Nisha ..usne socha Nisha pata nahi kal kya kahegi akela khada khud se baat karte hue zor se bola (itna zor ki jitna khud se koi karta hai bhai..chillakar nahi kyuki school me hai) “kab tak khud ko or manyega Nisha sirf dost nahi hai teri …kab tak khud ko jhuthlaeyga kab tak apna pyaar chupayega usse ….haan main bhi pyaar karta hun Nisha se aaj se nahi bahut din se pather nahi hun ki koi ladki apne hath se khilaye or mujhme hulchul bhi na ho per apni aukaat kaise bhul jaaun main aab toh main sirf manu nahi hun ek naam or mila hai mujhe is dunia se “””jamadar””” kaisi dunia hai yeh maine aaj tak kuch saaf nahi kiya per is ek shabd ne mera wajood hi saaf kar diya or ab logon ki nazaron me main ek “”jamadar”””hun kaise bhala .???

tum toh Rajkumari ho Nisha kaise tumse kehdun ki haan main bhi tumhe pagaloon ki tarah chahta hun ..jab chintu jaise ko bhi tumse pyaar ho sakta hai toh main bhi insaan hun pather nahi …mere seene me bhi jazbaat hain ..per kahaan tum or kahaan main ..jiska khudka koi wazood bhi nahi hai per wada karta hun Nisha tumse ki main itni mehnat karunga ki tumko khush rakh sakun..i love u Nisha ..i love u so much per pata nahi kal tum mujhe kaise milogi …kya pehle jaisa hoga sab ya tum bhi ooron ki tarah chintu ka sath doogi…Nisha tum mat choadkar jana varna shayad pata nahi kaise khud ko sambhalunga main..i love u Nisha …I love u “ aaj manu ne is tanhai me apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya tha ..jo usne pata nahi kabse apne dil me daba rakha tha …per keh nahi sakta tha who Nisha se kyuki Nisha or uske background ka lamba anter uski zubaan per who khuddari ka tala laga deta tha jiski chaabi usne aanewale kal ko soup di thi uskal ko jisme usne socha hua tha ki mehnat ke dum per nisha ke kabil banker use haq se hassil karega ..per waqt ke dil me kya hai kon samjha hai bhala waqt ko uske liye toh dosti ke naam per Nisha ke paas hone me bhi utni Khushi thi jinti apne pyaar ke pass Nisha ko hoti thi jo manu ko nahi pata tha ,,ab kyuki nisha dost ke sath uska pyaar bhi thi ..toh manu ka darr lagna bhi apni jagah sahi tha. Kyuki ab Nisha use thukrati toh iska matlab pyaar or dosti dono se manu dur …is ek ehsaas se manu ka haal- e-dil samjh sakte hain aap bhi ..

or maze ki baat yeh hai ki Nisha bechari jis I love u ko sunne ke liye kitni duain maagti rehti thi ..ki aaj manu use ek baar sirf ek baar I love u keh de per aaj uski dua kubul hui thi manu ne ek baar nahi 4 baar haan 4 baar I love u Nisha kaha tha ..per Nisha wahan nahi thi moujood bechari wahaan jo apne pyaar ka iqraar sun paati..

per kisi or ne sun liya tha …jiske chehre per phir ek nayi shaitani chamak thi or uske hooton per darngi ke who alfaaz “meri Nisha se pyaar karega tu saale chutiya tujhe pehle hi kaha tha ki Nisha ko tujhse chin lunga ab tu dekh main kal kya karta hun..“haan yeh koi or nahi chintu hi tha jo Nisha ko dundhte hue aya tha ..per manu ko khud se baaten karte hue dekhkar or Nisha ke naam pyaar ka izhaar karte hue dekhkar rukkar uske dil ka haal jaane laga tha …manu ko nahi pata tha ki chintu wahan hai varna who ek shabd bhi na kehta …

khair chintu gusse se bhunbhunata hua chala gaya or manu bhi kuch der baad chala gya…manu agle din ke baare me or apne pyaar Nisha ke baare me sochte hue so gaya …



agla din aaya subah regular routine follow kiya or ajay ke sath school chal diya …jahaan roz ki tarah sabhi ki laanat bhari nazar uska roz ki tarah welcome karti hai …or who apni seat per jaakar beth gaya aaj Nisha chup si thi aaj manu se ,or manu ka dil is chupi se kitna bechain tha yeh toh wahi janta tha ..har seconds ke sath uske dil or dimaag me jung chid jaati thi ..per jawab Nisha ke pass hi tha …dil dimaag phir bhi lad rahe the apne apne hisaab se …

per ek azeeb baat aaj manu dekh raha tha ki Nisha jahan aaj uske sath chup thi per chintu k ek baar dekhne se Nisha muskura padti thi ..aaj dono ki chemistry hi alag sit hi …who chintu ka Nisha ko dekhna or koi ishara karna .or badle me Nisha ka sharmana or chup rehne ka ishara karna …

manu ne jab yeh notice kiya toh uske dimaaag se aawaz aayi ..”kuch toh gadbad hai manu aaj jo behuda kehnewale ko aaj Nisha itna muskura kar dekh rahi hai..maan ja tu dekh le iska ishara saaf hai yeh gayi aab teri zindagi se dur aab “

dil “abe pagal hai kya aise hi chali gayi ???”

manu ke dil dimaag phir se ladne lage the …per ghanta dono ke kuch samjh aanewala tha ..

khair launch hua or manu usi room ki taraf chal diya mare se mann se yeh sochte hue ki uska pyaar pata nahi uska hoga ya nahi per kamse kam dosti bhi na tut jaye ..

who room ke pass pucha uski zamin khisak chuki thi …use apni aakhon per yakin nahi ho raha tha samne ka nazara dekhkar ….

Haan samne ka nazara hi kuch aisa tha ,,jise dekhkar manu ko yakin hi nahi ho raha ki yeh sapna hai ya haqiqat …uske kadam room ke bahar hi ruk chuke the ..kyuki samne dekhkar ander jana shayad ab uske bas me nahi tha..

Samne Nisha apne hathon se chintu ko khana khila rahi thi,,wahi Nisha jisko manu pata nahi kabse chahne laga tha ..wahi Nisha jiske pass hone bhar se manu ka dil sukun paa leta tha ..wahi Nisha jo kal tak chintu ko behuda insaan kehti thi apne hath se hans- hanskar khila rahi thi..or chintu …

Chintu ke kya kehne aaj lagta hai janam bhar ka bhuka tha masti ke sath kha raha tha ….manu ke liye shayad ek jhataka or baaki tha ….

Achanak chintu ne Nisha ke kaan me kuch kaha jiske baad Nisha sharmate hue chintu ke gale lag gayi manu …ki Aankhen chalak chuki thi yeh sab dekhkar ..uski aatma tut chuki thi uski rahi sahi ummid khatam ho chuki thi..manu ka dil ro raha tha under se chintu ne thumsup ka ishara gate ki taraf kiya jo ek ishara tha jiska matlab manu bakhubi samjh gaya tha…use samjh aagya tha ki chintu ko pata hai ki manu wahan gate per hai …ab manu ke bardast ke bahar ho chala khud ke pyaar ko chintu ke gale lage hue dekhkar manu ke kadam wapas mud chuke the …jo jaakar ruke school ki chat (roof)per jahan who dil kholkar aansoo bhata gaya itna roya ki ek baar ko shayad asmaan ko bhi dil kiya ki ro de per real life hai yahan kisi ke rone se filmo ki tarah baarish nahi hua karti so samjh jao khud aap loog smart hain or rona bhi banta hai bhai uska…kyuki aaj uske pyaar ke sath uski ek louti dost shayad use tanha kar chuki thi …aaj kismat or Nafrat ne manu ke sath kaisa Mazak kiya tha are kal hi toh usne apna pyaar Nisha ke liye apni zubaan se kubul kiya tha ..or aaj Kismat or Nafrat ne uska Pyaar chin liya tha ..





Aisa kya hua tha ki Nisha chintu ko apne hath se khana khila rahi thi …or uske gale lagi hui thi ….kya manu ne jo dekha who sahi tha kya Nisha use such much tanha kar chuki thi ….kya chintu jeet gaya tha …kya manu humesha humesha ke liye tanha ho gya tha …kya manu ki aakhone ne sahi dekha tha ya yeh koi plan tha chintu ka ..ya Nisha ne chintu ko chun liya tha …….iska jawab kismat ke ya time ke hath hai….:hint:

Bahut he khubsurati kai saath likha huya update.
 

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agar aap past aur present aur future ek saath story me add karte hai to story samajh me nahi aayegi ....abhi tak jaise chal raha hai ( bachpan ki yaade ) wo hi chalne do ...me 5 ya 6 update pehle ye kehne wala tha ki past ( bachpan ) aur present ( jawani ) to ek sath dikhao ,,,,par jis tarah se story chal rahi hai mix maja nahi aayega ....

nisha aur maa new zealand jaanewale hai aur budha sharab aur sex kar raha hai ye bachpan me hi rakho ....

kyunki agar manu ka future abhi pata chala to maja nahi aayega aur kahani bekaar lagegi ....
ye maine isliye kaha kyunki kuch reader ke comment padhe aur aapke reply bhi ....


thanks bro....

aapka smart brain kaabil e taarif hai ....

aapne kaha ki past present or future ek saath story me add karta hun toh samajh nahi aayegi ...

bhai aap such me kamaal hain ....bhai har jagah ek ek word ko soch kar likhta hun haan manta hun speed se typing karne me or auto-space ke chalte kayi jagah space or word manu ke ki jagah man uke ho jata hoga ...per kahin bhi ek bhi jagah main koi past present ya future daal kar kisi ko koi confusion create nahi kiya ....

haan sabne apne hisaab se kaha ki shyaad ........dhyaan rahe unka word shayad hai ,,,,,ki shayad yeh present ka manu hai ...

per maine kisi ko bhi roka nahi na koi baat kahi kyuki sabka suggestion sunna or sath me criticism ko bhi dekhna acha lagta hai mujhe ...


per dost aapka khud se maan lena ki kahani me ek sath past present or future chalega bahut loogo ka dimaag hila dega ...

aisa na maine abhi kiya hai na aage hoga haan aap apne hisaab se assume kar sakte hain aage kya hoga ...per kaha per main yeh kaha ki yeh present ka manu hai ya yeh past ka manu hai ....

dost kisi comment me bhi nahi kaha hoga ...abhi bhi apne kaam or update dono sath me maintain kar raha hun ...
aapka comment pada toh rok nahi saka ki kahin koi bhi misconception bane so ...yeh karna pada ....

verna abhi bhi keh deta keep guesses..per nahi sirf character ko assume karne ko kaha tha aapne toh pura kahani ka conception hi alag change kar diya ...bhai

khair koi baat nahi kahani me abhi sirf is naye character ko guess karo or nahi kar paate toh update me pata chal jayega ...bhai ...per such me

kamaal ke smart ho aap ....maana padega kahan tak soch liya aapne ...or ise galat na lena kahani ka plot change na ho isliye clear karna pada ...verna aage jaakar miscommunication hota sabhi ko ...

so thanks 4 commenting ...

acha laga comment padkar sabhi ne acha acha socha very nice of u ...thanks dear readers u all are awesome...
 

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manu ko school me nisha se baat karni thi jab wo chintu ko khana khila rahi thi ....aur jab chintu ko wo ghatiya maanti hai to uske saath lunch karne kyu gayi ,manu ko saath kyi nahi leke gayi , chintu se ishaaro me baat kyu kar rahi thi ????

sabse jyada galti nisha ki hai ....aur manu uske ghar gaya to usse poochha kyu nahi ki wo chintu ke saath aisa behave kyi kar rahi thi ???..

aakhri faisla manu ka sahi tha ki nisha kahi aur jaaye .....par use nisha se clarify karna chahiye tha ....


thanks bro....

aapne sahi kaha ki nisha ko manu se baat karni chahiye thi per nisha bhi hai toh bachi hi usne bhabhi suna or socha ki shayad chintu se aaage jakar koi help mile so kahin na kahin use bhai ki tarah treat kiya ...or isharo me bat ka matlab tha ...sirf chintu jab bhi use ishara karta manu ke naam ka bhabhi ki tarah (jo nisha ki nazar me tha chintu ka toh plan tha )

nisha ki galti yeh thi ki usne us samay jo time usne manu ko diya tha usme usne manu se baat nahi ...

or manu kya faisla leta bhala use toh nisha or chintu ke siva kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha ...

kehte hain na gusse me insaan dimaag se kam gusse se jada sochta hai ...aage samjh jao manu ne kya kiya aapke samne hai ...

thanks for reading & staying with us...
 

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Update 53






Bachpan ki Yaadain





Aisa kya hua tha ki Nisha chintu ko apne hath se khana khila rahi thi …or uske gale lagi hui thi ….kya manu ne jo dekha who sahi tha kya Nisha use such much tanha kar chuki thi ….kya chintu jeet gaya tha …kya manu humesha humesha ke liye tanha ho gya tha …kya manu ki aakhone ne sahi dekha tha ya yeh koi plan tha chintu ka ..ya Nisha ne chintu ko chun liya tha …….iska jawab kismat ke ya time ke hath hai….




Ab aage......





Nisha ne aisa kyu kiya ?? yeh who sawal tha jiske chalte aaj manu ka dil or dimaag dunia ke har dard ko ek sath mehsoos kar raha tha…use abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha ki Nisha ko usne chintu ke karib itna karib dekha hai ..


Jis chintu ko Nisha “behuda insaan “ kaha karti thi aaj usi insaan ko apne hath se khlana manu ke dil ka kya haal kar raha tha yeh toh school ki who chat hi janti thi jahan uske garam farz per manu ke ansoo jama the ya who diwaar jab manu rote rote kamzor hua toh us diwar ka sahara lekar manu sirf apne dil ke dard ko bahane me laga hua tha …dard jo use mila tha Nisha se jo uska shayad pehla pyaar tha(hosh or dhyaan me) who pyaar jiska karib hona insaan ko kitna sukun deta hai …iska jawab toh kisi pyaar karnewale se hi aap jaan sakte hain.. ya who jo pyaar ko ache se samjhte hain..



Kisi ke liye sath hona pyaar hai ,,kisi ke liye dosti pyaar hai kisi ke liye ,,apne pyaar ko dur se bas chand ghadi dekhlena pyaar hai , ya kisi ko apne pyaar ko uske khushnuma chahre per uski mukurahat hi pyaar hai..



(jada bore nahi karunga varna comment me phir class lag jayegi…ki aap kuch bhi ulta likh dete ho ..are bhai writer apni dunia apni aankhon ya apni kalpana se hi toh aap tak pahunchata hai …waise bhi main aap tak apni baat rakhta hun..usme sahi ya galat dundna aapka kaam hai.)




Wahi pyaar jiske liye manu ne na jane kitne sapne saja liye the jo insaan is pyaar ko jaan ne ke baad bhi aage jaakar kuch banker apne pyaar ko hasil karna chahta tha aaj uska who sapna bhi tut chuka tha …



“kisi gair ki bahoon me hain who,kuch is tarah jaise kabhi hum the hi na unke ..

Mil toh jati hai subah or raat bhi ek jagah agar chahat suchi dilo ki “



“janta hun nahi the hum tumahre pehle bhi ,

Per is dil ko kaise samjhun jisme aaj bhi tum ho “




Saaare dard manu ke seene me jaise aaj simat aaye the ….pata nahi kab tak rota raha akela or jaise Nisha ko sab dunte hue fir rahe the kal per aaj kisi ne jaise manu ko dundne ki koshish nahi ki …jaise sabko uske hone na hone se koi fark padta hi na ho…jab khud ro ro kar uska dil thoda halka hua toh utha khud ko lagbag ghasit te hue apni class me gaya jahan mam ne pucha “kahan se aa rahe ho ??”


Manu kya jawab deta …uske jawab kahin na kahin kho se gaye the chupchap apni seat per chala gaya mam ne bhi koi sawal nahi kiya kyoki ab manu se koi jada baat nahi kiya karta tha..chalte hue manu aage se guzra uske thik samne chintu betha hua tha jo aaj kuch alag hi muskurahat ke sath betha hua tha …aaj kahin na kahin manu ko chintu se koi gussa nahi tha ,,,hota bhi kahan se is samay use khud ka hosh tak nahi tha ….uske jehan me sirf Nisha hi ghum rahi thi usne dekha Nisha ki seat ki taraf jisper Nisha mujood nahi thi…jisper manu ko thoda hairat bhi hua per us hairat ko shanti mili do ladkiyon ki baat sunkar “ek yeh pagal sa bana hua gum raha hai kabhkhat marta bhi kyu nahi …pata nahi kab tak jehlna hoga ise …acha sun tujhe pata hai Nisha kahan gayi…??”



Dusri ladki “haa uske ghar se koi aaya tha ki uske chote mama jo videsh me hain unke yahan se uska call aya tha ki uske nana ki tabiyat bahut kharab hai..so koi aya or Nisha ko le gaya ”


Manu koi badi fikara hui ki Nisha aise chali gayi fir turant hi uske samne Nisha chintu ke gale lage hue gumne lagi who tasver uske mann or dimaag me jaise chap si gayi thi aaj who itne dard me tha jiske chalte shayad pehli baar who nita mam (apni muhboli maa ) ke pass bhi nahi gaya tha ..nita mam ko aaj aise achanak se manu ke na aane se uski chinta ho chali thi so unhone manu ka intzar kiya per manu ko khud apna hosh hota toh kuch karta na . toh nita mam ne peon ko kehkar manu ko bulaya …peon ne class me aakar manu ko nita mam ne bulaya hai bolkar use sath le gaya ..nita mam ne jab manu ko pass bulaya jahan unko manu me kuch bahut alag sa laga per peon samne tha toh unhone peon ko wapas behj diya ..manu unke samne shant chup or alag si dunia me khoya hua tha …uski sozzi hui aakhen is baat ki gawahi cheekh cheekh kar de rahi thi ki manu bahut roya hai …


Nita mam ko kisi anjane problem ki ashanka hui kehte hain ma sirf ma hoti hai jiske paas shayad six senses hoti hai ki beta dukh me hai waise hi nita mam ko bhi pata lag gya …”manu mere bache kya ab main itni parai ho gayi hun kit u akele ro sakta hai per apna dard apni is badnaseeb maa se share nahi kar sakta kya such me itna hi ahemiyat rakhti hun teri nazar me main , yahi izzat hai teri is maa ke liye …ki main tera dard tak sath na baant paun??


Manu ne jab yeh suna toh uski rahi sahi himmat phir se tut gayi or uski aanhon se aanson ne phir baghawat kardi …per is baar who rote hue nita mam yani apni maa ke god me apna sar rakhkar rone laga nita mam ne bhi pehle use rone diya taki shayad uska dil halka ho jaye …manu rota raha kuch der baad jab uska dil thoda sa halka hua toh usne apni nazarer utha kar upper nita mam ki tarf dekha or dono apne dono hath joadkar”maa mere dil main aapke liye kitna pyaar or kitna samman hai yeh toh sirf mera dil de sakta hai ya who jo yeh janta hai ki main kitna such keh raha hun ??per maa such mano toh mere liye maa ka matlab mera wajood hai or koi apne wajood ko jaise nakar nahi sakta waise hi main aapko apne se alag nahi manta “


Nita mam” who toh main janti hun mere bache per..”


Manu “ maa plz aage aap kuch na puchna main aapko nahi bata sakta aapko kya kisi ko nahi ..or kasam khake kehta hun such me maa agar kehne layak hoga toh sabse pehle aapko bata deta …plz maa aap mujhe galat na samjhna bas abhi ke liye itna samjh lo kuch hai jo mujh me tut gya hai khud se kuch chuuta (lost) sa mehsoos kar raha hun…aap aage kuch na puchna aapko meri kasam ..”


Nita mam pyaar se uske sar per hath firate hue“ mere pyaare bache, mere ladle ,,acha thik hai jab tune kasam de di hai toh nahi puchungi per tune socha hai ki tere rone ka is maa per kya asar hoga …kya teri yeh maa apne bache ko rote hue dek sakegi kya bardast kar sakegi tere yeh aanson jo ek maa ka kaleza chalni kar dete hai …tune kaha ki tujhse kuch chuut raha hai kuch hai jo tujme tut gaya hai toh mere bache jo tut gya use joad le …jo chuut gya ya toh use choadkar jo tere pass jo tere sath hai usper dhyaan de …zindagi me aage badna rone se kahin zada zarori hai …??”


Is baat se manu ke aanso achnak se ruk gaye nita mam ne use dunia ka who paath pada diya tha ki jo chuut gya usper ro rahe ho jabki who toh apna tha bhi nahi jo apana hai uski socho aane wale kal ki socho aage bado ..or zindagi me apne sapne pure karo ..rote rehna har cheez ka hal nahi hai ,,


Manu ki yeh baat ache se samjh aa gyi thi usne foran apne aansoon puche or jis zamen per beth kar nita mam ki god me sar rakhkar roraha tha wahan se utha khada hua ..or nita mam ke gale lagkar unke hathon ko chumkar bola “sorry maa maine aapka dil dukahya uske liye mujhe maaf kardo aapne sahi kaha ki jo mera than ahi usper ansoo bahana bekar hai …jo mera hai uski kadra karna jada zarori hai …kyu hai na..??”

Nita mam Khushi se ki manu phir se uth khada hua hai normal insaan ki tarah “ haan mere bache,beta tum samjhdar ho jo yeh baat itni jaldi samjh gaye …uski kadra karo abhi jo tumhare pass hai …or aage ka socho…”

Manu “toh thik hai maa ab pehle aapki kadra karunga sabse pehle..”

Nita mam “matlab “

Manu nita mam ke mote mote gol gol gallon per kiss karta hai jisper nita mam bhi hasne lag jati hain or uske sar per tapli marke “aise kaise matlab kuch bhi..”

Manu “lagta hai abhi kam kadra ki hai “or phir se papi le leta hai jisper mam bhi use marne ko doudti hainyeh bolkar ki “maa ki papi leta hai besharam “

Dono office me khub bhag doud maja dalte hai ..or apne apne me dono enjoy karte hai ..manu ander se dard me jaror tha per kahin na kahin nita mam ne use ache se samjha diya tha ki jo humare pass hain us sabhi ki kadra bhi jarori hai ,,,

Khair dono kuch der me normal ho gye the ..uske baad dono ne chain se khana sath me khaya …or apne apne kaam per lag gaye .

Nita mam jahan aaj ek tarf khush thi ki manu ne rote hue kaise unko thamkar apnapan jataya tha, ,,wahin kahin na kahin who soch bhi rahi thi ki aisa kya hua ki manu jaisa insaan achanak se tuta hua mehsoos karne laga hai..or kyuki manu beshaq unhe maa jaise pyaar karta tha per unko kabhi bhi apna dard nahi bataya karta tha ..verna jis class me who itna jalil ho raha tha ..jahan usko roz naya torture milta tha ..kya who ek baar bhi nita mam se kehta toh nita mam ki sirf ek awaz per unsabhi ki akal sahi jagah per aa jati ..per manu nahi chahta tha ki use kisi bhi tarah se nita mam se yeh sab kehna pade ..or unka kisi bhi tarah se us class ke samne koi involvement ho..so who nita mam se yeh sab nahi bataya karta tha..

Ek taraf unhe is baat ki Khushi bhi thi ki kaise unhone kaise apne bete ko itni jaldi na keval chup karya balki kahin na kahin jahan who khud ko fasa hua mehsoos kar raha tha wahan nikal bhi liya use…



Khair udhar aaj jab manu ka school over hua toh chintu manu ke pass se nikal “kyu be chutiye bada uchalta hai na ab dekhna kya karta hun aage dekhta ja ..”

Manu ek baar toh gusse se bhar gaya per phir use laga ki jab Nisha ne hi use chun liya toh main bhala hota kon hun bina wajah ulajhnewala.

Who chup chap apne raste chal diya ghar aaya or apne homework ko finish kiya uske baad ajay ka kaam matlab uska homework me help kiya ..or uske baad pushpi ke sath tution or phir baba ke yahan training uske baat jab who aaj Bhatnagar ke paas gaya toh aadat ke mutabik Bhatnagar ke pair chue jisper ab Bhatnagar ne bhi use pyaar se aashirwad diya or kyuki ki ab dono me achi kahasi achi banne lagi thi jisper dono apne kaam me lag gaye …abhi dono kuch karte usi bich ashok wahan aaya thoda pareshaan tha ..jisper Bhatnagar ne pucha bhi …jisper usne manu ki taraf dekhkar kaha”yaar ek problem hai …Nisha ke nana ki tabiyat thik nahi hai or kyuki ab manju or Nisha se milna chahte hain.toh dono ko behjna hoga per Nisha zid per adi hui hai ki bas milkar aajayegi …yaar unki condition critical hai ..kuch kehna mushkil hai kya karun main kuch samjh nahi aa raha ..hai ??”

Bhatnagar “toh sir kya soch rakha hai aapne ..”

Ashok “yaar socha toh kuch khass hai nahi per unki condition abhi kya hai or aage kya hogi kehna mushkil hai or aise main Nisha ka is tarah gussa meri samjh se pare hai …haan itna toh pakka lagta hai ..ki kai mahine lag sakte hain..tab Nisha ki education ka kya hoga isko lekar bhi tension hai…samjh nahi aa raha kya karun..”

Bhatnagar”phir problem kya hai Nisha ko wahin ke school me admission karwa do uska aage ka future bhi acha ho jayega …”

Ashok manu ki taraf dekhte hue jaise manu ke under jhankana chahta ho.”yaar behjun toh tab jab who baat mane meri..sunti hi kahan hai uska future bhi dekhna hai per sunti kahan hai ..meri..??”

Bhatnagar “toh usme problem kahan hai manu uska friend hai who baat kar lega Nisha se ..kyu manu karoge na itna sa kaam ..?”manu kya jawab deta chup chap usne haan main sir hila diya..

Ashok “such beta agar aisa hai toh tumne such me mere sar se bahut bada bojh uthaar diya ..tum ek kaam karo abhi driver ke sath chle jao or use samjhao mujhe lagta hai ki tumhari baat uski samjh me aa jayegi or agar who maani toh raat ko hi nikalna hoga sabhi ko..”

Manu ne jab suna ki aaj raat ko hi Nisha ko jaana hoga ek baar ko uske paav kaamp gaye ki pyaar ke abhi jaane ka gum bhi thik se nahi mana paya tha sath me judai bhi mil gayi …chalo shyad yahi kismat hai …kamse kam chintu jaise ghatiya insaan se toh safe rahegi ..or us chintu ko bhi Nisha ke naam per nicha dikhane ko nahi milega ..”insab sochon me manu Nisha keg har puch gaya ashok ki gadi me ..

Under gaya toh har who cheez waise hi thi jaise pehle hua karti thi ..per aaj manu ko yahan rakhi har cheez se eka lag si bechaini ho rahi thi…kahin na kahin who Nisha ki bewafai abhi tak pacha nahi pa raha tha..

Khair under gaya jahan manju ready ho rahi thi …per Nisha wahin gusse me bethi thi…

Nisha ne manu ko dekha toh uthi or manu ke pass mukurate hue chali aayi..

Manu hairat se dekh raha tha ki kaise abhi thodi der pehle jo chintu ki bahoon me thi phir se muskura kar usse mil rahi thi ..kahin na kahin use ander se gussa sa aane laga tha …uski bewafai per …

Nisha “are tum achanak se kaise yahaan per is time toh tum office me hote ho na …??”

Manu chup tha aaj wahi nisha jiski awaz sunkar kabhi manu ka dil machal jaya karta tha aaj uski bewafai per sulag raha tha …kahin na kahin use khud per gussa sa aane laga ki usne haan kaha hi kyu ..or who kyu Nisha se baat karne aaya …

Manju “aao beta ab tum hi ise samjhao ki iske nana ki tabiyat thik nahi hai or yah jaane se mana kar rahi hai ..meri toh sunti nahi tum hi kehdo shyaad tumhari baat maanle …”or side se nazar bachakar Nisha ko aankh maar di …jisko manu na dekh paya per Nisha is per muskura padi..manu kahin na kahin khud ko aaj gusse ki kaid me mehsoos kar raha tha…pata nahi use gussa kyu aaraha tha ...per jab bhi Nisha ko dekhta use who scene yaad aa jata ki chintu or Nisha ….”bas bahut hua jo kaam karna hai karunga or jaldi nikal jaunga yahan se varna aaj pata nahi kya ho jaye”

Manju “ tum dono baat karo main apne bete ke liye chai lati hun beta im so sorry abhi main thodi jada pareshaan hun tum Nisha ke sath betho main aati hun”manju ne jate hue phir se Nisha ko ankh maar deti or thums up ka sign diya use taki or time spend kar sake Nisha manu ke sath …jahan aaj manju apne pita ki tabiyat ko sunkar pareshaan thi per who ache se janti thi itna dur hone ki wajah se chahe kitna bhi pareshan ho le per badalna toh tha nahi per yahan ek taraf apne baap ki tabiyat ko uskne apne ander dafan sa kar liya tha or Nisha ko approach karne me lagi hui thi..

Ab Nisha or manu akele the manu koshish me laga hua tha ki nisha ka chahra kam se kam dekh sake …per Nisha ek tak use dekhne me lagi thi …dono me se koi kuch nahi bol raha tha …jahan Nisha sirf muskurakar manu ko dekh rahi thi wahin manu jab bhi uski muskurahat dekhta toh uska gussa or bad jata …jab yeh muskurahat uske bardast ke bahar ho gayi toh who utha or bahar ki tarf jahaan unka bada sa lawn tha jane laga Nisha bhi uske piche jaane lagi…

Manu “Nisha main tumse kuch puchun sach kahogi plz..”manu ne lagbag zaldi se himmat karke pucha..

Nisha “tumko mujhse aise puchne ke liye izazat ki kabse zarorat padne lagi..jo puchna hai puch sakte ho ??”

Manu “Nisha tumhare nana ki tabiyat thik nahi hai or tum jaane ko mana kar rahi ho janti ho tumhari wajah se tumahri mummy bhi nahi ja payengi …kya tum apni mummy ko apne nana ko dekhne me help nahi kar sakti ho “

Nisha”per agar main wahan gayi toh pata nahi kitne din lagenge or kya pata kitna time rukna padega wahaan ab main kar hi kya sakti hun…”

Manu “kar sakti ho tum sab kar sakti ho apne nana ko dekh bhi sakti ho or apni mummy ko bhi apne nana se milwane me help kar sakti ho ..”

Kaise “?? Nisha

Manu “wahin jakar wahan ruk kar or wahin padkar ..”

Nisha “nahi main nahi reh sakti wahan or padai toh wahan bilkul nahi …mere bas me nahi hai …”

Manu “ kya main dost ke naate tumse itna bhi nahi maang sakta agar tum mujhe apna manti ho toh tum ab aage koi behas nahi karogi tum na sirf wahan jaogi balki wahin padogi bhi …tumahra future ban ajeyga wahan…”

Nisha”tumne yeh kaise keh diya ki mera future sirf wahin ho sakta hai kya pata mera future mujhe yahan dikhta ho toh ???”manu ko dekhte hue …

Manu mann me “haan ab toh future yahin dikehga na tumhe us chintu ke pass …nisha kya hai usme aise jo tum jaisi achi ladki uske jaal me fas gayi hai…nahi main yeh nahi hone dunga….”

Manu “nisha dekhko tumko meri kasam tum ab koi faltu baat mat socho or wahan jao or wahin ache se padna or apna khayal rakhna ab or baat nahi or agar meri kasam ke kuch mayene ho toh maan lena or wahin rehna …main ab chalta hun..” manu ne jabse yeh suna tha ki Nisha apna future yahan dekh rahi hai use laga chintu me dekh rahi hai uske liye Nisha ke pass khada hona bhi mushkil ho gaya ..woh apni kasam dekar wahan bina aage kuch bole nikal aaya …

Jahan manju apne hath me chai ka cup liye aayi thi ..usne lawn me dekha jahan Nisha akeli khadi thi usne pucha “manu kahan hai “Nisha ke kandhe per usne apna hath rakha toh uske hath se chai ka cup zamin per chutkar gir gya.uska dil kaamp sa gya samne Nisha ki Aankhen aasoonon se tar thi …

Manju”kya hua meri bachi or manu kahan hai ..”

Nisha “mummy who chale gaye or jaate jaate kasam dekar gaye hain ki main aapke sath nana ke pass New Zealand chali jaun ..or wahin padai bhi karun …or kehte hain ki agar unki kasam ka koi mayena ho toh maan lun …are unka sirf keh dena mere liye us order saman hai jise pura karne ke liye main kuch bhi kar jaun..per ek baar toh mujhse thik se milkar jate who…?”

Manju “na beti tu khud soch tut oh use pyaar karti hai ..per uske liye chahe tu sirf dost ho per usne jab kaha hoga toh kya usne tujhe ek baar bhi dekha ???”

Nisha rote hue” nahi maa aaj ek baar bhi nahi dekha thik se mujhe”

Manju” na meri bachi ro mat tu soch kahin na kahin use bhi toh apni dost se bichadne ka gum hoga na toh tu ek baar uske dil ka bhi toh soch ..usne kitni himmat ki hogi ki tujhe usne yeh kaha hoga ..ek baar uska tyaag bhi dekh khud ki dosti usne laga di hai daav per ..or jab laga hoga ki shyaad tu asani se na mane toh apni kasam dedi hogi..sochkar dekhna is baare me bhi kya uski kasam nahi manegi babu”

Nisha “maa unki kasam kaise nahi manugi per ek baar mujhse meri marzi bhi puch lete na khair koi baat nahi jab unhone kaha hai toh unki baat Nisha puri na kare aisa ho nahi sakta ..per maa unse duri kaise sahungi me ..”Nisha ne ek nischay ke sath apne aanso puchte hue kaha ..

Manju “beta who sab tu mujhper choad de who sab baad me dekhenge ..abhi tyaari kar chal acha aaj chintu kyu nahi aaya..”

Nisha”maa aaj pata hai usne school me kya kaha ..??”

Manju “ dekh beta manu ki baat alag hai ,,per main sach kehdeti hun aaj mujhe us chintu ke bache ke laachan thik nahi lagte ,,kuch azib sa gadbad insaan lagta hai who mujhe..??”

Nisha “are mummy mujhe bhi pehle who azeeb lagta tha …or pata hai main khud use behuda insaan kehti thi..”

Manju “toh phir”

Nisha “mummy aaj subah jab main school gayi toh usne mujhe bulaya or pucha kya main manu se pyaar karti hunt oh mere pairon ke niche se zamin khisk gayi …maine socha ki isko kya jawab dun toh usne mujhe achnak se Bhabhi kehna shuru kar diya or bola ki ab manu uske bhai saman hai toh main bhi uski bhabhi lagi na kasam se saram se gad gayi thi main …us pal “

Manju “phir “

Nisha “phir lunch ke time usne kaha ek Bhabhi ke haq se kya main apne laxman saman dever ko apne hath se khila nahi sakti kya?? Mujhe ek bhai saman insaan yeh kahe or me na kar dun main use apna bhai samjhkar use apne hath se khilaya or usne kaha ki ek baar apne devar ko apna bhai maankar ek baar who hug chahta tha …so main bhi bhai maankar use gale laga liya..mummy who itna bura nahi hai. Jitna hum use sajhte hain…”

Manju “dekh ek baat kahungi abhi bhi tu us se dur rehna uski Aankhen thik nahi lagti mujhe …ab dur kya rehna ab toh waise bhi permanent dur ho gayi ab tu ….”

Nisha ki jaise dukhti rag per hath rakh diya tha manju ne ..uski dur wali baat per phir aanso chalak aaye uske ..

Manju “beta kab tak royegi ek baar uske baare me or aapni maa ke baare me bhi soch jiska baap bimaar hai per nawasi ko nana se jada apne future husband ki fikar hai ..(is baat per rote hue bhi Nisha muskura padi)”

Khair dono maa beti tyaar hui or tyaari me lag gayi apni apni..nisha ke nana uske chote mama ke sath raha karte the …uski nani ab dunia me nahi thi ..or unka bada beta gaav me apni family ke sath raha karta tha jiski wahin per govt job thi..per chota beta New Zealand me tha jisne wahi ki local girl se shadi ki thi or jab Nisha ke nana ko ek baar apne pote ko dekhne ka dil kiya toh who chal diye New Zealand jahan unka dil apne pote or nayi bahu ke sath aisa laga ki wahin ke hokar reh gaye or ab unki tabiyat ke chalte Nisha or manju se milne ki unki icha thi kyuki pata nahi kab unka time aaj jaye aisa unka manna tha ..so jane se pehle who ek baar Nisha ko or apni beti ko dekhna chahte the..

Khair Nisha or manju ke chalne ka time hua toh Nisha airport per baar bar dekh rahi thi uski aankhen apne pyaar manu ko dekh rahi thi ..per manu hota toh aata jisper uski Aankhen manu ke na aane per chalak aayi…

Jisper manju ne use mante hue kaha “beta kitna royegi tu …khud soch usper kya bit rahi hogi who bhi toh khud se tujhe dur kar raha hai ….maine uski aakhone me tere liye parvah dekhi hai …or main itne din me use agar sahi samjhi hun toh who bhi teri tarah aansoon baha raha hoga..ab toh maan ja jab time aaye toh saara badla le lena usse main kuch nahi khaungi..”

Jisper Nisha ko thodi himmat mili ki manu ko uski parvah hai ..phir usne apne aanso puche or jamin se hath lagakar use sar per laga kar kaha” aap jahan bhi hain khush rahiyega aapki baat meri liye sab kuch hai duri hume alag nahi kar sakti jab bhi wapas aaungi aapse apni mohbbat ka saara bayaaz vasool kar lungi is zamin ko chukar aapke pyaar ko sakhshi maan kar kasam khati hun jab bhi Nisha wapas loutegi humesha humesha ke liye aapki hogi yeh kasam hai mujhe..is dharti ki Maanav hi Nisha ka pati hoga uske siva koi nahi kasam hai mujhse is mitti ki ”

Manju”mitti ki kasam kuch jada filmi nahi ho gya meri amma hum airport per hain toh tujhe kahan se isme mitti nazar aa rahi hai jiski kasam kha rahi or who itni badi kuch toh sharam kar maa sath me hai nana ko dekhne ja rahi hai or baat kar rahi hai apne hone wale husband ki pata nahi sharam saari bech di hai is ladki ne ..”manju ne Mazak me Nisha ko chedte hue kaha

Nisha “mummy plz don’t tease me …varna phir se himmat tut jayegi meri or ro padungi main …ap janti ho kya bit rahi hai mujhper phir bhi..”

Manju “acha chal tere papa bhi anewale honge …” itna kaha hi tha ki samne se ashok aata nazar aaya or uske baad tino ne flight pakdi or chal diye new Zealand ki ooor.



Manu apne ghar ki chat per usi samay akela andhere me hath me koi pic thi uske …

Manu”pagalo ki tarah pyaar kiya tumse per mila kya bewafai pata nahi kya tumse gussa hona bhi chaun toh gussa nahi ho sakta per tumhari is baat ko us bewafai ko kaise bhul sakta hun main..per aaj tumko khud se dur jaate dekhna bhi bardast nahi ho raha kya karun kuch samjh nahi ata …or us chintu ke sath ..nahi Nisha yeh mujhe bardast nahi hai ki mera pyaar kisi or ki baahon me ho or who mere liye Nafrat rakhnewala chintu thu hai manu tujhpe jo pyaar me aansu bahye tu laanat hai tujhper manu jo kisi bewafa ke liye teri ankhon se ek bund bhi aansoo nikal toh ..Nisha aajke baad manu ke muh per naam bhi nahi hoga tumhara….aaj abhi isi waqt se bhul jaunga tumhe Nisha humesha humesha ke liye. kasam hai mujhe .or iske sath hi usne bhi ek kasam le li or Nisha ki who pic apne hathon se faadkar chat per chalne wali hawa me sirf apne hath khole jisme Nisha ki tasveer or uski har yaad ko manu ne hawa or samay ke hawale kar diya tha..

Hawa ka tez jhonka Nisha ki har yaad or un tasveer ke tukado ko manu ke haathon se or dil se laker ud chala tha …kasam dono ne hi khayi thi ek ne aapna banana ki kasam toh ek ne humesha ke liye bhul jane ki kasam…ab kiski kasam puri honi thi yeh toh waqt hi janta hai ya dono ki kismat …:hint:







Wahin kisi bade se aalishaan bangle me ek anjaan shaks chair per betha tha…kisi or hi dunia me gum tha uske kamre ki saari light band thi…us room me ek alag si shanti thi jaise us insaan ko bhi us shanti ke sath apna talluq ho per. Achnak se ek or insaan ne us room ki light on ki or apni awaz se us shanti os tanhai ko rok diya “malik woh madam aa gayi hai aapka wait kar rahi hain..”



Who insaan khada hua uska pura sharir kisi ache pehlwano se bhi acha or ek ache athlete ke jaise tha uski age koi 36 ke aas pass hogi …uske chahre se koi bhi bata sakta tha ki yeh kisi unche khandaan ka raeesi me pala bada insaan hoga uske chahre ki chamak ke sath uski kad kaathi bhi achi khaasi thi uski height 6’ puri thi uski chest koi 52 ke aas pass hogi uske biceps 25 ke aas pass or waist line uski koi 36 hogi toh aap ache se imagine kar sakte hain kaise lagta hoga …


Khair who utha or chalta hua us dusre insaan ke paas aaya .chup chap wahan gaya jahan who lady uska intzaar kar rahi thi…


Us lady ne us aadmi ke aate hi bade adab se jukkar use apna shistachar dikhya jise us admi ne sir jhukakar kubul kiya ..


Uske baad us aadmi ne phiche dekha jahan uska who naukar hath me ek trolley ko dhakelta hua laaraha tha jisper 2 scotch or 1 whiskey ki bottle rakhi thi…jise us lady ne turant apne hath me le liya or us naukar or bahar jane ka ishara kiya …or us trolly ko dhakelte hue room me le aayi jisme ek chair per betha who admi apne me khoya hua tha …usne trolly uske paas laga di jiski awaz se use achanak se dhyaan aaya or who us trolly per rakhi scotch ki bottal uthakar siddha muh se laga leta hai or siddha apne halak me uttarne laga tha …

jaise use kadwi sharaab me apne dard ko khatam kar dena chahta ho who aurat sirf pass khadi chupchap usko yeh karte hue dekh rahi thi …jiski aankhon se bhi kuch bunde nikal chuki thi uske is traha se kud ko dard dete hue …per uski chupi nahi tuti…usne chupchap apni un bundoon ko apne rummal se chori se puch liya ..us admi ka dard shyaad itna zada hoga ki jisme usse sharab ki kadwahat kam lag rahi hogi ya use iski aadat hogi…

uske halak se lagi botal ab khatam ho chuki thi usne bottal ko apne hotoon se alag kiya or us aurat ko dekha us aurat ko dekhkar usne apni aakhonse ishara kiya jiske baad who aurat ek or room jo shayad bedroom hoga kisi ka usme chaldi who aadmi bhi ladkhadata hua chal diya …jahan who aurat bed ke ek side me khadi thi shyad us aadmi ke itnzaar me …

Us aadmi ne ek baar uske hasin jism ko ek nzar dekha us aurat ka jism kisi kayamat se kam nahi tha …uski umar koi 28 ke aas paas hogi or uska who Katila jism dekhkar koi murda bhi apna land pakad kar kahe “ek baar bas land ko chut ka yeh hasin jam mil jaye toh maut bhi mazoor ho..”

Uski height koi 5’ 9’’ ke ass pass hogi …iska matlab achi khashi lambi hogi …or uska figure koi 36d , 28, 38 ke ass pass hoga matlab uski kamar kisi hasin bal khati mod ke jaise thi …

Us admi ne us aurat ke pass aakar uske jism ko chua or us aurat ko us chuan se ek alag hi mardana maza mila jissse uske muh se halki sssiki nikal gayi…issssssshaaa !!!

Jiske baad who aadmi or wild ho gaya or usne us aurat ki dono chuchiyon ko apne dono hathon se thaam kar jor se bhinch dala jisme us aurat ko beinteha dard hua …per uske muh se koi awaz abhi na nikali …per uski annkhon ka dard dekhkar us aadmi ko shayad thoda reham aa gaya hoga jo usne thoda aaram se chuchiyaan dabano shuru kardin uske baad toh jaise us aurat ka haal badal gaya …

us ka maza uske muh se nikalne wali har siski issssssshaaaaa!!!! Immmmmaahaaaaa!!!!!.............hayyyyy!!!!!!!!!! issssssssshhhh!

Jaisi awazon se samjh sakte hain…uske nipple sakht ho chale the ….uski chut me aab who mithi hulchul mach gayi thi ….jiska matlab tha ….ki uski chudai ki ichaa or jada bad chuki thi sharir ka temperature itna bad gaya tha ki shayad koi chukar dekhe toh kahe bukhaar hai …per yeh bukhaar us chudai ka tha jiske chalte uski saanse aab bhari ho chali thi …usne ab khud pehl ki or beth gayi niche us aadmi ki paint ki zip kholi usne……


zzziizizzzzzzp …zip kholkar usne aapna hath badakar uska land hath me liya jo abhi aaadha khada tha ….usne jab use dekha toh us aurat ke hath se bada tha us aadmi ka land usne jab uska land dekha toh …ussse apni khud ki garmi ke chalte rukna muskil ho chala tha ….usne siddha us land jiska size koi 8’ ke ass pass hoga muh me liya or chusne lagi or chusti rahi dhire dhire land apne pure zor per aane laga tha or uske muh me aana muskil hochala tha …kyuki land ki golai ya motai bhi bad chali the kisi baseball bat ke jaisa sakht ho chala tha uska land ek sharab ki garmi usper gori chiti Hasina ka land ko chusna kisi lallu ka bhi land khada karde ..toh who toh pakka Saand jaisa mard tha or usper uska land kadak us aurat ka ab muh me lena bhi muskil tha so usne muh se nikala …or who aadmi bhi shayad aapne pure josh me aa chuka tha …so usne us aurat ke jism se ek ek kapde ko usse juda kar diya tha ..or uske jism ki tarf dekha kya saanche me tarasha hua jism tha …bina daag ka goora badan ..us per uski shaandaar gazab ki kasi hui chuchiyan jinke sidhe kadak nipple is baat ko cheekh -cheekh kar keh rahe the …ki ek baar hume chu lo …uske un gori chuchiyon me laal nishaan is baat ka sabot tha ki kaise unko zor se masla hua tha….or uska kasa hua pet is baat ka pukhta sabot tha ki us aurat ko kasrat karne or khud ko maintain rakhne me maharat haasil hai …uski janghe dekh kar koi kisi chikne ped ke baare me soch sakta hai …us admi ne jag us aurat ko dekha toh usne sabse pehle uski chut ki taraf dekha uski chut fully shaved thi jisper baalon ka naamo Nishan nahi tha kehte hain chut chut me rang ka hi anter nahi hota hai kisi kisi ko shyad khud upperwala apne hath se taraashta hai …jiska jism shayad uski banayi is dunia me kehar dha deti hai ..us aurat ki chut bhi kuch aisi hi thi ..puri gori jiske honth abhi thode gelle the jinse chuta paani is baat ka ishara tha ki usko chudai ki kitni talab hai …us admi ne jab uski chut ko dekha toh uske land ne ek alag zordar thumka lagaya …

or uske baad us aadmi ne khud ko bhi apne kapdoon se aazaaad kiya or us aurat ko apni tarf kicha or siddha ek kiss …kiaya jis me uske honth us aurat ke hotton ki mithaas pine lage or uske ek hath ne uski ek chuchi ko maslna chalu kar diya ….or dusre hath ne uski gilli chut ko maslana …ek tarfa hamla ho toh shayad koi she bhi sake per yahaan toh humla bhi 3 tarfa tha ..us aurat ki halaat is baat se pata laga sakte hain aap ki ..koi 5 minutes me hi uska paani nikal gya …sirf chut masalne se hi …or paani hi nahi saath me uska pishaab bhi (squirt)jisme us aadmi ka hath bhi gilla ho gya …per shayad husn or jism ka nasha …sharab or shabaab ka nasha uske sar chad chuka tha usne jaise hi us aurat ko jhadete dekha …uske baad siddha ek hath se jo uski ek chuchi per chal raha tha …siddha uska gala pada or thoda dabba diya jisse uski aurat ki nase akad agye or uska gora chehra laal ho chala tha …ek dum laal …usne phir shidha use bed ki tarf fekh diya …who aurat bhi shayad pani nikal jane ke baad thodi dhili ho chali thi ..so siddha bed per dhadam se gir paadi …

Jiske baad who aadmi sidhe bed per chada or uska garma garm land su aurat ko apni chut per laga hua mehsoos hua …or jab use chut per land mehsoos hua …toh usne apna hath niche le jaakar us land ko apni chut ke ched per lagya ..or baaki ka kaam us aadmi ke dumaar jhatke ne kar diya …..khaaaacccch ..paani se labalab bhari chut me aawaz ke sath land ne apni entry maar li …jiske sath hi us aurat ne ek siski li ….iiiisssssshaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!...araaaammmmmmmmm..haayyyyyy uske baad us aadmi ne us aurat ke dono pair utha liye or apne kandhe per rakh liye or tufaani jhatke dene shuru kar diye….

Jhatake itne dumdaar the ki har jhtake per uski sisiski ke sath uska pura sharir hill jata …khas tour per uski bhaari rasili chuchiyan har jhatake ke sath upper niche ek taal mel se hil rahi thi ….us aadmi ka har jhtaka us aurat ki chut ke aakhiri hisse per use mehssos hota tha …jahan shayad aaj tak hi koi land pucha ho ….use kitna mazaa aa raha tha …ap is baat se samjh sakte hain ki uskaa pani 15 min me ek baar or jor ke pishaab ke pressure ke sath nikal gya or koi 30sec ke liye jabardast orgasm hua use …tab tak ke liye bhi us aadmi ne us per koi reham nahi kiya usnea ab use gumya or ghodi banakar apna land ek baar me siddha uttar diya or uske lambe baal apne hath gool guma kar ek lagam ki tarah khich liye or fir se laga tufaani jhatake ….har baar us aurat ke jhatak ke sath maze or dard jo ab uski chut me mehsoos hone laga tha ….bura haal tha…per phir bhi us aadmi ne use …zor ke sath chudai jaari rakhi …koi 20 min baad me ab shayad who aadmi bhi jhadne ke kaagar per tha …

per us aurat ki halat ab thakan or koi 4 baar jhadne se khasta ho gyi thi ….per phir bhi who aadmi laga hua tha ki 5 baar uska paani chut gya ….pishaab ke sath ….woh aadmi bhi apna land nikaal kar use ishara karta hai …toh who apni jagah se uthti hai or uska land muhme lekar zor se chusne lagti hai…jisper shayad aapne antim palo ke chalte us aadmi ne uske sar me aapne aakhir chand jhatke uske muh me laga kar apna land jabardasti uske halk me utaar diya or apna maal uske pet me uttar diya …phir unse uska sar choda jisper us aurat ne uska land chusa or bacha hua maal bhi chus liya …jiske baad dono bed per gir gaye…



Thodi der ..baad who aurat uthi or “malik chalti hun aap or na pina ..”

Who aadmi “thik hai per malik kab tak kahogi mujhe ..”

Aurat “ aap mere liye malik hai or rahenge humesha ..verna kon kothe ki randi fatima ko azad karta ..aaj sar uthakar aapke office me kaam karti hun …aapko nahi kahun toh kise kahun malik aapne use nayi zindagi di hai jise khud uske paida karnwale bhi bhul chuke the …aap humesha mere malik hi rahenge..”


Who admi” per azadi ke baad bhi toh tum wahi karti ho jo wahan karti thi…tum ko kehta hun abhi bhi chaho toh kahin bhi sattle ho jao …main dekh lunga…”



Aurat”malik aapne aaj toh keh diya aage se na kehna …aap kaisi baat karte hain …wahan meri ruh tak ko har roz nocha jata tha …randi ka matlab kya hota hai …koi randi ke dil se puchkar dekhe …yahan sirf aap hain or aapke sath meri marzi bhi shamil hai isme..so aap khud ko na jimmedar mane iske liye….verna randikahne ki Fatima sheikh yahan ki Shabnam nahi hoti ..malik mujhe aapse koi shikat nahi hai bas aap khud se mujhe dur na karene or mujhe apne sath hi rahne den yeh meri aakhri iltza hai aapse..”



Aadmi “thik hai tum jaise chaho tumhe khuli azadi hai …tum jo chaho karo acha ..apna dhyan rakhna “or who utha or bathroom ki taraf chal diya …


Uske baad who nangi hi uthi or aapne kapde jo zamin per bikhre the uthaya or chaldi room se bahar…



Who admi bahar aya naha kar bath room se or aakar nanga hi apne dusre room ki taraf chal pada ,hath me ek or scotch ki bottal lekar ..jahan shyad uske naukar ne pehle se saaf kapde uske bed per rakh diye the …usne kapde pehne or samne rakhi tasveer jisme koi bacha or koi or aurat uske sath thi shayad koi family photo thi..use hath me laker …”I miss u my love my only love ..my life my wife ,,,and my dearest son Mohit kitna miss karta hai tumhara yeh baap yeh hath me bottal is baat ka sabot hai kyu chod gaye tum dono mujhe tanhaa is dunia me akela ..ki jo insaan jisne kabhi zindagi me sharaab ko chua tak nahi tha aaj duba hai isi me …I miss u both …”

Ek zor daar dhaad ke sath uske ansoo bha chale …uska rona itna dard se bhara tha ki paas ke servant room tak jaati uski awaaz ko sunkar who naukar bhi aansoo bahane lagta hai …”hey upperwale itna acha insan aaj kitna akela or tanha hai ..kya tujhe zara bhi reham nahi hai ache logon per ..??kya yahi hai tera Insaaf who insaan kitna tanha hai jisne zindagi bhar sharab ko hate kiya aaj usi me duba hua hai kuch toh reham kar malik mere ache malik per …”us naukar ne rote hue upperwale se shikayat karte hue kaha..



Kon tha yeh aadmi itna akela tanha kyu tha or kyu bana aisa …or manu ki or Nisha ki kasam ka kya ..hoga …sabse bada sawal is admi ka in sabme kya kaam …:hint:
Superb update. Bahut bahetreen likh Rahe ho
 
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Superb update. Bahut bahetreen likh Rahe ho


thanks bro......


bhai aapka story per sirf hona hi aapke is fan ke liye bahut kuch hai ...:respekt:
such kahun toh abhi bhi koi sahi sabd nahi mil rahe mujhe ki aapka fan aapko kaise thank u kahe ..:thanks:

bas itna samjh lijye aapki har kahani se bahut kuch sikha hai or aapke hone se bahut himmat milti hai aapke is fan ko ...:thank_you:?

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Bahut he khubsurati kai saath likha huya update.


thanks bro......

aapka har word ek fan ke liye such me autograph hai ...:thankyou:
kasam se kai baar dekhta hun aapke comment ko...:thank_you:?


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thanks bro....

aapka smart brain kaabil e taarif hai ....

aapne kaha ki past present or future ek saath story me add karta hun toh samajh nahi aayegi ...

bhai aap such me kamaal hain ....bhai har jagah ek ek word ko soch kar likhta hun haan manta hun speed se typing karne me or auto-space ke chalte kayi jagah space or word manu ke ki jagah man uke ho jata hoga ...per kahin bhi ek bhi jagah main koi past present ya future daal kar kisi ko koi confusion create nahi kiya ....

haan sabne apne hisaab se kaha ki shyaad ........dhyaan rahe unka word shayad hai ,,,,,ki shayad yeh present ka manu hai ...

per maine kisi ko bhi roka nahi na koi baat kahi kyuki sabka suggestion sunna or sath me criticism ko bhi dekhna acha lagta hai mujhe ...


per dost aapka khud se maan lena ki kahani me ek sath past present or future chalega bahut loogo ka dimaag hila dega ...

aisa na maine abhi kiya hai na aage hoga haan aap apne hisaab se assume kar sakte hain aage kya hoga ...per kaha per main yeh kaha ki yeh present ka manu hai ya yeh past ka manu hai ....

dost kisi comment me bhi nahi kaha hoga ...abhi bhi apne kaam or update dono sath me maintain kar raha hun ...
aapka comment pada toh rok nahi saka ki kahin koi bhi misconception bane so ...yeh karna pada ....

verna abhi bhi keh deta keep guesses..per nahi sirf character ko assume karne ko kaha tha aapne toh pura kahani ka conception hi alag change kar diya ...bhai

khair koi baat nahi kahani me abhi sirf is naye character ko guess karo or nahi kar paate toh update me pata chal jayega ...bhai ...per such me

kamaal ke smart ho aap ....maana padega kahan tak soch liya aapne ...or ise galat na lena kahani ka plot change na ho isliye clear karna pada ...verna aage jaakar miscommunication hota sabhi ko ...

so thanks 4 commenting ...


acha laga comment padkar sabhi ne acha acha socha very nice of u ...thanks dear readers u all are awesome...
maine ye nahi kaha ki jo sex kar raha hai wo manu hai .....aur past ,present ka bhi ....aapne guess karne ko kaha isliye ye likha ki mix mat karna ,maja nahi aayega ....
 

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sawal acha laga ki aapne kaha writer ji aapke ****** ki main kahani ka plot tyaar karke likh raha hun ya sab kuch ek sath pehle se mann banakar likh raha hun

ya

har update soch kar likhta hun ...


toh bhai pehle sawal ka jawab koi ******** insaan hi hoga jo kahin per bhi bina tyaari or bina homework ke kaam shuru karega for example bina koi map ke kya aap house build kar sakte ho ??? matlab atleast dimaag me toh koi map hoga na build karte time ya woh bhi nahi ya kahin se bhi koi bhi diwar bana di or kahin per bhi pilar banaye or ho gaya kaam ..???

nahi na toh kahani ka consept hota hai tabhi kahani banti hai ....jaanta hun pehli kahani hai may be aapko azeeb lage but har cheez clear krna zarori hota hai mere liye varna aaj tak shayad hi koi padta is kahani ko ...


or raha aapka dusra prediction ...toh bhai saaf kardeta hun ki kahani sirf writer ki nahi hoti aisa atleast mera maanna hai aap readers ka isme suggestion ho koi or acha idea ho toh isme add kar sakun aapko kahani se jod sakun or aapko bhi lage ki kahani sirf writer ki nahi hai apka suggestion ya aapka idea kahani me hai or kahani main ab apka bhi kuch hai or mujhe bhi khushi hogi apne readers ko khush dekhkar ,,isliye apse suggestion leta hun haan jo suggestion isme add nahi kar paya agli main karunga but karunga zaroor ...

or dost isme kahin na kahin sabka role hota hai wahaan se asume karna or kuch bhi keh dena aasan hai main bhi oron ki tarah hota toh shayad aapse koi behas bhi karta is baat per....per i m cool person ...so thats why i clearfy these things for u.....


or dost agar aap koi acha concept rakhte ho toh aapka bhi welcome hai ....yahaan aap bhi achi story likh sakte hain..dost likhye aap main jarur padna chaunga aapka yeh dost comment jaroor karega us story per so best of luck ...:applause::applause::coffee1:??
isliye poochha ki ek writer ne kaha tha ki wo har update sochkar likhta hai ....poora plot ( concept ) taiyar nahi hota bas kahani ke hisaab se agla update taiyar kar leta hai ...
agar ye sirf sex story hoti to aise chudwao ya waise chudwao ye salaah deta par ye alag hai isliye aapne jo socha hai wahi likho ...jaise me kahu ki manu ki shadi nisha aur kanu aur 2 ya char ladkiyo se ho aur aap waisa kare to maja nahi aayega ....
 

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Waiting bhai update kab aayega


thanks bro.....

sorry bhai ..aajka update thoda late post hoga ....koi 11 ke aas paas ...

bro aaj or plz adjust karlo aaj kal thoda personal work ka bhi load hai waise toh mujhe pura week work ke sath adjustment karna hoga per kal se aapko aapka update 8 ya jada se jada 8.30pm tak mil jayega ...
kya karu bhai life me thoda load jada hai ....


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