Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic update

 

[Naina]

Brilliant update writer sahab.... Great going

 

[Akil]

UPDATE-13









bahi dusri taraf jo detya dut bankar prithvi per ghum rahe the. Unhe jungle ki ghatna ki jaankari mili. Jo unhone turant hi adhira ko batane ka faisla kiya.




Adhira- ye tum log kya bakwas kar rahe ho. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai.




S1- ye Satya hai maharaj. Hamare Jo dut jungle me reh rahe the. Jinhe aapne us astra ke liye baha per pahuchaya tha. Unki hatya ho gyi hai.





Adhira- kis kis ki hatya Hui hai



D1- maharaj keval 4 ki. Jo the शूल,चाड़ौर,गुंटक और चंड
Ye Charo Bhai the. Jo pishacho ke raajkumar the.





Adhira- lekin ye Charo to maha shaktishali the. Inhe kisne Mara hai.




D1- iske bare hame koi bhi jaankari nahi mil pai hai. Hamne baha pata karne ki kosis ki thi. Lekin baha to logo ko abhi tak ye bhi pata nahi hai ki jungle me hai kya jo logo ko gayab kar raha hai. Or na hi unhe ab is baat ka pata hai ki jungle me jo bhi samasya thi vo ab nahi hai.




Adhira- ye sab kab hua hai.



D1- kal brahm muhurat me.




Adhira- ye kaise sambhav hua hai. Ab iski jaankari to gurudev hi de sakte hai. Or lagta hai jisne unhe mara hai bahi hai in devtao ka raaj. Sayad koi shakti hai. Jiska janm hua ho prithvi per. Devtao ke dwara. Ha ye jarur un devtao ki hi chal hai koi. Mujhe gurudev se jald hi milna hoga.



Ye kehke adhira foran apne raj mahel se bahar chala gya seedha gurudev ke aasram me. Jaha gurudev apne dhayn me baithe hue the.



Adhira ne unhe pranam Kiya



Adhira- hey gurudev aankhe kholiye yaha bahut badi samasya aagyi hai. Jiska Hal aap hi hame Bata sakte hai. Gurudev aankhe kholiye.




Aise hi baar baar nivedan karne per detyaguru shukracharya ne apni aankhe khol li.




Shukracharya- kya hua adhira. Aisi kya samasya aagyi hai jiske liye tumhe yaha tak aana pada.





Adhira- gurudev aapke dhyan ko bhang karne ke liye me mafi mangta hu. Lekin ye mamla hi aisa tha ki ab kya batau aapko.





Shukracharya- bekhof ho kar bolo adhira




Adhira- guruvar lagta hai hame devtao dwara rachit shadyantra ka koi surag mila hai.




Ye sunkar shukracharya turant hi khade ho gye.




Shukracharya- aisa kya bataya hai tumhare dut ne.





Adhira- gurudev hamare kuch guptcharo ki hatya ho gyi hai prithvi per. Jinhe hamne us astra ki khoj me bheja tha.






Shukracharya- kon the vo.




Adhira- gurudev bahi pishacho ke 4 raajkumar. Jinhe aapne kuch vishes shaktiya bhi pradan ki thi.





Shukracharya- ha hame gyat hai. Lekin unki hatya kaise hui.




Adhira- is bare me duto ko koi jaankari nahi mili hai. Or na hi un charo ki deh hame mili hai.





Shukracharya- un charo ki deh milegi bhi nahi. Unko brahma ka vardan tha ki unki mrityu is vanaspati ke kado se hi hogi. Or Marne ke baad vo isi me samahit ho jayenge.





Adhira- mujhe lagata hai kisi shakti ka janm hua hai sayad prithvi per. Jisne un charo ko mara ho. Kyuki aam insan ke bas ki baat ye hai nahi. Or koi bhi devta prithvi per nahi gye hai. Iski jaankari hamare dusre guptchar ne di hai.





Shukracharya- tum uchit keh rahe ho adhira. Ab hame apna har kadam soch samaj kar uthana hoga. Or vo jo bhi shakti hai. Use hame apne jaal me fasa kar nast karna hoga. Isse pehle ki vo hamse us astra ko cheen le. Or in charo ka balidan bhi byarth nahi jayega. Inlogo ne marte hue bhi hame ek bahut badi gupt suchna pradan ki hai. Or hame uska fayeda uthana hoga.





Adhira- parantu gurudev hame to abhi us shakti ke bare me koi bhi jaankari Tak prapt nahi hui hai to ham uska pata kaise lagaye.




Shukracharya- me dhyan me baithkar is shakti ke bare me pata karne ki kosis karunga. Tab tum jis jagah per inki mrityu Hui hai. Baha per Apne sabse shaktishali duto ko us jagah per bhej do. Or unse kaho ki baha per moujood kisi na kisi insan ka roop le le. Taki unka vajood bana rahe. Or fir usi roop me gupt tarike se us shakti ka pata lagaye. Or ek baar agar hame uski jaankari mil gyi to fir ham use aasani se fasa sakte hai. Or unse ye bhi kehna ki apni shaktiyo ka bharpur prayog kare. Lekin kisi ki najro me nahi aana hai. Ye sab chhip kar karna hai unhe. Apni shaktiyo se sabhi insano ki janch Kare. Or jisme bhi divya gud mile uski pori janch Kare. Baki jaise hi mujhe is shakti ke bare me koi suchana milti hai me tumhe khud batane aajaounga. Samaj gye.






Adhira- samaj gya gurudev. Aisa hi hoga.
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Uske baad adhira bapis se apne mahel chala gya. Or gurudev apne dhyan me baith gye. Mahel jakar adhira ne baisa hi Kiya jaisa use shukracharya ne kaha tha. Usne apne sabse shaktishali danavo ko prithvi ke liye Ravana kar diya. Or unhe sari hidayate bhi de di.









Bahi brahma ji ye sab dekh rahe the. Or unhe bhi ab dev ki chinta hone lagi thi. Isliye unhone turant hi devraj indra ko apne pass aane ka sandesh bheja.


Sandesh milte hi indra turant baha per pahuch gye.




Indradev- pranam Brahm Dev.



Is per brahmadev ne unhen aasirbaad de diya.




Indradev- kahiye prabhu mujhe kis liye aapne sandesh de kar bulbaya hai





Brahma- indra ab or bhi bikat samasya aane wali hai jinki shuruwat bhi ho chuki hai




Indradev- kaise samasya




Brahma- Indra adhira ko iski suchna mil chuki hai ki uske dut mare ja chuke hai. Jis bajah se unke man me sandeh paida ho gya hai. Ki prithvi per kisi shakti ka janm hua hai. Or usi sandeh ka pata lagane ke liye usne Arnav ki janmbhumi per apne sabse shaktishali detyo ko bhej diya hai.






Indradev- ye to bakai me gambhir samasya hai prabhu. Parantu arnav ki shaktiya bhi jagrit hone lagi hai. Or use unhen jagrit karne ka marg bhi mil chuka hai. Or maine uski shaktiyo ko khud dekha hai. Kaise usne dhyan me baithe baithe hi un charo ko nast kiya tha.





Brahma- ham bhi arnav ki shaktiyo se parichit hai. Lekin samasya ye hai ki un detyo ke pass mayavi shaktiya hai jinke aadhar per vo arnav ko turant hi pehchan lenge ki yahi hai vo jiska janm hua hai. Or fir vo use hani pahunchane ka prayas karne lagenge. Or abhi arnav ki sari shaktiya jagrit nahi hui hai.or sabse jaruri Baat ye ki arnav ko abhi un shaktiyo ka sahi se istemaal karna nahi aata hai. Vo jyada der tak in danavo ka mukabala nahi kar payega.





Indradev- to ab ham kya kare




Brahma- indra jald hi vo samay aane wala hai jab arnav ki uske guru se mulakaat hogi. Or mujhe ye batane ki jarurat nahi hai ki Arnav ke guru akhir kon banenge.




Indradev- ha brahma dev mujhe gyat hai ki ye bhumika kisko di jane wali hai.






Brahma- to bas indra Aapko jald hi is sabki byabastha karni hogi.






Indradev- mujhe gyat hai brhma dev ki mujhe kya karna hai. Parantu un asuro ka kya kiya jaye.




Brahma- un asuro ko jo kuch bhi karna hai karne deejiye. Vo kisi bhi manusya ko filhal hani nahi pahuchayenge. Parantu apko Arnav ki urja ko chhipana hoga. Taki vo use pehchan na paye. Or jab uchit samay aayega tab arnav khud unke samne aajayega.



Indradev- samaj gya brahmadev. Aapki aagya ka palan hoga.




Brahma- or sath me hi ye bhi aap sun leejiye ki aapke swarg me is waqt ek detyo ka dut ghoom raha hai. To Aapko is Baat ka pora dhyan rakhna hai ki usko is ware me koi bhi jaankari na ho. Aapko use bhramit karna hai.




Ye sab sunne ke baad indradev samaj gye ki unhe kya karna hai.




Indradev- me samaj gya brahmadev. Aapane jaisa kaha hai baisa hi hoga…




Uske baad indradev brahmadev ji ko pranam karke baha se chale gye





Or lag gye apni tayyariyo me.




Bahi prithvi per abhi tak sab theek chal raha tha. Dev apni baheno ke sath badiya time spend kar raha tha. Or apni clg life ko injoy Kar raha tha.use koi fikr nahi thi aane wale sankato ki. Bas kabhi kabhi is ware me jarur sochta tha ki ye shaktiya usme kaise or kyu hai. Aise hi vo ek din clg se bapis aa raha tha ki use raste me ek mandir dikhai diya. Halaki vo roj hi baha per pranam karta tha. Lekin jaldbazi me kabhi andar nahi gya. Lekin aaj use mike me SHRI MAD BHAGWAT GEETA ka path hota hua sunai diya. To usne apni bike ko roka or khud hi mandir me chala gya. Jaha per pehle se hi kai log baithe hue the or is path ka aanand le rahe the. Ab unme arnav bhi shamil ho gyaor dhyan laga kar unki sari bate sunne laga. Isme BRAHMAND ki utpatti ke bare me abhi bataya ja raha tha. Karib 2 ghanto Tak arnav sari bate sunta raha. Or unhe samajne ki kosis karta raha. Use sab samaj me aaya lekin uske prasno ke Uttar nahi mile. To jab path ko aaj ke liye viraam diya gya. To sabhi baha se uthkar chale gye. Or dev baha se uthkar un Panditji. ke pass chala gya.




Main- pranam pandit ji.




Pandit- tumhara kalyan ho putra. Maine aaj tumhe pehli baar yaha dekha hai.




Main- ha me aaj hi yaha sunne aaya hu.





Pandit- achha hai. Tumhari genration ko ye sab bate sunna chahiye. Isse tumhe aage margdarshan milega.





Main- ha pandit ji me bate janta bhi hu or manta bhi hu.





Pandit- bahut badiya. Tumhara chehra dekhkar lagta hai kuch puchhna chahte ho mujhse.





Main- aapne sahi kaha. Mere man me kuch sawal hai jinka jawab me dhund raha hu. Aap agar mera margdarshan kar sake to badi meharbani hogi aapki.






Pandit- isme meharbani kaisi. Tum jo chaho vo puchh sakte ho. Jitna mujhe gyat hoga me is aadhar per apne uttar de dunga tumhe.




Main- dhanyabaad pandit ji. Vaise me ye bate Aapko kahunga to kahi aap ise mera pagalpan na samaj le. Lekin pichhale kuch dino me mere sath kuch ghatit hua hai. Jisse me pori tarah se hairan hu.




Pandit- ham sun rahe hai. Aage bolo kya ghatit hua hai tumhare sath.




Main- Aapko yaad hai isi raste per jungle me log gayab ho rahe the.




Pandit- ha




Main- to baat ye hai ki.



Uske baad maine unhe sari ghatna sabistaar Bata di. Ki kya hua or kaise hua or jaisa Maine socha tha pandit ji ka muh khula ka khula reh gya ye sab bate jaankar





Pandit- kya sach me aisa hi hua tha





Main- jaha tak mujhe yaad hai bilkul aisa hi hua tha. To ab mere man me kai sawal uth gye hai ki aisa kaise sambhav hua. Or mere sath hi kyu. Or sabse bada sawal ki jis thirdeye ko shivji ke aalwa keval 1 ya 2 log hi khol paye hai. Use me itni aasani se kaise khol leta hu. Yahi sab sawal mujhe paresan Kar rahe hai. Kya aap is sab me mera margdarshan kar sakte hai.





Meri bato ko gour se pandit ji ne suna or samjha or uske baad vo bole.





Pandit- beta is sawal ka jawab tumhe bahar kahi nahi milega. Kyuki is prithvi per aisa koi nahi jo tumhare in sawalo ka jawab de sake. Sivay bhagwan ke. Or tumne kaha ki tumhare man se aawaj aai tab tumne dhyan lagaya tha. To tumhe apne in sare sawalo ke jawab apne man me hi talash karne honge. Apni thirdeye ka istemal Karo or apne sawalo ke jawab prapt karne ki kosis Karo. Or agar tumhe ye karne se safalta nahi milti hai. To jaha tak me janta hu jald hi tumhare jeevan me kisi ka aagman hoga. Jo tumhare sare sawalo ke jawab dega. Or tumhare is jeevan ka kya lakshya hai vo tumhe batayega. Ab jab tak aisa koi tumhare jeevan me nahi aata hai tab tak tum swayam hi apne sawalo ke jawab dhundne ki kosis Karo. Mujhe lagta hai ki tumhara janm jarur hi kisi mahan uddesya ko pora karne ke liye hua hai.





Ye sab sunne ke baad mere man ko thodi shanti to mil hi gyi thi ki mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab jald hi Milne lagenge.




Main- aapki bate sunkar mujhe ye aabhas ho raha hai ki jald hi ye samay bhi aane wala hai. Or me us samay ki besabri se pratiksha karunga. Or aapse ek vinti bhi karna chahunga ki aap ye bate kisi ko bhi na bataye. Kyuki ek to koi inper Yakeen nahi karega. Or dusra kisi ko agar is Baat per Yakeen ho gya to meri samasya bad sakti hai.





Pandit- beta tum bilkul bhi chinta mat karo. Ye baat mere seene me marte dum tak dafn rahegi. Or me bhagwan se prarthna karunga ki jald hi tumhare sare sawalo ke jawab tumhe mil jaye. Or tumhare jeevan ka lakshya bhi tumhe prapt ho jaye .
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Ye sab sunkar Maine pandit ji ka aasirbaad liya. Or baha se ghar nikal gya.









To be countinue……………..

Dekhte hain woh daanav arnav ka pata laga paane mein kahan tak kaamyaab honge?
Un pandit ji ne yeh bilkul thik kaha ki mann mein uth rahe sawalon ke jawab humein apne andar hi milenge aur agar woh unhein khud na dhoondh paaya toh uske guru ismein maargdarshan hi karenge parantu pata use khud hi lagana hoga....
Dekhte hain uska guru kaun banega..... Aur kaise arnav khud ko jaan paayega....

 

[Ritima]

Awesome update. Or aapke story ke khas baat h jo real life ke kuch khas mithi yaade hoti h usko aap yaad dila dete ho jiase frnds family. Is liye ye story mujhe pahle se bhi jayada pasand aane lagi h. Awesome awesome bhut sandaar. Ab dekhna h Kya karte h Detya jab unko pata chalega jab unke 4 log maare ja chuke h.



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[Ritima]

Another gr8 update dear. Dev apni third eye ke karan pareshan h ke wo isko q use kar pa raha h or dusri tarf Detya Guru Shukrachary bhi sadyantra mai lage hue h taki wo Dev ko dund kar sampat kar ske or Bharam dev Indradev ke dawara Dev ko protect karne ke kosis kar rahe h. Or us jasos asur ke bare mai bhi hint de diya h. Jaha tak mujhe lagta h Dev Devadedev Bhagwaan Shiva ka ansh h tabhi wo aisa kar pane mai safal ho saka h qke wo Divyastr Shiv jee ne he diya h wo ab use kisi or ko prapt nhi ho ye karne ke liye aaye h taki uska misuse na ho. Ye meri prediction h.



9.5/10

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[Ritima]

N sorry for late review.

 

[Vickey1211]

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[Rahul0087@]

UPDATE-14











Sham ko jab ghar pahucha to sabne puchh liya ki aaj late kaise ho gya.to Maine Bata diya ki mandir me katha ho rahi thi bahi sun raha tha. Uske baad kisi ne kuch nahi kaha.
raat me main apne mobile me movie dekh raha tha tabhi mujhe prachi ka msg aagya. To maine use reply kar diya. Or uske baad hamari chatting suru ho gyi. Jisme bas yahi faltu ki bate hi chal rahi thi. Ki kya kar rahe ho khana kha liya ki nahi ab kya kar raha ho. Ghar me sab kaise hai. Bagera bagera. Mujhe man hi man lag raha tha ki sayad ye kuch or kehna chahti hai lekin keh nahi pa rahi hai. Or me use force bhi nahi kar sakta tha kehne ke liye. Isliye Maine baisi hi normal bate jari rakhi. Karib 10 min. Baad renu mere kamre me aagyi. Or mujhe aise chat karte dekh pata nahi use kya sujha usne jhat se mera phone mujhse chheen liya or bahar ki taraf bhag gyi. Ab maine socha iske peeche bhagne se kya fayeda hamari koi private baat to hui nahi hai. Ye khud hi mobile de jayegi thodi der me. Or me uska pachka bhi kar dunga. Yahi sab sochkar me palang se hila bhi nahi. Or jab kafi der tak me bahar nahi gya to jaisa Maine kaha tha renu khud hi mera mobile leke andar aagyi.





Main- ho gyi man ki.




Renu- kya yaar tu peeche kyu nahi bhaga



Main- me kyu bhagne laga vo bhi tere peechhe




Renu- achha to fir kiske peeche bhagta hai jara mujhe bhi to Bata.




Main- or vo bhala kyu.





Renu- teri badi bahen hu. Is nate mera pora hak hai ye janne ka ki tu aaj kal kiske peeche bhag raha hai.




Main- achha to is Nate Mera bhi pora hak hai ye janne ka ki clg me tum kiske peeche bhag rahi hu.




Renu- ha lekin pehle sawal Maine kiya hai isliye pehla jawab tu hi dega.




Main- sorry me ye nahi batane wala tujhe.





Renu- aisa kya karta hai. Bata na. Mera pyara Bhai hai na. Mera shona Bhai hai na.




Main- ye maska apne bf ya pati ko lagana. mujhe nahi




Renu- theek hai to ab me tere se baat hi nahi karungi. Jab tujhe meri koi perwah hi nahi hai to me bhala kyu karu. Tu mujhe bilkul bhi importance nahi deta hai aajkal isliye ab me bhi tujhe bilkul bhi bhav nahi dungi.




Main- thank god. Peechha chhuta.




Or mera ye kehna tha ki renu ki aankhe nahi per bhar aai or usne mere phone ko bahi per fek diya or aapni aankho ko dabate hue bahar jane lagi.


Jaise hi darwaje ke pass pahuchi. Maine uska hath pakad liya. Or seedha use apne seene se laga liya.



Main- bas kar ab ye aasuo ka natak. Dekh me pighal gya



Ye sunte hi usne mere seene me jor se mukka maar.



Main- are baap re itna jor se maar rahi ho. Mujhe lag gya hai pata hai


Me apne seene ko malne laga. Jisse use laga ki mujhe bakai me lag gyi hai. Or usne turant hi mere seene per apna hath fer diya.



Renu- sorry vo galti se lag gya.



Main- koi na. Chalo aao baitho yaha per.



Renu mere sath baith gyi.



Main- tujhe kya ho gya hai.aajkal tu bahut jaldi imotional hone lagi hai. Pehle to aisa nahi tha




Renu- aisa kuch nahi hai.



Main- achha mujhse chhipayegi. Bata jaldi tujhe kasam hai meri.




Or ye astra kabhi bifal nahi jata hai. Khaskar renu ke mamle me.



Renu- are sach me kuch khas nahi hai. Vo darashal ab tu mujhe utna bhav nahi deta hai jis bajah se mujhe bura lagta hai. Ki tu ab mujhse pyar nahi karta hai. Meri hamesha burai karta rehta hai. Isliye mujhe bahut bura lagta hai. Ki mera ek hi Bhai hai or vo bhi mujhse theek se baat bhi nahi karta hai.




Main- achha to ye baat hai. Lekin isme galti tumhari hai.



Renu- meri kya galti hai isme.




Main- tum mujhe yaha akele chhod kar dekhi chali gyi. Or mere bare me tumne socha bhi nahi ki me yaha akele kya karunga me kiske sath khelunga kisse bate karunga. Or mujhe bhi tumhara ye faisla bahut bura laga tha. Jis bajah se me tumse naraj tha.




Renu- are to mujhe Jane se roka kyu nahi tha.




Main- Maine kosis ki thi lekin na to tumne koi virodh kiya or na hi kisi or ne. To maine socha jab tum hi yaha se jana chahti ho to tumhe rokne wala me kon hu. Isliye fir maine kisi se kuch nahi kaha.




Ye sab bate ekdam sach thi. Mujhe bahut bura laga tha jab renu Delhi chali gyi thi. Kyuki me akela pad gya tha pori tarah se. Chirag se me keval school me hi milta tha jaha vo sara din mera mood theek karne me hi laga rehta tha. Or Ghar per aate hi Sara bana banaya mood fir se bigad jata tha.




Renu- ohhhhh sorry yaar mujhe sach me is baat ka koi bhi andaja nahi tha. Verna me sach me nahi jati. Fir chahe kuch bhi kyu nahi hota.




Main- Rehan do ye sab bate. Sach to ye hai ki tum mujhe pori tarah se bhool gyi thi baha Jake. Or iska sabse bada saboot ye hai ki tumne mujhe aaj tak ek bhi incoming call nahi kiya hai. Jab bhi call Kiya gya hai maine hi kiya hai. Ya fir Ghar se mom ya dadu ne. Lekin tumne aaj tak mujhe khud se kabhi call nahi kiya hai. Ki chalo aaj Bhai ka haalchal puch lu. Ki kaisa hai kya kar raha hai.




Or ye sab sunke Renu ko ehsas ho gya tha ki bakai me usne in 2 salo me ek baar bhi mujhe khud se call nahi kiya tha. Ha kabhi khabhar mami call kar leti thi. Lekin renu ne call kabhi nahi kiya tha. Or ye sab realise hote hi renu ki aankhe fir se nam hone lagi.




Renu- tune sach kaha maine sach me tujhe call nahi kiya hai. Or isliye me saja ki hakdar bhi hu. Tu jo chahe mujhe saja de sakta hai. Me haste haste use swikar kar lungi. Lekin pls mujhse to baat karna band mat karna.




Main- kyu. In do salo me hamme na ke barabar baat hui hai. To tumhe or mujhe to ab aadat pad chuki hai. Isliye ab agar baat na bhi kare to kya fark padta hai.




Renu- tu ab mujhe Jaleel karne laga hai. Pls Bhai mat kar. Me khud ki najro me hi gir jaoungi.



Or renu ka rona ab badne laga tha.



Jo me nahi dekh sakta tha isliye maine use fir se apni baho me bhar liya



Main- bas karo or ab rona band karo. Verna me ab sach me baat nahi karunga. Or agar mafi chahiye hi hai to yaha se Jane ke baad hafte me kam se kam 4 din mujhe call karogi. Verna abki baar me bahi Delhi me aake pata nahi kya karunga.




Renu- pakka Bhai me char din nahi roj tujhe call karungi. Pls mujhe maaf karde. Me naye sehar me Jake usme kho gyi thi. Jisme mujhe tera bilkul bhi khayal nahi aaya. Jo meri sabse badi galti thi. Or is Baat ma ehsas mujhe ho gya hai.




Main- bas to fir ab baat yahi per khatm hoti hai. Ab ye batao ki clg kaisa chal raha hai. Or koi bf bagera banaya ya nahi.




Renu- kaisi bate karta hai tu. Sach me bigadne laga hai tu



Main- ha lekin aapse kam hi bigda hua hu.



Renu- to kya me bigdi Hui lagti hu tujhe.




Main- khud hi socho. Jab yaha aai ho or itna katil figure bana kar rakha hai. To koi to hoga hi chahne wala. Jise tum bhi pasand karti ho.




Renu- aisa kuch nahi hai. Or koi bhi nahi hai. Halaki one sided bahut hai. Lekin aisa abhi tak koi nahi mila hai jise maine pasand kiya ho.



Main- ohhh to ye baat hai. Baise mujhe yakeen to nahi ho raha hai. Lekin ab tum keh rahi ho to maan leta hu




Renu- thanks. Ab tu bata kisse chat kar raha tha.



Main- hai ek friend clg ki. Bahi thi. Haalchal puch rahi thi.bas or kuch nahi hai hamare beech filhal friendship me aalwa.




Renu- baise tujhe vo pasand hai kya




Main- Maine abhi is bare koi bhi faisla nahi liya hai. Halaki vo khubsurat hai. Kafi khubsurat hai. Lekin filhal me confuse hu.



Renu- ohh to mamla fasa hua hai. Like or love ke beech me.




Main- ha aisa keh sakti ho. Or dusri baat ye bhi hai ki. Vo bahut hi jyada gusse wali hai. Aapko sayad pata nahi hoga. Dusre hi din usne meri new car ka kabada kar diya tha. Baseball bat se.




Renu- what? Lekin kyu




Fir maine Renu ko sari story batai ki kya hua tha tab. Or kaise Maine use sabak sikhaya or uske baad kya hua




Renu- ohh ye to bakai me kafi guasel hai. Lekin lagta hai teri bato ko isne kafi seriousli le liya hai. Verna vo tumse frienship kabhi nahi karti



Main- ha ho sakta hai. Ya fir ye bhi ho sakta hai ki vo koi plan bana rahi ho mujhse badla lene ka. Jisme vo pehle Mera bharosa jeete or baad me peth per war kare.




Renu- sach kahu to ye possibility bhi hai. Aisa kar sakti hai vo.




Main- to as a girl tum hi batao ki ab me kya karu jisse mujhe ye janne ko mile ki uske man me akhir kya chal raha hai.




Renu- ye janne ka koi tarika nahi hai. Kyuki ladkiyo ke dimaag ko koi nahi pad sakta. Hamare man me kab kya vichar aajaye ye khud hame bhi pata nahi hota to tumhe kaise pata chalega. Ha agar tumhare pass koi divyashakti ho jisse tum hamara dimaag pad sako to alag baat hai. Halaki ye bhi possible nahi hai. Isliye bhul jao. Ha lekin ek kaam kar sakte ho.




Main- kya.



Renu- uska dil jeeto. Use itna pyar itni ijjat do ki agar uske man me aisi koi khurafaat chal bhi rahi ho to tumhara apna pan dekh kar vo idea hi khatm ho jaye uske man se. Or ye idea hamesha work karta hai. Khaskar ladkiyo ke mamle me.





Main- hmmmm vaise idea achha hai. Or Aapko to pata hi hai. Mera swabhav hi aisa hai. Me sabhi ke sath pyar or apne pan se hi rehta hu.




Renu- ha ye to me janti hu. Isliye mujhe pora yakeen hai ki vo ladki ab sach me sudhar chuki hai or tumhari ek sachi friend bhi ban chuki hai. Or ab agar tum dono ek dusre ko pasand karte ho to der na karo. Or prapose kardo.




Main- itni jaldi kya hai jab is sabka time aayega tab dekhenge. Filhal hamare injoy karne ke din hai or ham yahi karenge.




Renu- ye bhi theek hai. Achha ab me chalti hu.



Main- ok. Gn.


Renu- gn.



Ye bolke vo apne kamre me chali gyi. Or me bahi baitha sochta raha ki kya bakai me main use pasnd Karta hu ta nahi. Lekin is sawal ka jawab mujhe bhi bada confusing sa Mila isliye maine use waqt per chhod diya or me bhi light off karke so gya.






Bahi Jin detyo ko adhira ne bheja tha. Arnav ka pata lagane ke liye vo bhi ab dehradun me pahuch chuke the. Or ab unhe un logo ki talash thi jinka bhes vo le sakte hai or mere bare me jaankari le sakte hai. Ye total 4 log the. Jinhe apne apne shikar ki talash thi.




D1- ham kiska roop le.



D2- hame abhi koi bhi idea nahi hai ki vo shakti ka avtar kitne vars ka hai. Or vo dikhta kaisa hai. Isliye ham charo ko alag alag roop lene honge. Ek kaam karte hai. Ek kisi aise ka roop lega Jo kisi pathsala me padata ho. Dusra yaha ke jo senik hote hai unme se kisi ka roop lega. Taki use ye khabar milti rahe ki is sehar me kaha kya ho raha hai. Or kya kahi aise kisi ki koi khabar hai bhi ya nahi. Or me jaunga badi pathsala. Jaha thode bade bache padte hai. Or aakhiri bache tum. To tum usi badi pathsala me padne wale kisi vidyarthi ka roop loge taki bacho me achhe se ghul mil Sako. Or unke. Bare me jaan Sako. Sab samaj gye.




D1- ha me to samaj gya. Me jaunga senik banke.




D3- theek hai me jaounga chhoti pathsala me.



D4- lekin agar hame in charo hi jagah per aisa koi bhi nahi mila tab ham kya karenge




D2- aisa hona sambhav nahi hai. Mujhe puri ummid hai ki hame kahi na kahi safalta to jarur milegi. Or ek baar hame thoda sa bhi shak kisi per ho gya to uski jaankari nikalne me hame jyada samay nahi lagega. Or ham aisa karte hai. Jiska bhi ham roop lenge usko behosh karke rakhenge. Unko marna nahi hai.




D3- lekin kyu




D2- vo isliye ki agar hame kisi ek jagah per uska koi surag mila to ham Charo apne roop bapis se badal lenge usi jagah ke anuroop jis jagah hame saboot milega. Or jab ham apna purana roop chhodenge to bahi purane logo ki hame jarurat padegi. Kyuki agar vo log aise hi achanak se gayab ho gye to devtao or us shakti ko hamper shak ho sakta hai. Or vo khud hi hamari khoj me nikal pade.




D1- ye to or achhi baat hogi hamare liye.



D2- ha achhi baat to hogi lekin khatarnak bhi hogi. Kyuki jab usne un charo bhaiyo ko itni aasani se maar giraya hai to jarur uske pass bahut si shaktiya hogi. Jisme bal per vo hamper bhari bhi pad sakta hai. Or devta to hai hi hamare shatru. Unko bhi hamari bhanak lag jayegi. Or fir vo koi na koi shadyantra rachenge hamare khilaaf.




D4- ye baat bilkul sahi kahi hai tumne. Lekin ek sawal or hai. Or vo ye hai ki is pore sehar me kai chhoti or badi pathsalaye hai to ham kis me jaye ye kaise tay kare. Kyuki vo agar padta hai to kahi per bhi pad sakta hai.



D2- tumhara sawal bakai me bahut hi achha hai. To hame karna ye hai ki apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karke hame ye pata karna hai ki kis kis pathsala me sabse jyada positive energy faili Hui hai. Ham usi me jayenge.




D4- ha ye theek rahega. Or rahi baat un insano ko jeevat rakhne ke bare me to. Me isse pori tarah sehmat hu. Kyuki maharaj ka aadesh tha ki hame ye kaam aise karna hai ki kisi ko bhi kano kaan bhanak na ho ki hamne kiska roop kiya hai or ham kya kar rahe hai. Isliye hame un insano ko jeevit rakhna hi hoga

D2- theek hai to apni shkatiyo ka istemal karo.



Uske baad un charo ne apni apni shaktiyo ka istemaal Kiya or pore sehar me positive energy ko dhundne lage.khas kar school or clg me. Or unhe aise 3 thikane mil bhi gye. Jaha sabse jyada positive energy thi. Or mujhe ab ye batane ki jarurat nhi hai ki inme se ek clg bahi tha jisme dev padta hai. Isliye ab dev per khatra bakai me bad gya tha.


D1- theek hai to ab ham chalte hai apne apne shikaro per.



Ye kehke Charo pore dehradun me fail gye. Or pehle ne ek ACP ka roop le liya jiska abhi abhi yaha per transfer hua tha.or uske parivar me bhi yaha per koi nahi tha.

Bahi dusre ne ek clg ke teacher ka roop le liya.


Bahi teesre ne ek school teacher ka roop le liya.



Or akhiri wale ne. Ek student ka roop le liya. Or jin Charo ka inhone roop liya tha un charo insano ko inhone ek mayabi gufa me kaid kar diya. Jaha per koi bhi nahi pahuch sakta tha. Or in charo per kuch aise mantr inhone fook diye ki ye jaag to rahe the lekin unhe kuch bhi hosh nahi tha ki ye kaha hai kon hai or kya kar rahe hai. Inhe ab na bhook lagne wali thi or na hi pyas. Ye Charo bas shunya ko hi nihar rahe the.

Inko aisi halat dekh kar to lag raha tha ki kash inhe maar hi Diya hota to badiya hota.

Baki ab aage dekhte hai ki kya hota hai….Inka…………









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Awesome update. Or aapke story ke khas baat h jo real life ke kuch khas mithi yaade hoti h usko aap yaad dila dete ho jiase frnds family. Is liye ye story mujhe pahle se bhi jayada pasand aane lagi h. Awesome awesome bhut sandaar. Ab dekhna h Kya karte h Detya jab unko pata chalega jab unke 4 log maare ja chuke h.



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Another gr8 update dear. Dev apni third eye ke karan pareshan h ke wo isko q use kar pa raha h or dusri tarf Detya Guru Shukrachary bhi sadyantra mai lage hue h taki wo Dev ko dund kar sampat kar ske or Bharam dev Indradev ke dawara Dev ko protect karne ke kosis kar rahe h. Or us jasos asur ke bare mai bhi hint de diya h. Jaha tak mujhe lagta h Dev Devadedev Bhagwaan Shiva ka ansh h tabhi wo aisa kar pane mai safal ho saka h qke wo Divyastr Shiv jee ne he diya h wo ab use kisi or ko prapt nhi ho ye karne ke liye aaye h taki uska misuse na ho. Ye meri prediction h.



9.5/10☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

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Thanks dear apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye ......


and no problem ki apne late comments kiye hai. Yahi bahut hai ki aapane kiya to hai....



and rahi baat aapki pridiction ki to iske bare me filhal me kuch nahi keh sakta hu. Sayad ye sach ho ya fir ye galat bhi ho. Ye sab aage story me pata chalta rahega aapko and sabhi ko.
aap bas dekhte jaiye ki aage kya kya or kaise hota hai........ Abhi to story just start hi Hui hai ....






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