Incest Kahani ek family ki ..... (completed)

[Rohan Rathore]

abhi kuch nahi kah sakta bhai

zopion bhaai please bhai bhai ab Dil Ka rishta restart kar dijiye. Ham bhi purani yaadein taza karna chahte hain

 

[Ben Tennyson]

बहुत ही सराहनीय भूमिका रही है...... लाजवाब कहानी अंत भला तो सब भला

 

[Rahul]

wonderfull story zopi bhai

 

[amita]

Congratulations for completing 1000 pages

 

[Mayadon]

Dear zopian,
I know you from Xossip. This story was going good till update 70, but later on everything was so fast paced and ruined like you want to end this story asap. This story had lot of potential from very beginning, you were good with emotional scenes, but you missed most of chances to make this story awesome. With janhvi, with naina, with aarti, with reshma, with mami, with khushi , with mohini, with swety, with rajni this story could have gone upto 10,000 pages. Feeled disappointed. Sorry for harsh comment. But it's reality as i am reading stories from 8 9 yrs. On exbii later xossip antarvasana and many more

 

[zopion]

Dear zopian,
I know you from Xossip. This story was going good till update 70, but later on everything was so fast paced and ruined like you want to end this story asap. This story had lot of potential from very beginning, you were good with emotional scenes, but you missed most of chances to make this story awesome. With janhvi, with naina, with aarti, with reshma, with mami, with khushi , with mohini, with swety, with rajni this story could have gone upto 10,000 pages. Feeled disappointed. Sorry for harsh comment. But it's reality as i am reading stories from 8 9 yrs. On exbii later xossip antarvasana and many more

You told right dear
Ye story kafi lambi khinch sakti thi par time ke problem ke wajah se short karna pada
Thanks dear

 

[parkas]

Awesome and excellent update.... ?
majedaar update waise socha Aryan - Jiya ka tha lekin aapne Ravi ko laakar mast twist daal diya...
ek shandaar kahani ka samapan hua....

 

[zopion]

Awesome and excellent update.... ?
majedaar update waise socha Aryan - Jiya ka tha lekin aapne Ravi ko laakar mast twist daal diya...
ek shandaar kahani ka samapan hua....

thanks parkas bhai

 

[sorbobhuk]

bhai dil ka rishta story restart karo na...mera wo story hindi section me 2nd hai....to aap aanadasa laga sackte hai ki kitna pasand tha wo mera.....please

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

End kar di, chalo kal padta hun