Adultery Awaragi-Vasna-ek safar

[Abhi_25]

Welcome back abhi g or bhut hi acche se story ko usi jgh se start kiye ho lg hi nhi rha story bich me band huyi thi

thank you,

 

[Abhi_25]

I agree with Rajeev. I love your use of effective language in the appropriate place for best impact. And your dialog writing is superb. In erotic stories dialog is so critical.
Also agree that while Asif has thus far come across as a typical over eager but cautious tharki 20 year old boy who is always horny. I don't see a lot of problem with that that right now because I remember how I used to be at that age . The constant obsession with sex in a healthy boy of that age iis very relatable. That's the biggest strength of your narration - all your locations situations and characters are super relatable. At some point you will have to develop his emotional depth more, as Rajeev stated.
I am really looking forward to Asif spending the next few days at sethji's house, where arushi will also visit her future in laws, and the rest of the time Asif will have ready access to the other beauties on the premises. I'm sure arushi ki saas, jethani, sethji ki beti jiski shaadi hai - in sabhi se ghanishthta barhegi Asif ki, aur mauke par choka maarne me ustaad hai apna hero.
Loving your flow, do keep going.
Initially mujhe Asif ka suddenly drugs vagairah use Karna jarring laga tha, but then I realized the value of having some ways to accelerate the romance and sex. After all ye pre internet time ki gaon ki ladkiyan aur aurten Hain, aur shahr wali BHI koi bhot advanced NHI hai. Overall country living ka bhot sateek picturization hai - accurate to it's time and place.

A very beautifully written feedback, thank you for writing this much and supporting the story,,,
story will be progressed in this pace , will try to post updates regularly,,,,

Keep loving, keeping sharing your thoughts and feedback,,

thank you,

 

[Abhi_25]

Bhai update aayega kya aaj?

Will Try,, but it will be late

 

[raulthecoolguy]

Bahut shandar update diya hai maza aa gya........ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai kiski chut fategi........jaldi se agla update do

 

[king1969]

Intezar rahega

 

[microsoft2006]

Bhai sab thik itna late nahi hua kabhi update?

 

[Abhi_25]

Update will be posted tonight,
Sorry for the Delay

 

[affa]

Bhai story bahut achi h...lekin update slow ki wajah sa flow tut raha h yrr

 

[Abhi_25]

Bhai story bahut achi h...lekin update slow ki wajah sa flow tut raha h yrr

Agree,
i had been reader since many years , can understand,,,but dont worry,,,
weakly 3 episodes will try to maintain,,, so flow will not break,,,dont want to give very small updates for just name sake,,, taking some time...

Thank you for feedback,

 

[Abhi_25]

CHAPTER-2 EPISODE-IV update-1

Manohar- waah kya baat h asif bullet aur mobile,,,,bhai is baat pe to party banti hai,,,,bolke wo hasne lage,,,,

Sethji- ha bhai ye baat to sahi h,,,,itna kuchh mila h party to deni hogi,,,

Asif khushi se- sethji ji waise to ye sab aapka hi h,,,,lekin aapne mujhe di h iski khushi to mujhe bhi bahut h,,,,aur chacha ji bhi chahte hain to thik h karte hain party,,,

Batayiye kya karna h….

Fir manohar bhi charpai par baith jaate hain, fir asif uthke bolta h aaplog socho mai kuchh supari gutka leke aata hu tabtak,,,,wo fir kamre me gya aur kati hui supari, tambaku, chuna aadi leke aata h,,,aur dono ko deta h,,,dono fir supari kha lete hain,,,,asif bhi supari aur tambaku khate hue,,,,

Asif- ha to batayiye chacha ji kya party chahiye aapko,,,,wo muskurate hue bola ,,,,wo soch rha tha allah ne achha mauka diya h,,,chacha ko pata ke aage kuchh karna hoga,,,dekhte hain kaha tak baat aage jaati hai,,

Manohar- are beta jaane do mai to majak kar rha tha,,,,

Asif ka to chehra hi udas ho gya ye sunkar,,,,fir wo smile laate hue bola,,,

Asif- are nhi chacha ji,,,karte hain ,,,sethji ne itna kuchh kiya h mere liye to mai aap log ko ek kuchh chhoti moti party to de hi sakta hu,,,,

Sethji asif ki utsukata ko dekhte hue bole,,

Sethji- are manohar chal kuchh aaj kha pee hi lete hain bahut din ho gye baithe,,,iska bhi man rah jayega,,,,,,

Manohar- thik h bhai sahab aap kah rhe hain to karte hain,,,,waise bhi kal Saturday h to chhutti hi hai,,,baithate hain fir aaj….

Sethji- thik h fir,,,,asif ek kaam karo tum ,,,,chicken laao aaj banao khate hain,,,daaru hum arrange kar lenge,,,,,tumhe bhi pina h to bolo

Asif- nhi sethji mai nhi pita,,,wo to bas ekadh baar pi liya tha,,,wo sakuchate hue bola,,,

Sethji- chal achha tere liye beer leke aayenge 2,,,,wo tu pi lena usse jyada nasha bhi nhi hoga,,,,wo nuksan bhi nhi karega,,,,,

Asif ka bhi man ho rha tha,,,,,wo pahle desi tharra hi piya tha 2-4 baar apne kuchh dosto ke sath,,,,usne beer ke baare me suna tha lekin piya nhi tha,,,,,wo socha chalo aaj lage haath ye bhi taste kar leta hu,,,,

Asif- thik h sethji,,,,,fir thoda ruk k kuchh soch kar bola,

Asif- sethji chicken to bana lenge lekin kaha,,,,bunglow me to banega nhi,,,,yaha bana to lenge fit baki khana ka kya karenge,,,,,,mai ghar bol deta hu ammi roti chaval bana dengi leke aa jaunga,,,,,

Manohar- are asif itna kuchh karne ki jarurat nhi h,,,,tum kaha apne ghar bologe fir khana lane jaoge,,,,idhar chicken bhi banana h….fir hum baithenge kaha is garmi me idhar,,,,,,isse accha ye h ki chicken mere ghar pe banate hain,,,,mere angan me bana lenge…..aur baki ka khana bhi ghar pe ban jayega…..

Sethji- ha ye sahi kaam hua,,,,,waha baith ke chicken khate hue piyenge aur baate karenge,,,,fir busy hi ho jayenge shadi bivah ke chakkar me….

Ye sun ke asif bhi bahut khush hua,,,wo fir bola,

Asif- thik h chacha ji,,,mai chicken aur sab saman leke aata hu,,,baki roti aur chaval aap ghar pe banwa lijiye,,,,chicken mai bana dunga….

Manohar- tum chicken bana to loge na,,,,nhi to mai ban du fir,,,

Sethji- are manohar chinta kyun karte ho,,,wo bahut achha chicken aur mutton banata h,,,,main kha chuka hu pahle,,,

Manohar- waah fir to maja hi aa jayega, achha asif tum chicken leke aa jana baki masale to ghar pe hi mil jayega,,,,mai bhi ghar me bolke baki khana banwa lunga…

Asif- khushi se thik h chacha ji,,,

Fir asif bolta h mai kuchh sabji salad ke liye le aata hu lete jayiye,

fir asif khet se kuchh khire, tamatar, mooli aur gajar lake manohar ko deta h aur bolta h,,,,a

Asif- chacha ji ye le lijiye salad banane ke kaam aayega,,,

Manohar- khush hoke,,,waah ye to aur bhi achha ho gya sab khet se hi mil gya,,,,chalo achha bhaisahab ab chalte hain,,,aap bhi aa jayiye fresh hoke 8:00 bje tak ,,,tab tak ham log karte hain intajam…

Sethji- chalo thik h mai leke aata hu whisky h badhiya wali ,,,,fir haste hue dono charpai se uthe aur chal diye,,,,

Manohar apni bike leke ghar chala gya aur sethji bhi asif ko chicken laane ko bol kar use ek 500 ka note dene lagte hain,,,asif mana kar deta h aur bolta h seth ji ye rahne dijiye mai le aunga,,,,aapne pahle hi bahut de rakha h,,,,apka hi paisa h abhi h mere paas…..fir wo bike leke market ke or nikal padta hai,,

Idhar sethji ghar pahuch kar jab hall me jate hain waha unhe Gayatri aur komal Avani aur Sweta ke sath hi baate karte hue dikhi…..

Fir wo bhi wahi baith gye ek sofe par,,,,

Udhar Sweta aur Komal Gayatri ke pair ko dekh rhi thi aur unka haal puchh rhi thi,,,,asif aaj subah nhi aaya tha unka pair dekhne,,,,

Komal- Mummy thoda bahut aram ho rha h ki nhi???

Gayatri- Ha beti aram to h abhi lekin abhi bhi dard h thoda,,,kal masage ke baad kafi aram tha,,,,subah bhi thik h tha,,,,

Ye to wo marham nikal diya h tab,,,ab thoda sa dard ho rha h,,,

Sweta- are didi wo Asif aaj aaya nhi ,,,

Gayatri- nhi aaj to nhi aaya,,,usko hi mai bhi dekh rhi thi aa jata to kuchh malham laga deta,,,,

Sethji unki baate sun rhe the,,,fir bole,

Sethji- are samdhan ji aaj to muskil lag rha h asif ka to ab,,,,

Komal- kyun papa ji kya hua usko

Sethji- kuchh hua nhi bahu, aaj wo khushi me party de rha h hame aur manohar ko ,,,,gaadi aur mobile milne ki khushi me,,,,

Komal- achha,,lekin ek baar pair dekh leta to achha rahta ,,,,ab mummy ko dard bhi hoga,,,

Gayatri- are beti koi baat nhi,,,kitna to kaam karta rahta h,,,mai abhi thik hi hu,,,jana hi kaha h,,,,aram hi to karna h,,,,kar lene do aaj party ,,,,,kal dekh lega,,,,

Sethji- ha bahu,,aur dard jyada hai to wo to yahi h kaha ja rha h,,,bolo dena turant hazir ho jayega,,,,abhi wo bazar gya h,,,,,

Komal- thik h papa ji,,,kar lijiye aap log party,,,fir kal se Shadi ke kaam me waise bhi busy bahut ho jayenge,,,,

Sethji- Ha bahu,,,wo payal ke ghar se bhi phone aaya tha,,,,wo log to tilak ke liye bol rhe hain,,,,ab itne kam samay me ye sab kaise karenge….

Swati- Ab ye achanak se tilak baraksha kaha se aa gya ji,,,,

Sethji- Are wo bhi Neta giri me lage hain to unko bhi dikhana h duniya ko samaj ko to apne yaha bula rhe hain,,,ladke ko tilak lagane aur kuch bhent chadhane ke liye,,,,,

Dekho baat karta hu raat me khane ke baad fir kuchh tai hoga to batata hu,,,fir aise hi baate karke sab apne apne kaam me lag gye,,,

Idhar asif bike leke market ja rha tha,,,jaisa ki pahle hi bataya tha market Arushi aur Sandhya ke Ghar se East side me h aur Bageech West me,,,,to asif usi raste se bazar ja rha tha,,,

Jaate samay use dono hi nhi dikhi wo fir market chala gya,,,,idhar manohar ghar aake asif ki party wali baat ghar me batate hain,,,

Sandhya ki mummy ek bar ko thoda gusaa gyi thi,,,,fir maan gyi thik h kar lo party lekin jyada nhi pina aur apna wo murga chicken jo bhi h mere kitchen me nhi aana chahiye,,,apna bahar ya anagan me kahi bana lena…..

Sandhya asif ke aane ki baat sunke bahut ajeeb sa feel kar rhi thi,,,wo aaj mere ghar aayega,,,kya karungi mai,,,,wo soch rhi thi,,,,

Sandhya is soch me arushi se milne chali jaati hai,,,,arushi ko wo asif ke aane ko baat batati hai,,,arushi smile karte hue,,,

Arushi- Lag rha h majnu apni laila le milne ke liye pagal ho rha h???

Sandhya- dhatt pagal kaisi baat kar rhi h,,,,wo to tera majnu h…

Arushi- mera wala to hostel me padhai kar rha h,,,,ye baat usko bhi pata lag gyi h,,,,,ab wo tere pichhe pada hai,,,,

Sandhya- ye to bahut bekar h fir,,,,itni jaldi tumhe chhod ke mere picche ab pada h kal to kisi aur ke pichhe bhagega aise to,,,

Arushi- dhire se use bahlate hue,,,,,are wo to shuru se hi tujhe chahta h,,,,maine dekha h uski ankho me,,,wo to us din kismat hi h aisi bani ki mere se baat start ho gyi,,,

Sandhya- to ab mai kya karu,,,

Arushi- dekh mai to bolti hu tu bas usse dosti karle,,,dekh fir kaisa h, achha lage to aage badhna nhi to fir tum apne raste wo apne,,,

Sandhya- ghabrate hue---usse dosti,,,bhakk,,,aur check karke bhi kya hoga, koun sa mere se shadi karega wo…

Arushi- wo to kar lega tu agar ha bolegi to,,,teri jaisi achhi aur sundar ladki use kaha milegi,,,,,lekin dikkat h apne ghar walo ki,,,

Sandhya- dhatt kuchh bhi bolti h,,,fir sharmati hui thoda soch kar,,,,

Sandhya- to fir tumhara aur uska ab kuchh nhi h??

Arushi smile karte hue: Hamara waise bhi kuchh nhi tha,,,wo to mai hi behak gyi thi,,,,,lekin tumne fir mujhe samjhaya aur fir meri to shadi bhi fix ho gyi h,,,isliye mai to ab usse dur hi achhi hu,,,,

Sandhya man hi man khush hote hue fir boli- achha dekho kya hota h,,,lekin agar usne kuchh bhi badtamiji ki na to mai uska bura haal kar dungi ,,,wo upar se dikhane ke liye gusse me boli,,,

Arushi- smile karte hue, ha ye hui na baat , apne hisab se try karo achha lage to thik nhi to bahut ladke pade hai duniya me,,,,arushi ne uska sath dete hue kaha,,,

Sandhya- thoda ghbrate hue: arsuhi tu bhi aa ja na mujhe dar lag rha h …

Arushi uska hath pakad ke dhire se- dar kis baat ka kaun sa wo tere bedroom me ghus rha h khana banayega khayega aur chala jayega,,,thodi bahut baat cheet kar lena,,,,

Sandhya- smile karte hue,,,,ha bedroom me to tere hi aata h wo use chhedte hue boli,,,

Arushi- to tu bhi le ja aaj apne bedroom me,,,,le le uske sath maja,,,mai to saali hu uski khidki khol dena mai dekh lungi,,,,mere kaam aayega shadi ke baad,,,,bolke uska haath daba ke hasne lagti hai,,,

Sandhya- chhi gandi kahi ki,,,,chal achha ab mai chalti hu,,,ek baar aa jana thodi der ke liye,,,,

Arushi – smie karte hue,,,thik h baba aa jaungi ,,,,jija ji se milne,,,

Sandhya uske kandhe pe marti hui smile karke nikal gyi ,,,,

Sandhya ghar aake apne kamre me chali jaati hai,fir wo sochti h asif bhi aane wala hoga,,wo fir washroom jake facewash se muh dhul ke aake achhe se towel se apna sundar chehra saaf karti hai,,,fir wo thoda sa make up karti hai,,,halki si lipstick laga ke wo ek baar khud ko mirror me dekhti hai,,,,,fir use kuchh kami lagti hai,,,,wo almari khol ke ek chhoti si bindi apne maathe pe laga ke ek baar khud ko mirror me fir se dekhti hai,,,,isbar wo khud ko dekh ke santust ho gyi thi,,,,bahut khubsurat lag rhi thi wo,,,gore gaal, Kaale baal jo usne ikattha karke jude me bandh rakhe the,,,,fir wo unhe khol deti hai,,,,pure kaale black shine karte hue uske baal uske kamar se hote hue chutado ke upar tak aa rhe the,,,,,





Ab wo unhe salike se pakad kar aise hi khule rakh ke ek juda laga deti hai,,,,2-3 baal uske gaalo ko aake chhu ja rhe the,,,,aise hi wo apne ko thodi der nihar kar fir wapas bahar ki or aa jati hai,,,,,