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Wahi dusri or

Location :- kulbhata

Naina or uske dost aaj subah hi rajsthan pahunch gaye, jaha unhone kuch der ek hotel me rest ker nikal pade apne aage ki safar ki or yani ki kulbhata ki or.

Gadi veer chala raha tha or preety uske sath aage bethi thi , or naina humesha ki tarah piche bethi usi kitab me dubi hui thi.

Veer preety k sath gadi chalate hue thodi romantic baate ker raha tha.

Veer naina se ;- yaar naina ab or kitna time lagega humare maksad pura hone ko .

Naina bhi masti me uska sath dete hue :- wo m bhala keSe batau , vese mere hone wale jiju ,kya m puch sakti hu , aapko itni jaldi kyu h bhala.

Veer :- wo kya h na sali sahiba , aapki friend , yani meri soni gf ne kal hi mujse shikayat ki ki hume relation me aaye itne din ho gaye , per m use ek Romantic date pe bhi na le gaye.

Naina preety ko chedte hue :- oh oh matlab humari preetu ko romantic date p jana h jiju k sath or wo bhi romantic.

Preety sharmate hue ek mukka veer ko marte hue :- jhute mane kab bola ese.

Veer :- are kal hi to tum bol rahi thi ki tum ki m tumhe time hi ni deta , jab hum hotel me ruke or naina kuch der k liye bahar gayi thi.

Preety :- jhute kahike mane esa kuch ni bola , kal to vese bhi us time humne kissing hi to ki thi.

Preety josh josh me bol to gayi per jab use ahasas hua apni galti ka to vo sharam k mare lal ho gayi.

Naina sitti marte hue :- oh ho to isliye mujhe kal akele jane ko insist kiya ja raha tha.

Preety or veer to sharm k mare laal ho gaye , jinhe dekh naina haste hue boli.

Naina :- are yaar tum dono sharma kyu rahe ho , aajkal ye sab to normal h couples me or mujhse kya sharmana , friends m ye sab baate hona common hoti h.

Yu hi naina or uske dost masti kerte hue aage bad rahe the ki tabhi 2 ganv vale unhe lift k liye hath dikhate hue dikhe .

Naina ne veer ko jeep rokne ko kaha ,

Veer :- kya hua kaka kidher jana h aap logo ko.

Aadmi :- bhaya hume to is manhoos jagah se kayi bhi dur jana h bas , vese tum log kidher ja rahe ho , yaha k to ni lag rahe .

Veer :- ha kaka hum pardesi h , or abhi kulbhata ganv ja rahe h.

Kulbhata ka naam sun un dono k r
Chahre k hav bhav hi badal gaye ,jinhe dekh naina bol padi.

Naina :- kya hua kaka , aapke chahre ka rang kyu ud gaya yu achank.

Dusra admi :- bacho kyu apni mot ko nyota de rahe ho , us manhoos ganv me jaker.

Preety :- kyu esa kya h bhala vaha jo aap log us ganv ko manhoos bol rahe ho.

Aadmi 2 :- tum pardesi ho isliye ni jante , are waha bharamrakshaso ka dera h , jinhone waha aatank machaya hua h , unhone shrap k kaaran log pyaas se mar rahe h.

Preety swaliya najar se naina ko dekhte hue :-. Braham rakshas .

Naina :- hmm , braham rakshas , inki kahaniya to bahut suni thi , lagta h jald hi mulakat bhi hone wali h.

Veer :- suna to mane bhi h inke bare me naina , per ye hote kya h.

Naina :- ye danvo ki sabse khatarnak prajati h veer , jinhe islam me jinh bhi kaha jata h , agar ye kisi ko dost bana le to usko raja bana dete h or ager dushman bana le to usko barbad hone se koi ni bacha sakta.




Or inme braham rakshasi to sabse jyada khatarnak hoti h , kyunki kaha jata h , jab 100 dayan marti h , jab ek braham rakshasi peda hoti h.




Aadmi :- wo jo bhi ho , hum yo yahi salah denge ki aap log kulbhata jane ka apna khyal chod do.

Naina :- jana to hume hoga hi kaka.

Tabhi us aadmi ki najar naina ki water bottle pe padi , jo uske bag k side m lagi thi.

Admi :- beti thoda pani milega, humne 2 din se pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi h.

Naina :- ha kyu ni kaka

Naina ne jese hi bottle unhe di to dono bacho ki tarah pahale pani pine ko tarasne lage .

Naina :- are aaram se , ek ek kerke piyo .

Dono ne adha adha ker puri bottle khali ker di , lekin unko tripti mil gayi.

Naina :-. Preety esa kero tum dono kaka ko aage shahar chod ker aajao ,itna m or veer ganv me jaker chanbin kerte h thodi , vese bhi ganv pas me hi h yaha se

Or ha (apne bag se ek or bottle nikalte hue) lo ise apne sath rakh lo ,pyaas lage to isi se pani pina ,kyunki mujhe shak h brahamrakshaso ka sirf is ganv tak hi shrap simit ni h, isliye shahar pahuchne tak kahi mat rukna or ho sake to sham hone se pahale pahale wapas lot aana.

Preety :- ok sister ,(un dono se ) chaliye kaka log aapko shahar tak chod dete h.

Fir preety nikal padi unlogo ko shahar chodne or veer or naina nikal pade kulbhata ki or.

Naina or veer jaise hi ganv me enter kerte h to pate h ki pura ganv hi viran hua pada h , ab to bache kuche log bhi shayad waha se bhag chuke the.

Veer :-. Ye kya naina ye ganv to pura viran ho gaya h.

Naina :- brahamrakshaso ka log h esa veer.

Kuch der wo yu hi ganv ghumte rahe , per unhe waha koi na mila, aabhi vo ye soch ker ki ab ganv me koi ni h vo lotne k liye mude hi the ki , ek jhopadi numa ghar se unhe kuch aawaj aayi.

Jo kisi bujurg lady ki pyas se tadapte hue pani mangne ki thi

Veer or naina turant us or ghar me gaye to paya ki ek bujurg orat jo dekne se hi pata chal raha tha ki vo bahut bimar h , wo pani k liye tadaf rahi thi or wahi pass me ek admi or ek orat jo us orat k beta or bahu lag rahe the , wo apne sir pe hath rakh ro rahe the.

Veer :- kya hua , aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or ye dadi kabse pani mang rahi h , aap inhe pani kyu ni de rahe.

Veer or naina ko jese hi wo aadmi or orat dekhte h to chonk jate h or unse puchte h ki vo kon h.

Tab naina apna or veer ka intro unhe deti h,

Admi apni majburi pe rrota hua :- kaha se lau m beti pani , kitna abhaga or nikama beta hu m , yaha meri maa pyas se tadaf rahi h or m unhe pani tak ni pila la raha.

Kyu , kyunki un dushto ne esa shrapit ker diya h hamare ek lote kue ko , ki jo uska pani pita h , wo aatmhatya ker leta h.

Naina :- per ye braham rakshas aap logo k piche kyu pade h , kuch to kaaran hoga na iske piche .

Orat :- kaaran h beti , kuch saal pahale ki baat h , ganv k kuch log raat ko khana khane k baad ser k liye nikale the , tabhi ganv k bahar unhe 2 ghade mile ek jagah , jinka muh lal kapde se bandha hua tha

Unlogo ne jab us kapde ko hatha ker ghadhe me dekha to paya ki wo ghade khun se labalab bhare hue the

Unlogo ne bina kuch soche samjhe un ghado ko tod dala , kala jadu samjh .

Tabse is ganv me ye sab chalu hua, aaye din log bimari se marne lage , tab humare bujurgo ne bataya ki wo ghade brahamrakshaso ki amant thi or humne unhe tod ker bahut badi galti ki h , isse pahale kuch or bura ho , hume ek mahapuja karwani hogi

Lekin logo ne kisi ki na suni or fir dhire dhire ye halat ho gaye h ganv k ,un brabamrakshaso ne kue ko shrapit ker diya h,

Jiske chalte ek ek ker sab yaha se chale gaye , per meri sasu ma bimar h , unse ab chala tak ni jata , isliye hum yaha se ni ja sake or sasu ma ko chod k jane ka sawal hi paida ni hota.

Naina :- aap sab chinta mat kijiye ,ab maa kali ki kripa se sab thik ho jayega , m is samsya ka koi samadhan jarur karungi

Naina ne ashvasan to dediya ,lekin unse dadi ki ye halat dekhi ni ja rahi thi , per wo abhi kuch ker ni sakti thi , kyunki uski dono bottle ab uske pas ni thi.

Veer ko tabhi ek idea aaya , usne apni powers ka use kerte hue turant 3 4 pani ki bottle apne bag me mangwa li.

Veer Apne bag se bottle nikal us orat ki bahu ko dete hue :- ye lilijiye mere pas pani h ,aap jaldi se dadi ko pila dijiye or aap log bhi pi lijiye.

(Naina se) hume rajsthan ki bhari garmi me safar kerna tha na , isliye mane pahale hi kuch bottle kharid li thi , taki kaam aajaye or dekho aagayi na kam.

Naina kuch ni bolti or muskura deti h , veer ki bottle 2.5 ltr ki thi , jisse us parivar ne ji bhar k pani piya , jinse unhe tripti mili , jiske liye unhone bahut bahut dhanyawad kiya naina ka.

Ab naina or veer vahi ruk gaye or preety k lotne ka wait kerne lage.

Wahi dusri or

Naina se vida le un donon ko chodne preety nikal padi ,Preety gadi drive ker rahi thi or wo dono aadmi piche bethe the , tabhi ek kahi se 2 kide udte hue aaye or unke dono ke khule muh me jaldi se ghus gaye.

Ye koi sadharan kide ni the , ye braham rakshaso k bheje hue shetan the , jo kisi k bhi sharir m ghus ker uski pyas ko bhada dete the.

Ek kide ne preety k pass aane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin tabhi uske nishan se ek adrishy roshni nikal usse rakrayi or vo jal gaya.

Un kido k jate hi un dono ki pyas badh gayi or wo preety se pani mangne lage.

Preety ne unhe pani ki bottle dedi ,jisse pani piker un logo ki pyas to shant ho gayi , per kuch der baad vo vapas pani pani kerne lage.

Preety ko ab samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare , usne un logo ko samjhaya ki shahr aane tak ka wait kare or gadi tez chalane lagi.

Lekin tabhi achanak se gadi bhi kharab ho gayi , preety gadi check kerne niche utari to unme se ek aadmi ki najar sadak k ek or bane kue pe gayi

Jise dekhte hi wo aadmi kushi se dusre se bola.

Admi :-. Dekh bhai waha ek kua h , chal chalker pani pite h.

Dusre ne bhi uske ha me ha milayi or wo kue ki or nikal pade .

Jeep ka bonut khula hone ki vajah se preety unko jate hue ni dekh payi, or isi bich wo kue k pas pahunch gaye or pani nikalne lage.

Ya preety ne bonut jese hi niche kiya or unlogo ko na paya to idher udher dekhne lagi , tab uski najar us or padi, jaha wo dono kue se pani nikal rahe the.

Preety chilayi :- wo pani mat pina , yaha pani pina sahi ni h.

Admi :- beti ab hum us manhoos ganv se dur aachuke h , ab chinta mat kero or tum bhi aaker pani pilo.

Preety ko na jane kyu ye sab sahi ni lag raha tha , isliye wo unki or dodi

Lekin tab tak wo dono pani pi chuke the or pani pite hi wo dono sammohit ho gaye or wo usi kue me kud gaye

Preety ne apni shaktiyo se unhe khichne ki koshis ki , lekin use esa mahasus hua ki ander se ek bahut hi takatwar shakti unhe khich rahi h .

Jiske aage preety kamjor pad gayi or wo log kue me ja gire.

Preety glani mahasoos kerti hui kafi der waha roti rahi , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski laparwahi se 2 jane gayi.

Lekin kuch der m usne khud ko sambhala or apni gadi k sath teleport ho gayi.

Uske waha se jate hi wo kua bhi gayab ho gaya , kulbhata ka rihayshi area bhale hi kam ho , per uska sunsan area bahut bada tha , jiske chalte abhi preety ne kulbhata ki sima par na ki thi.

Or isliye brahamrakshaso k jaal m fas gayi , kyunki wo kua bas un rakshaso ki maya thi , un dono ko fasane k liye.

Preety turant teleport ho ganv pahunch gayi naina k pas or sharminda hote hue sari ghatna batayi .

Naina ne bhi use samjhaya ki jo hua usme uski koi galti ni thi , fir naina boli

Naina :- kaka aap logo ne us ghade ko fod k bahut badi galti ki thi , kyunki wo khun k ghade un logo ka bhojan or shetan ko chadaya jane wala bhog tha

Ab usi ki bharpayi k liye wo rakshas aap sab ke khun k pyase ho chuke h , hume kal subah hi kuch kerna hoga.

Kyunki ab raat ho chuki h or is time kuch kerna mot ko davat dena h.

Naina ki baat se sab sahamat ho gaye or sab sone chale gaye

Sone se pahale naina ne ghar k charo or ek suraksha kakavach bana diya tha , taki koi problem na ho.

Wahi dusri or.

Markesh to gusse se lagal hue ja raha tha , kyunki abhi abhi kubdi ne use khabar di thi ki komolika ko bhi kisi ne maar diya h.

Markesh :-. Ahhhhh, aakhir kon h wo kamina jisne hum rakshaso ki nak me dam ker rakha h .

Usne sirf komolika ko hi ni mara kubdi, usne aaj hum trittyao ki ijat ko kuchal dala h.

Kya sochegi danav jati ki unka raja samrat or na hi uska bhai markesh , ek danavdasi ko na bacha paya.

Wo bhi us danavdasi ko jiske bhagwan or koi ni bhaiya samraat the.

Kubdi :-. Malik m us hatyare k baare m kuch batana chahti hu.

Markesh kubdi ka gala gala pakad :- tu to kuch bol hi mat bhudiya, tere chakkar me humari jo bejiti hui h use hum bhule ni h .

Us do kodi ki brahamrakshasi ne mujhe yani ki trittyao k yuvraj ko na keval haraya , balki mujhe jinda chod mera ghor apman bhi kiya h.

(Akhir kya hua tha markesh k sath , wo aage ki update m pata chalega.)

Kubdi gidgidate hue :- malik mafi , mafi , ek aakhiri moka dedo , is baar jo mujhe baat pata chali h , wo 100% sach h or humare liye ek achi khabar bhi.

Markesh ne usko chodte hue kaha :- bata .

Kubdi :- malik mujhe pata chal gaya h ki kisne mara h komolika ko or mujhe yahi lag raha h ki , hamare us tritiya senik ko bhi usne hi mara hoga.

Markesh gusse se :-. Saf saf bol kubdi kon h vo , koi dev h , yaksh h ya koi wohi dagabaj brahm rakshas


Kubdi :- koi dev ya asur ni malik , keval 3 insano ne mara h komolika ko.

Markesh gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahi h tu bhudiya , sathiya to ni gayi h na tu .

Kubdi :- malik me jo bhi kah rahi hu sach hi kah rahi hu ,mene apni ek sevika ko bheja tha komolika k pas kisi kam se.

Usne waha jaker apni aankho se dekha 3 insano ne komolika or uske bete ko marte hue.

Unme se ek ladki k pas ek divya yantra tha malik.

Markesh :- ager esa h to is vakt kaha h vo log kubdi bata mujhe , m uska abhi ant karunga.

Kubdi :-uski jarurat ni h malik , wo log khud hi mot k muh me ja rahe h


Markesh :- kahana kya chahti h tu kkubdi.

Kubdi :- yahi ki malik , na jane kyu wo log aaap ko dhund rahe h or aapko dhundte dhundte ab vo log aapke diye komolika k locket ki madad se kulbhata pahunch gaye h.

Markesh :- kya kul bhata

Haha ab aayega maja jab mere 2 dushmano ki aaps me bhidant hogi , or is ladayi me koi bhi jite kubdi fayda to humara hi hoga .

(Note :- kubdi ki sevika ko ye pata ni chala tha ki preeti ek tritya h or na hi veer ki shakti k bare me use kuch khas pata chala)

Ye bol markesh hasne laga or kubdi bhi .

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned


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Bas yahi to karan h bhai pahale regular update isliye hi aate the kyunki regular or dher sare review aate the lekin ab uska ulta ho raha h review kam aate h isliye likhne m maja ni aata, or uper se is samay preshaniya to itni h pucho mat ye 2020 bahut kharab chal raha h , ghar m 2 deaths papa ki tabiyat or kam ki tension is chalker m akhir kRu kya m
Yaar ye baat aapki Sahi hai review nhi Milne ke chakkr main ,,, story nhi likh rhe ho and ye bilkul Sahi Kaha 2020 se better to 2019 tha sala jbse shuru hua tbse afat hai ye covid-19 aur Dimag kharab krdia lockdown ne
 

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Agle din karan or jyoti sabse pahale dhyan lagate h or fir naha dhoke humesha ki tarah mandir jaker aate h jinke sath aaj unka pura parivar hota h.

Karan ne apni sari bahano k sath milker mahadev ki puja ki , or fir wo sab ghar lot aaye.

Ghar pahunch karan kavya k pas gaya or unhe kuch dete hue bola.

Karan :- choti maa lijiye.

Kavya :- ye kya h lalla

Karan :-. Ye wohi papers h choti ma jispe sign us din papa se karva k unhe barbad kiya tha.

In paper k according ab hamari company ki malkin aap ho

Kavya karan ki or papers wapas badha k boli.

Kavya :- ni beta ye m ni rakh sakti , pahali baat to mane bahut paap kiye h us dusht aadmi ka sath deker bhale hi wo meri majburi hi kyu na ho.

Or dusri baat beta isper mujhse pahale or mujhse jyada hak tumhara h mere laal , isliye tum apne pass hi rakho.

Karan :- choti maa ye us dusht ki paap ki kamayi ni , balki aapko khud ki mahanat se mila aapka hak h , m janta hu mummy k sath or unke jane k baad bhi aapne is company ko aage bhadane m bahut mahanat ki h , isliye ye aapka karmfal h.

Or dusri baat choti maa , in per hum se pahale humari maa ka haq h or ye haq m apni maa , yani apni choti maa ko hi de raha hu.

Kyunki ager asha maa k baad ager mujhe or meri gudiya ko kisi se shashwat prem mila , wo aap yani meri choti ma hi to h.

Karan k dil me apne liye itna prem or itna saman dekh kavya khud ko rok na payi or khushi k ansu k sath karan ko sine se laga liya

Dono maa bete bina kuch bole kafi der gale lage rahe , kyunki kukuch bhavnao ko jatane k liye shabdo ki avashyakata ni hoti.

Fir karan ne kavya ko vo papers sambhla diye or fir karan hall me jaker beth gaya , jaha uski sari bahane uska wait ker rahi thi.

Karan jaker un sab k bich beth gaya or masti majak kerne laga , thodi der baad kavya aayi or boli.

Kavya :- karan beta mujhe tumse ek request kerni h.

Jyoti :- ye kya choti ma aPne to hume ekdam paraya ker diya , aap humari maa ho , aap request ni aap order dijiye.

Kavya :- beta meri icha h ki tum ab wapas apne ghar yani yahi lot aayo beta , ab to sab kuch sahi bhi hochuka h na beta , to ab apne ghar lot aao na beta , jab se tumne ye ghar choda tha , to jese is ghar ki ronak hi khatam ho gayi , didi(asha) k basaye hue is pyare ghar ne apni aatma hi kho di .

Shivani :- mumma thik bol rahi h bhaiyu, jabse didu or aap yaha se gaye , tabse kuch bhi acha ni lagta , please lot aaiye na bhaiyu.

Karan :- hamari princes kuch kahe or hum na kare kabhi esa ho sakta h , jyoti chal apni princess ka order aaya h , abhi chal ker packing kerte h.

Kavya :- chalo beta m bhi tumhare sath chalti hu , tumhari packing m help bhi ho jayegi.

Karan :- are choti ma iski kya jarurat h , hum ker lenge na.

Kavya :- tum dono ko kis chij ki jarurat h kiski ni ye apni choti maa ko mat sikhao , abhi tum dono itne bhi bade ni hue ho ki apni choti maa k hote hue kaam kero.

Kavya ne ye baat bilkul ek maa ki apne bacho pe haq jamate hue boli thi , jisse karan or jyoti ko bahut khushi mili.

Fir karan or jyoti kavya or sonam k sath nikal pade dusre ghar ki or , kavya or jyoti gadi me thi or karan sonam k sath bike p gaya hua tha.shivani wahi ghar pe ruk ker karan k kamre ki saaf safayi karwane lagi

Sonam karan se kuch jyada hi chipak ker bethi thi , karan ko pahale to kuch ajib laga , per fir usne is baat ko najar andaaz kerte hue bike chalane laga .

Karib 20 min baad sab ghar pahunch gaye , karan or jyoti ne bhale hi is ghar me bahut kam time hi gujara ho , per ghar to ghar hi hota h or uper se ye karan ki khud ki mahanat se kamaya ghar tha

Karan or jyoti ko bahut acha laga itne din baad apne is ghar me lot ker , per thoda dukh bhi tha ki ab is ghar ko wo chod ker jaa rahehe h.

Kavya is baat ko samjhte hue :- beta dukhi kyu hote ho , hum yaha aate rahe karenge na , or vese bhi mere liye ye ghar ki value us ghar se jyada h , kyunki ye mere bacho ki khud ki kamayi h .

Fir jyoti or kavya packing me lag gayi ,karan bhi unki help kerne ko hua per undono ne use mana ker diya.

Karan chupchap aaker sofe pe beth gaya , tabhi uski najar sonam pe padi jo udaas si bethi thi , jise dekh karan bola.

Karan :- sonu jara yaha to aao.

Sonu dusre sofe se utha karan k side m beth jate h .

Karan pyaar se uske gal sahalate hue bola :- kya baat h meri gudiya itni udaas kyu h.

Sonam karan k sine se lag :- bhaiya mujhe khushi h ki aapki sab family problem ab khatam ho gayi ,or ab wapas apne ghar lot rahe ho.

Per bhaiya aapke jane k baad m to fir se akeli ho jaungi na , ha janti hu ki aap mujhse milte raha karoge , per bhai fir bhi aap meri life ka wo hissa ban chuke ho ki ek pal bhi aapke bina rahana mujhe acha ni lagta.

Bas isliye udaas hu.

Karan halka sa haste hue :- acha to isliye meri pyari sonu udas h , are pagli tu itna sa bhi na samjhi , jese tu apne bhaiya k bina ni rah sakti vese tere bhaiya bhi to tere bina ab ni rah sakte .

Or kisne kaha ki m tumse door ho raha hu , hamare ghar keval m or jyoti hi ni , balki ab vaha humare parivar ka sabse naya or sabse pyara sadasya yani meri sonu bhi jayegi.

Sonam khush hote hue :- kya sachi bhaiya.

Tabhi kavya aaker boli ,

Kavya :- ha beti tum bhi humare sath chal rahi ho or tumhari packing bhi abhi kuch der m ho jayegi.

Sonam khushi se :- thank you so much aunty .

Kavya :- aunty ni beta , tumhe mere lalla or beti ne apni bahan banaya h , us nate m bhi tumhari maa hui , isliye aaj se tum bhi mujhe choti maa bulaogi.

Sonam ye sun emotional ho gayi or ruansi aawaz me boli :- ji choti ma

Kavya sonam ki ruansi aawaz sun ghabra k boli :- kya hua beti tu ro kyu rahi h

Sonam nam ankho se :- ye to khushi k aansu h choti maa , kya ek baar m aapke gale lag sakti hu maa.

Sonam k muh se maa shabd sunte hi kavya ne jhat se sonam ko gale laga liya , or sonam bhi kavya se ese lipat gayi , ki unke bich se ek hava ka jhonka bhi na gujar sake.

Or fir kafi der tak kavya se liptker sonam maa ki us mamta ka ahsaas kerne lagi , jo use jindagi me aaj pahali baar jo mil rahi thi.

Kyunki bechari ne jabse hosh sambhala khud ko orphanage me hi paya , jaha ka malik acha tha , jisse use kuch had tak pita ka prem to mila , kyunki wo ashram k sabhi bacho ko apne bacho jese pyaar kerta tha , lekin kabhi maa ki mamta ki chav na mili.

Karan kr jyoti se milne k baD use ek bhai bahan ka pyaar to mila , lekin ma ka pyar jesa pyaar or kaha mil sakta h .

Maa k prem ko prapt kerne k liye to ishvar ne manav avtar lene ka bahana kiya , maa k prem k khatir hi to shani ne 3no loko me ek vakt hahakar macha dala tha .

Usi shashvat prem ko anubhav ker aaj sonam fule na sama rahi thi , wo kafi der tak kavya k gale lagi rahi.

Fir kavya ne sonam ko sambhala or fir sari packing ker sabhi nikal pade apne purane ghar ki or

Jab ghar pahunche to shivani aarti ki thali leker khadi thi, karan ne muskurate hue pucha.

Karan :- are princess ye sab kya h

Shivani :- bhaiyu humari family ki sabse new member , yani ki humari sonam didi humare sath rahane aayi h na ,

Jyoti :- per choti sonu konsa pahali baar humare ghar aayi h jo ye thali leker aayi ho.

Shivani :- offo didu pahale puri bat yo suno, sonu didi akele hi thodi aayi h unke sath ek nanhe mahaman or bhi to h , kyu h na di.

Sonam hath me ladoo gopal liye hue :- ha meri princess.

Fir shivani ne ladoo gopal ki vese hi aarti ker or tilak laga welcome kiya ,jese kisi family k new member ka kiya jata h.

Or fir karan or jyoti ne rahane k liye apna purana hi room choose kiya , jaha unhonne apna sara bachpan gujara tha.

Jyoti :- bhai kitna acha lag raha h na wapas yaha lot ker , hum pichle kuch samay me kaha kaha ni rahe rahe, lekin esa ssukh or kahi na mila jesa yaha lot ker mila , h na bhai.

Karan pyar se karan ko baho me leker bed pee lette hue :-. Ha gudiya tera kahana bilkul sahi h , or esa isliye h kyunki humne apna sara bachpan yahi gujara h ,chahe sukh ho ya dukh , khushi ho ya dukh chahe kesa bhi samay raha ho , humne apna har samay yahi to gujara.

Jyoti kuch ni boli or karan se chipker, leti rahi , or kuch der me packing or sare saman ko shift kerne ki thakan k kaaran use nind aagayi.

Karan ne jab ye dekh wo chupchap waha se utha or jyoti ko thik se leta ker uske dono gal chum liye , jisse soti hui jyoti k chahre p bhi muskan aagayi.

Fir karan chupchap waha se bagar chala gaya , kyunki wo jyoti ko disturb ni kerna chahta tha , or use nind bhi ni aarahi thi.

Karan fir kavya k kamre ki or badha to usne waha dekha ki kavya to sonam k sath busy h , isliye usne unhe bhi disturb kerna sahi na samjha

Karan shivani k room ki or gaya to usne paya uski princess padhai ker rahi h.

Shivani ki najar jese hi karan pe padi to vo boli.

Shivani :- are bhaiya aap bahar kyu khade h , ander aaiye na.

Karan ander aate hue :- kya ker rahi h meri princess.

Shivani :- bas apna holiday homework ker rahi thi bhaiya , aap bilkul sahi time p aaye , abhi abhi hi mane apna homework complete kiya.

Karan :- are wah ye to bahut achi baat h , lekin abhi to vacation khatam hone m to bahut time h na , fir itni bhi kya jaldi thi.

Shivani karan se gale lagte hue:- wo isliye bhaiya , taki m apni baki ka pura vacation apke sath enjoy ker saku.

Bhaiya aapne abhi tak bataya ni hum kab ghumne jayenge

Karan :- are meri bhulakad princess aapne or apki sari didiyo ne abhi tak mujhe bataya hi kaha ki hume jana kaha h , to m kese batau.

Shivani apne sir p hath marte hue :- uff sahi bole aap bhaiya , m bhi na ek no ki bhulakad ho chuki hu.

Karan shivani ko chedte hue :- hmm , vese baar bar bhulna , budape ki nishani hota h.

Shivani :- aap bolna kya chahte ho bhai.

Karan :- yahi ki lagta h humari princess dadi ma banti ja rahi h.

Shivani :- kya bole bhai m dadi aama ,ruko m abhi aapko batati hu.

Ye bol shivani karan ko takiye se marne lagi , kuch der yu hi hasi majak k baad

Karan chat ki or jate hue :- m thodi der k liye chat pe ja raha hu gudiya , itna tum baki sabko bula lo , or ha jyoti ko disdisturb mat kerna.

Shivani :-ok bhai.

Karan firse majak kerte hue :- or ha is baar mat bhul jana dadi ma.

Ye bol karan haste hue uper bhag gaya or shivani apna per patak ke wapas apne kamre me chali gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Subah hote hi naina veer or preety us kue ki or gayi.

Wo admi jiske yaha naina ruki thi vo bola.

Aadmi :- yahi h vo kua beti , jisne na jane kitne bekasuro ki bali leli .

Naina kue ki or badhi or ankhe band ker apna yantr nikal kuch mantra padh us kue pe ferne lagi.

Naina k kuch der yu hi yantra ko ferne or mantra jaap k baad , use kuch drishya dikhayi diye ban aankhon me.

Naina apni ankh khol :- oh to ye baat h.

Preety :- kya hua sister kuch pata chAla.

Naina :- ha preety , ab mamla samjh aachuka h mujhe , hume ager is musibat ko khatam kerna h , to hume bhi isi kue me jana hoga.

Preety :- kya ?

Naina :- ha preety or esa kyu , wo m tumhe yu ni samjha paungi .

Mujhpe vishwas h na tumhe .

Preety naina se hath milate hue :- jaan se bhi jyada sister.

To fir teyar ho jao , humare pas ab jyada samay ni h.

Veer :- ha chalo naina hum ready h.

Naina :- veer waha bahut khatra ho sakta h , isliye please meri mano or tum yahi ruko.

Veer :- kesi baat kerti ho naina , yaad ni is safar p nikalne se pahale humne ek dusre se kya wada kiya tha , jkuch bhi ho jaye hum ek sath her musibat ka samna mil ker karenge , jiyenge to ek sath or marenge ek sath.

Naina ne veer ko khub samjhaya per veer na mana , or aakhir mr naina bhi ready ho gayi.

Naina :- ok guys , hume is kue k bilkul satah tak jana h , per ek baat ka dhyan rahe , kuch bhi ho jaye , is kue ki ek bund bhi humare sharir k ander ni jani chahiye or ha preety tum bhi is baat ka dhyan rakhna , kyunki iska asar tritiya p bhi ho sakta h shayad.

Preety :- ok captain abchale

Naina :- ha ha chalo .

Fir naina or uske dosto ne apne muh or kan kano ko ache se cover kiya or uter gaye us kue me.

Thodi der baad dubte hue jese hi vo satah pe pahunchne to naina ko chod dono heran ho gaye .

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok

Vp khud se hi baate ker raha tha

Vp :- tune khud ko or apni bahan ko to us din bacha liya , ab dekhta jinki kese tu akele apne parivar ko bachata h or kese apne rakshak ka dayitv nibhata h


Vp jor se chillaya :- jalasur prakat ho.

Vp ki aawaz sunte hi waha ek daitya prakat hua jo apne naam k aanoroop pura ka pura pani se bana hua tha or uski shakti bhi pani ko control kerne ki thi.






Jalasur :- pranam mahaprabhu.

Vp :- aagneysur prakat ho

Tabhi ek dhamake k sath waha aagneysur prakat hua jo apne naam k anusar agni se nirmit tha, uski power thi agni ko control kerna





Aagneysur :- mahaprabhu ko aagneysur ka pranam


Vp :- jalasur , aagneysur , samay aagaya h tumhara apne asur dharm nibhane ko.

Kya tum sajj ho.

Dono :- hum sajj h swami aagya dijiye hume , kya aadesh h aapka humare liye.

Vp :- uttam to suno



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Karan abhi chat pe tahal raha tha or apne aane wale jivan k bare me soch raha tha ki uske kano me ek aawaz aayi

Bhaiiiiii

Karan is aawaz ko sun chonk gaya or piche mud ker us aawaz wale ko dekh bola .

Tum....

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

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