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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

What Should Be the Future Of the Story ?


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Update-645(The Deal-1)

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Main still Mack se call par baat kar raha tha

Main- Sun taiyaari karle main aa raha hun tere village mein, kuttey ki moutt maarunga bc tujhe or naa sirf tujhe tere saare village ko khatam kar dunga main Bhenchod I'll burn that place to the fucking ground..

Mack- Stopp....Mere village ne kya bigaada hai tera..

Main- Kuch nahi ,but mujhe maja aata hai aise saamne waale ko barbaad karke maarne mein...

Mack- Ok Ok ...You won...You won... tujhe jo caahiye woh dedunga main ,just leave ...Leave us alone..

Main- Too late bitch...Mera mood badal gaya ab...khoon munh lag gaya hai mere ab aise he khaali hath nahi jaa shakta main...

Mack - What ??

Main- Yeah you heard me..

Mack-But tumhara mission toh hostages leke jaane ka tha..

Main- Actually no mera mission tujhe or teri beti ko maarke Hostages leke jaane ka tha...Toh ab dekh choice tere pass hai waise main kissi ko choices deta hun nahi but tujhe dedeta hun teri laash or teeno hostages...Ye dono cheejein dedey mujhe toh main khussi khussi chala jaaunga ,ye sab abhi khatam ho jaaega naa mujhe teri beti se koi matlab rahega or naa he tere villagers se main abhi chala jaaunga, but agar tu meri baat nahi maanega toh i promise you pehle main tere saamne teri beti ko maarunga fir tere saamne tere harr villager ko jinda jalaaunga fir tujhe maarunga or fir teeno hostages leke jaaunga ..

Nysa- What ??Noo...What the fuck is wrong with you ??

Main- A lot of things honey a whole lot of things is wrong with me .. Almost everything is wrong with me...

Nysa- You can't do that...No you can't...

Main- Hmmm..Last time jab maine check Kiya tha naa toh main MOD tha or main kuch bhi kar shakta hun ..Or tere baap ne toh itana bada reason de diya mujhe toh abtoh technically main kuch bhi kar shakta hun...Mack ,Saanp sungh gaya kya be..Kuch toh bol..

Nysa-Hey Kartik you say something,tum toh kuch karo..Why are you silent..

Kartik- Nysa my job is to protect you ,main sirf tumhe bacha shakta hun tumhare father ko nahi ..Or Mack sir agar aap mujhe sun paa rahe ho toh I'll be honest here agar aapko apni beti or apne logon ki fikar hai toh this is the best deal for you... He'll destroy everything you care for...

Nysa- What ??Noo...Dad...

Main- Yep...True that..Mack...Marr gaya kya be..?

Mack- Ok...Ok...Ok...I'll make the sacrifice...

Main- Shabbas..

Nysa-No...Fuck no dad...

Usne mujhse phone cheenaney ki koshish ki but Kartik ne pakkad liya usko..

Mack- Nysa honey it's ok...It's ok...it's bound to happen...Tum nahi jaanti isko he's a fucking lunatic woh sachmein sabkuch khatam kar dega ..And main itana bhi selfish nahi hun ki meri saalon ki mehnat or mere logon ko marr jaane dun ..I can't let people i love die...Woh village or tum mera sapna ho I've built that brick by brick and I can't let that all get destroyed.. Mera woh sapna tum continue karogi take my place...Treat those people as your own...

Nysa- Dad No...No...We can kill him..

Mack- That's even worse Nysa ..Usse maar diya toh or bura hoga sab kuch khatam ho jaaega everything literally everything..This is our best option...Let me take this fall ..

Nysa-No... Please..No...Let me die...You live...

Main- Pagal hai kya madam Teri life suru hui hai abhi uski khatam hone ko hai waise bhi...Ye kya logic hua...

Mack- Nysa...My baby...You are my greatest achievement...I know you'll fulfill my dreams...

Nysa- Dad... Please..Please..

Mack- Mr Mod ..I'm ready to accept your deal but badle mein mujhe bhi kuch caahiye...

Main- Aji haan tujhe Dene k liye he toh baitha hun main...

Mack- Dekhlo ,it's this or no deal..

Main- Ok..Ok..Bhonk..

Mack- Asian Underworld salon se mere piche padda hai jo understandable hai maine dhoka diya tha unko but main caahta hun ki mere jaane k sath sath ye dushmani bhi over ho jaaye Main thakk gaya hun Asian Underworld se bhaagte bhaagte.Aaj k baad meri beti ya mere logon ki koi dushmani nahi hogi Asian Underworld k sath naa he yelog kuch karenge tumhe and vice versa..Infact main caahta hun ki Mere village ko Asian Underworld ka part bana liya jaaye or humein Asian Underworld k niche rehke business karne diya jaaye .. They'll be officially part of Asian Underworld..

Main- Usase Kya hoga be ??

Mack- Bahot kuch I know Asian Underworld k liye ye ek bahot badi baat hai mere village k sath sath Georgia ka ek bada part Asia ko mill jaaega...And i promise Nysa humesha Elders k niche rahegi she'll be loyal to The Elders...

Main- Hmm... Interesting..Aisa hai kya ??

Mack- Yes...Elders se baat karo jaake I'm sure they'll understand...

Main- Jaane ki jarurat nahi hai abhi karleta hun main..

Mack- Stop lying to me ,Sach mein baat karo jaake or there's no deal..

Main- Abe Sachmein he baat karunga..

Mack- You can't call Elders at 2 AM...I know you're lying..Even MOD bhi aisa nahi kar shakta...

Main- Abe...Main MOD se bahot uppar hun...Chhod viswash karwa deta hun..

Maine apna Phone nikaala or elder leader Jacob ko call kiya.. Or phone turant pick hogaya saamne se ..

Main- Aaila Pehle toh I'm really sorry Master itani raatko disturb karne k liye and secondly quick question??itani raatko phone par he baithey they kya ???

Jacob- Pehle toh yahaan 7 Baje hain subah k and i wake up early ,i have work to do tumhari tarah time waste nahi karta main..

Main-Maine kab time waste Kiya...?

Jacob- Abhi kar toh rahe ho mera..

Main- I'm sorry... point par aata hun mere pass aapka purana nokar Mack hai ek baar usko prove kardo ki ye sachmein aap ho..

Jacob- I don't have to prove myself to that peasant..Abtak jinda kaise hai woh??

Main- Aapki wajah se...Abe Mack hogaya naa prove ab rukk main baat karke aata hun ,tu teri beti se goodbye karle tabtak..

Maine Nysa ka phone usko diya ,taaki woh apni Good byes bol le , because no matter what woh marrne waala tha..

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Main side mein hoke master Jacob se baat karne laga
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Jacob- What the hell is going on ??

Main- Actually..Master ek weird request ki hai Mack ne..

Jacob- Uski aukaat nahi hai humse request karne ki..

Main- arrey master aura farm matt karo sun toh lo mujhe toh samjh nahi aai uski request but aapko aajaaye maybe ,but nahi sunani toh matt suno I'll just kill him...Sorry for wasting your time...

Jacob- Waste kar he diya hai toh bata he do.

Main- So Situation ye hai ki main Mack ko maar dunga hostages bhi sahi salaamat le aaunga but Mack bol raha hai ki iske badle uski beti ko jinda chhodna padega and woh caahta hai ki uske jaane k baad uske Village ko Asian Underworld ka part bana liya jaaye officially or uski beti humesha Asian Underworld k niche rehke kaam karegi or Elders k liye humesha loyal rahegi kasam khaa legi ,kabhi betray nahi karegi etc etc..

Jacob- What ??

Main- Yeah wahi toh main sochun ki humein ghanta matlab hoga uske Village se ek baar dhoka diya hai fir dediya toh..It's a bad deal

Jacob- No..It's a great deal..Are you dumb ??Humein naa keval uska village millega balki Georgia ka woh pura hissa humaare under ho jaaega ...This is huge..

Main- Haan ye bhi bola tha usne..

Jacob- Toh ...Isase better kya hoga ,i mean come on European Underworld k log marr jaaenge jall jall k or humaare pass ek strong point ho jaaega Europe k bilkul border par this is huge ...This is big..

Main- Acha ye londiya ussi ka khoon hai dhoka dediya toh ???

Jacob- Oh come on humein dhoka Dene ki aukaat he nahi hai uski or de bhi degi toh humara kya bigaad shakti hai woh..Nothing... Literally nothing . Humein dhoka Dene ki aukaat uske baap ki nahi hui usne bhi ROW ko he dhoka diha. ..Dhoke k baad bhi uss area ka owner toh Asian Underworld rahega naa.Or Mack itana pagal nahi hai jo marrte marrte apni beti ko bhi moutt k munh mein dhakelega ...

Main-Toh haaan karun ??

Jacob- Ofcourse haan karo..We'll take his deal...

Main- Ok..But ek orr issue hai ab obviously Mack ko maarunga toh Mack ki beti mujhe thodi maaf karegi she'll be my enemy..

Jacob- 90% Asian Underworld tumhara dushman hai who gives a fuck usme ek or naam add hota hai toh..

Main- Hmm..Baat toh sahi hai..

Jacob- Yaa fir ye karo Mack ko bolo death nahi ,surrender kardey Life In Prison bhugte badhiya prison mein daal denge uske bina marre uski beti chala legi uska village..

Main- Ek second ek second hold up now...Pehle toh no..Not at all ...Iska future already likh chuka hun main you know list mein naam add karchuka hun iska main toh aapko maalum hai apna shikaar nahi chhod shakta main not at all toh isko toh marrna padega ,isko koi nahi bacha shakta ..

Jacob- Well main bacha shakta hun ,you can't say no to my order but main order dunga nahi ,warna fir tum satisfaction ka rona rotey rahoge issliye jaao lelo satisfaction.. Iski beti se ladte rehna baadmein tumhe kya he farak padega..

Main-True but ye ladki thodi tejj lagti hai mujhe..

Jacob- Well woh tumhari problem hai...Right ??Tum deal karoge usase I don't care..

Main- Oh thanks master...Thanks for the vote of confidence..

Jacob- Stop being a baby .. Ab option dediya woh nahi caahiye toh fuck you ,tumhari enemy list se mujhe koi problem nahi hai jaao ye deal done karo and i promise tumhara case jitana promise Kiya tha usase jyaada he delay karunga..

Main- Pakka??

Jacob- Promise ka matlab pakka he hota hai AP...Tu drugs wagairah le raha hai kya ??

Main- Nope..

jacob- Toh itana slow kaise hai??

Main- Aise he just kind of sleepy ,or haan drugs mujhe fast banaate hain master..

Jacob- Yeah I know..Now Go...Make the deal...Uski beti ko bol Beijing mein jaake Junior Elders ki bench k saamne pesh ho jaaye issi week...

Main- Cool..Ok Thanks..

Jacob-Also AP...Good Job...

Main- Thanks Master..

Call disconnected..

Main- Ok..Laa rey phone dey..

Maine Nysa k hath se phone cheena woh ro rahi thi..

Main- Ok Mack Sir Good news...Great news infact...Elder Leader Jacob ko Teri demands passand aai or woh happily teri beti or Tere village ko apni chattar chaaya mein le lenge.. Obviously tune teri beti ko samjha Diya hoga ki Elders ko dhoka Dene ka result kya hoga..

Mack- Yes...Yes...Woh sochegi bhi nahi aisa kabhi ..I trust her...Woh humesha loyal rahegi Elders k liye koi reason nahi degi woh Elders ko she'll be forever grateful..

Main- Good..Great...Ab jaldi se aaja yahaan and fight me i know aas pass he hai tu,You vs Me yaa teri jagah jo bhi fight karega usko leke aa..But dhyaan se choose karna aakhir Teri jindagi ka sawaal hai..

Mack- I'll be there in 10 minutes...

Main- I'm waiting..

Call disconnected...

Main-Yele...So it's a win win for all of us..

Kartik -Thanks Boss...

Main- Mention not..

Kartik- Mujhe laga tha aaj he endgame hai..

Main- Abe hatt tu bacha hai mera tujhe end karke bhalla main kya he kama lunga ...Tere liye isko jinda chhoda hai maine warna isko maarta or iske baap ko jinda chhodta kyunki fir woh badle k liye mere piche aata tabhi toh maja aata jabki ab toh sab abhi over ho jaaega ,it's not fun now...But tere liye seh lenge..Tu chinta Naa kar..

Kartik- But boss aapko toh pata hai ab humlog opposite ends par khaddey hain or sooner or later fir aisi situation aaegi..

Main- Tu chinta Naa kar main baitha hun idhar.. Samjha...Tu tension free reh.. I'll handle that shit..

Kartik- But bhai sooner or later hum mein se ek ko toh dhoka Dena he padega dusre ko ,one of us have to betray the other...It's bound to happen..

Ye sunke maine dono hathon se uske kandhe pakkade or usko apni taraf khincha..

Main- I know...Hum mein se ek ko dhoka toh dena he padega...Toh kuch bhi karna but woh shaks tu matt banana lekin remember agar woh shaks tu banta hai toh dhoka aisa dena ki yaa toh main marr jaaun yaa tu marr jaaye... Kyunki by God agar main jinda bach gaya naa toh main teri aatma takk khaa jaaunga ,I'll Reap your soul.. I'll erase everything related to you from existense..

Ye sunke Kartik literally kaanp gaya ,like physically puri body kaanp gayi uski...

Main-You have been warned..

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Main- But tu chinta Naa kar woh din aane he nahi dunga main as I said tu bacha hai mera tujhe kuch nahi hoga...

Kartik- Thanks Bhai...

Nysa- Why do you want to kill my dad ??Unhone kya bigaada hai tumhara??

Main- Nothing honestly nothing...But issue kya haina mere sath mujhe jo task milta haina obviously woh pura hota he hai but bina death or tragedy k mere mission ko main khud pura nahi maanta aise fir duniya se mera fear kam hota hai you know.. I've built my kingdom on two things and two things only that are Fear And Death... Orr mere kingdom ka maintainance bahot high hai usko pura rakhne k liye ye sab karna padta hai you know..

Nysa- So you kill people for fun..

Main- Naa naa..Fun nahi... Satisfaction...It's not fun bahot ganda kaam hai kabhi maara hai kissi ko??Nahi naa ?Maine hajaaron logon ko maara hai toh I'll tell you by experience no koi fun nahi hai usme ..But Satisfaction yes satisfaction kutt kutt k bharra hota hai you know saamne waale ki aankhon se uski life jaatey hue dekhna apne aap mein ek nasha hai and no drugs can beat this..

Nysa- So you'll kill my dad for your satisfaction??

Main- Exactly ab samjhi naa tum..

Nysa- You know main kabhi maaf nahi karungi tumhe..

Main- Hahaha... Tumhaare only family member ko tumse cheen lunga main toh yahi expect karta hun main ...Ofcourse I know...But I don't care...

Nysa- One day when you least suspect it I'll be there ..

Kartik- Nysa it's a bad idea to threaten MOD...

Main- Naa naa ..Let her speak...Go ahead...I give you permission..

Nysa-I will have my revenge...

Main-Yahi toh caahiye mujhe...That's what I need , issiliye toh tumhe jinda chhod Raha hun main ...Trust me I'll be waiting...
Tabhi bahaar ek helicopter land hua ..

Main- Tumhare Pitaji aagaye hain..Jaldi hai marrne ki lagta hai...Randy ,guys come out..

Udhar se Randy Chang Ami or C andar aaye obviously sab sun liya tha unhone bhi and idhar se Mack andar enter hua woh bhi akela ..Nysa bhaagke usase galle milli or woh usko wahin samjhaane laga....

Randy- Kartik How are you ??

Kartik- I'm good Sir .

Randy- Ye toh expect nahi kiya tha humne...

Kartik- Oh trust me Sir maine toh bilkul bhi nahi kiya tha mujhe thodi pata tha aaplog aa jaaoge...Humein toh bus itana bataya tha ki ROW k kuch log kidnap kiye hain for information..Or humein bhejdiya protection k liye ...Humein koi idea nahi tha ki aapko task denge pata hota toh pehle he na kardetey...

Randy - I know...

Kartik- Thanks again boss meri ijjat or jindagi dono bakshne k liye..

Main- Abe fir wahi baat tu apna banda hai bhosdk tujhe kuch nahi hoga samjha .Tu moujj le aise he loyal reh apne employers k liye , jaise aaj inke liye marrne ko taiyaar tha waise apne bosses k liye humesha taiyaar rehna and nobody will be able to stop you...Koi issue hai toh come to me ,main baitha hun idhar samjha..

Kartik- I know bhai..

Randy- Yeah..Tu soch bhi nahi shakta bc Teri wajah se kitane logon ki jaan bach gayi ye Nysa or uske saare villagers khatam they...Or trust me ye aisa favour bahot kam logon k liye karta hai ..Even humaare liye bhi rarely aisa kuch karega ye..

Kartik- I know Sir issiliye toh main forever grateful rahunga..

Main- Tu aish kar be..Kya rakha hai Thankyou Sorry mein..Ye Bhenchod jaaydaad naam karne lag gaya kya be...

Randy- Marrne waala hai boss toh samjha raha hoga sab...Duniya bahot kutti cheej hai...

Main- Humse jyaada kutti thodi hogi bc..

Randy- True that...Maanana padega bosss ,kya bhayanak plan banaya hai baithey-2 ...Socha bhi nahi tha aisa toh..

Main-Ye khud fans gaya isne Snow k piche bandey bheje or main Snow ko bachaane pohanch gaya toh unhone mere uppar firing ki...

Randy- Lo karlo baat isase bada gunaah kya he hoga bhalla..

Main- Bechaare unhe khud nahi pata tha kon hai ,sniper chala raha tha main unhe toh dikha bhi nahi...

Randy- Fir bhi galati toh galati hoti hai..

Chang- Or isase badi galati kya he karenge ye..

Main- Yep..Khud toh marre he sath apne boss ki gand marwa gaye...

Randy- Exactly..

Main- Arrey bus kar be hogaya hoga emotional drama pura ..Come on aaja let's fight...Maine suna hai bahot bhayanak fighter hua karta tha tu ,hum bhi toh dekhein...

Ye sunke Mack Nysa ko chhodke aage aaya ..

Mack- First of all ye deal done hai ...Tune apni jubaan di hai or MOD ki jubaan ki keemat bahot jyaada hai ye pata hai mujhe...Toh deal ye hai ki Meri Laash or 3 hostages badle mein tu mere kissi bhi sathi ko touch takk nahi karega...

Main- Yes..

Mack- Pakka??Do I got your word ??

Main- Yes...Abe Mera word pathar ki lakeer hai..

Mack- I know ,I know...Jaanta hun main tumhe ,ache se ..Tum apni baat k pakke ho...

Main- Exactly...

Mack-or main ye bhi jaanta hun ki tumhe kitana passand hai logon ko maarna..

Main- Acha..??

Mack- Yeah..You get satisfaction from this right ??You like this ??you love killing people..

Main- I don't love it bro I just get satisfaction from it..

Mack- Saikdon logon ko tum khud apne hathon se maar chuke hoge or hajaaron logon ki moutt kaa kaaran hoge tum...

Main- True...

Mack- Or I know tumne ek baar jiska naam apni list mein daal diya usko maarne k liye tum kissi bhi hadd takk jaa shakte ho..

Main- True...

Mack- Like tumhaare shikaar ko tumse koi nahi cheen shakta..

Main- 1000%...

Mack- Or tum pagal ho jaate ho jab tumhara shikaar tumse bach jaata hai ,like you can't control yourself you get insane...

Main-Oh yeah .. Satisfaction nahi milta naa fir bahot gussa aata hai tu soch bhi nahi shakta...

Mack- Yes toh unfortunately woh satisfaction tujhe aaj bhi nahi millegi...

Main- Wait what ??

Mack- You will never kill me ,I'll die on my own terms ... You'll never get satisfaction from me ...I win... Apni baat yaad rakhna baat meri laash ki hui thi...It doesn't matter how I die...Good Bye MOD ...Go fuck yourself...

Ye Bolke usne apni jeb se pistol nikaali or bina ek second hichkichaaye usne khudki khopdi mein goli maar lee...

Main- Nooooooo...

Mera thobda wahin k wahin khulla reh gaya ..He played me...He fucking Played me....Noo...No...no...no...Fuck No...No...Mera shikaar tha ye ...Nooo... Fuckkkkkkk.kkkk...No no no...Ye nahi ho shakta... I'll kill him..

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Divine
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592,307
259
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