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I have some work toh mai toh aise bhi jaag raha hu,dekhte jab tak mai jaagta tab Tak aata ya nahiLikh hi raha hu. Can't say... Mein suggest karunga ki so jao. But read aise time pe mat karna jaise subah subah... It contains erotic scenes so...Kahi subah subah hi mutthi na lag jaaye.

Apki story uss kam ke liye nahi padhta. Storyline and creativity ke liye padhta hu..Likh hi raha hu. Can't say... Mein suggest karunga ki so jao. But read aise time pe mat karna jaise subah subah... It contains erotic scenes so...Kahi subah subah hi mutthi na lag jaaye.
Mein koshish kar raha hu ki abhi hi dedu. 9k words already cross ho chuke hai. Thoda aur bacha hai.Fir tej wala update padhne so jata hu aaj ke liye, woh update bohat Bhadiya tha Egypt wala.
Mat soo na biro aa raha hai update. Writer bhai ko lagega ki sale, soo hi gaye sab toh kyuhi update du...Fir tej wala update padhne so jata hu aaj ke liye, woh update bohat Bhadiya tha Egypt wala.
Let's see. This time erotic scenes achhe hai... People will enjoy it. I think so...Apki story uss kam ke liye nahi padhta. Storyline and creativity ke liye padhta hu..
"Erotic scenes pachaa bhi leta hu kyuki naya naya jawan nahi hu na"
Mai to wait kar raha hu chahe ap post karo..... ya phir update do(ki kal ayega update).

Aaj nahi aaya to bhi it's okay,Mein koshish kar raha hu ki abhi hi dedu. 9k words already cross ho chuke hai. Thoda aur bacha hai.
Out of control hua bhi toh Jugad haiLet's see. This time erotic scenes achhe hai... People will enjoy it. I think so...![]()
That's true ,mai toh vaise bhi story ko 2 baar read kar chuka hu,aur jab bhi man karta hai read karna ka toh apni pasand ka koi bhi update uthake padhne lagta huAaj nahi aaya to bhi it's okay,
ju ne plot aisa likha hai ki re-reading mein bhi boriyat nahi aati
Nahi aisa nahi hai. Mein readers ko neend bigaadne nahi kehta kabhi. I mean yes... Agar update ko usi time padhoge jis time wo release hota hai to zyada better rehta hai. But... Uske chakkar me neend nahi kharab honi chahiye. Best time night hi hai mere updates read karne ka.Mat soo na biro aa raha hai update. Writer bhai ko lagega ki sale, soo hi gaye sab toh kyuhi update du...
Aisa nahi hota bhai Werewolf ju ko erotic scenes ke sath stroy bhi aage badhana hai, readers ke pressure mein aake main nahi chata wofy update de.Mat soo na biro aa raha hai update. Writer bhai ko lagega ki sale, soo hi gaye sab toh kyuhi update du...