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Incest Aag 🔥 Nafrat Ki (fantasy + adultery + Revenge + Incest)

Kesi lagi ap sabko story

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SHJ

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Update 1 ★
Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


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Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




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( Note : guys yar koi acha sa Naam toh suggest karo main ek new action revenge story likna Chahta ho Lekin Naam ki Nahin soj Raha please ap sab koi acha sa Naam suggest karo thank you)



Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe udte hue ayi aur Naksh ke body se takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya

Ab aghe


Jab Naksh hosh main aya toh khud ko niche Zameen per diya hua paya toh woh sochne Laga

Naksh : main Yaha kyun soya hua ho aur yeh Kya abhi todi der pahle toh 9 baj rahe the aur abhi 12 kese baj gaye Hain

Abhi yeh soch hi raha the ke waha per ek admi AA gaya aur woh Naksh ko dekar bola

Admi : Kya hua beta Tum Yaha per is tarha kyun bete hue ho

Naksh us admi ki baat sunkar kada ho jata Hain aur use Bolta hain

Naksh : Kuch Nahin kaka mujhe khud ko Samaj Nahin AA Rahi Hain le hua Kya Hain

Admi : ajeeb ho tum bi abhi todi der pahle Maine tumko Yaha dekha tha tab Tum Soo Rahe the mujhe Laga ke Tumhe Kuch ho gaya Hain ishi liye tumko dekne tha
Kher ab Tum thek ho toh yeh Pani pi lo main chalta ho

Naksh ( Pani lete hue ) : thank you kaka Pani ke Liye



Phir woh admi waha se Chala gaya aur main sochne Laga

Naksh : mujhe last baat yeh yad Hain main main Kahi jaa Raha tha aur uper muj per Kuch gira aur main behosh ho gaya

Haa yad AA gaya muj per koi pather gira tha uper se Lekin yeh Kya mujhe toh Kuch bi Nahin hua ( Apne aaspaas dekte hue ) aur naa hi woh pather Hain Yaha per phir kaha gaya

Kuch der sochne ke bad Naksh Bolta hain

Naksh : mujhe Kya bad main jaye pather mujhe toh Kuch Nahin hua mujhe Jana Hoga Yaha se ise pahle ke koi aur problem ho jaye

Phir Naksh waha se Chala jata Hain todi dor jane ke bad ek Mandir AA jata Hain Naksh waha jaakar poja karta Hain aur jab woh waha se Jane wala hota Hain ke Naksh ko ek mahatma ki awaz aati Hain

Mahatma : kaha jaa Rahe ho putra

Naksh uski awaz sun kar ruk jata Hain aur use Bolta hain

Naksh : main Kisi zarori Kam se ja Raha ho mahatma ji

Mahatma : kis baat ki chinta kar Rahe ho tum us baat ki Jo ho chuki Hain ya uski Jo hone wali Hain

Naksh : main samja Nahin mahatma ji

Mahatma : Tum samje Nahin ya na Samaj hone ka dekhawa kar Rahe ho

Naksh : maaf kijiye Lekin main apki baat Samaj Nahin pata Raha ho

Mahatma : putra tumhare Saath AK tak Jo hua Hain woh tumhari pariksha Thi jis main Tum pass ho chuke ho ab uska karmfal tumko milega

Naksh : kesi pariksha aur kesa karmfal mahatma ji

Mahatma : tumhare Saath Jo tumhare parivar ne Kiya aur tumhari premika ne Kiya hain woh aj tak tumhare Saath Jo galat hua Hain woh sab tumhari pariksha Thi jis main Tum pass ho gaye ho ab uska karmfal tumko milega artat woh Sona ( Gold 🪙 ) Jo tumko samunder main Mila tha woh tumhara apna Hain


Naksh us mahatma ki baat sunkar pahle toh heran ho jata Hain phir haste hue Bolta hain

Naksh : Kya baat hain mahatma ji subhe se apko koi aur Nahin Mila Jo mujse Mazak kar Rahe ho


Mahatma : Nahin putra main tumse Mazak Nahin kar Raha ho main Sach bol Raha ho woh sona ( gold 🪙 ) tumhare Apne kazane ka 💯 hissa Hain

Naksh : acha toh Mera Baki ka kazana kaha Hain

Mahatma : woh abhi tumko batane ka Sahi samay Nahin Hain Lekin ha ek baat main tumko zaror bataoga

Naksh : kesi baat mahatma ji boliye

Mahatma : yeh tumhara pahla janm Nahin Hain use pahle bi Tumne bohut se janm Liye Hain is sansar ki Raksha ke liye

Naksh heran hote hue Bolta hain

Naksh : yeh ap Kya bol Rahe ho mahatma ji ager aisi baat Hain toh mujhe kyun Kuch yad Nahin

Mahatma : tumko yad dilane ke Liye hi mujhe Baja gaya Hain Yaha per

Naksh : kis ne bejha Hain apko Yaha

Mahatma (muskurate hue ) : mujhe mere jis ne beja Hain ager Bata diya toh Tum Yaqeen Nahin karoge aur woh bi mujse naraz ho Jayega ishi liye uska Naam Nahin Bata Sakta Lekin ek Kam zaror kar Sakta ho

Naksh : Kya Kam boliye

Mahatma : main tumko apna Gyan aur shaktiyan Dunga jise Tum pata Laga sakte ho ke mujhe kisne Yaha bejha Hain

Naksh : Shama kare Gyan ka toh thek Hain Lekin shaktiyan ka main Kya karoga mujhe Nahin chahiye shaktiyan

Mahatma : shaktiyan toh Tum main AA chuki Hain

Naksh heran hote hue

Naksh : Kya Lekin mujhe kyun Nahin pata


Mahatma : yad Hain Kuch der pahle Tum behosh hue the toh uski waja yahi Thi

Naksh : Matlab woh kese

Mahatma : jab asman main damaka hua tha tab ek pathar
Gira tha woh pather chamatkari pathkari tha jis se Tum main Shaktiyan AA gayi Hain ab Tumhe un shaktiyon
Ko control Karna Hoga

Naksh : Kya Lekin kese karo control

Mahatma : deyan lagakar Jo main Tumhe sikhaoga thek Hain

Naksh : thek Hain mahatma ji phir main kab Aao Apke pass

Mahatma jee : Tum Kal subhe 4 baje AA Jana Yaha per thek hain

Naksh : thek Hain mahatma jee main Kal subhe aa jaoga ab main chalta ho

Mahatma : thek Hain beta sada khush raho

Phir Naksh waha se Chala jata Hain


Wahi Agarwal ke Ghar main


AGERWAL'S desh ke sabse amir logo main se ek the
the AGERWAL'S India ke no 1 businessman the toh world ke top 10 main se no 7 per aate the Kafi takatvar family Hain Agerwal Chahe toh rato rat CM ko bi change kar de koi Kuch Nahin kar Sakta is Ghar ke kuch role the Jo sabko manne padte Jo naa mane toh usko Ghar se nikala jata

12 baj rahe the ke sab family wale khane ki mize per AA gaye koi Kuch Nahin bol Raha the toh is chupi ko todte hue Ghar ke mukya yani Dada ji bole

DAda Ji : beta anju ab tabiyat kesi Hain Teri

Lekin anju ne iski baat ka koi reply Nahin diya bas chupchap khana kha Rahi Thi

2 se 3 bar pochne per bi jab anju ne koi jawab Nahin diya toh anju ke papa ko gussa AA gaya aur woh cilla te hue bole

Anju ke papa : sunai Nahin de Raha behri ho gai hain Kya

Us bar anju bi full gusse main boli

Anju : Kisi bi bap ki nokar Nahin ho main ke har Kisi ki ji hazori Karti ho samje ap and ap ( anju Apne papa se ) kitni bar bola Hain apse ke mujse baat mat Kiya karo mujhe sirf aur sirf nafrat Hain apse nafrat ke sivaye aur Kuch Nahin toh yeh zabardesti ka RISHTA aghe se jodne ki koshish mat karna samje ap

Is ke jawab per anju ni chachi bolti Hain

Anju ki chachi : yeh Kya batamizi Hain anju bado se aise baat karte Hain chalo Mafi mango warna acha Nahin Hoga tumhare liye

Anju ( hate hue ) : Mafi aur in logo se Meri jutti bi naa maghe Mafi aur haa Jo Karna hain karlo ziyada se ziyada Kya Hoga Ghar se Nikal doge yahi toh main Chahti Jo ke Nikal do mujhe is Ghar se main toh kab se Jana Chahti ho Lekin “ NAKSH „ Bhai se wada Kiya tha ke main Yaha se Kahi Nahin jaogi ishi liye roki hue ho warna kab ki Chali jati main

Yeh kehkar anju gusse main waha se Jane lagi aur achanak Piche modkar phir se boli

Anju : Tum logo ne Jo mere Bhai Naksh ke Saath Kiya hain na yahi uski saza Hain bohut Pyar karte ho mujhe Heena toh abse main Anjali urf anju yeh Apne Naksh Bhai ki kasam khati ho ke mere Zindagi main abse Tum logo ke liye nafrat ke sivaye aur Kuch Nahin Hoga aur ager jis din Meri yeh nafrat Pyar main badal gayi toh Samaj Lena ke woh din Anjali ki Zindagi ka akri din Hain

Yeh bolkar anju waha se Chali gayi aur Piche reh gaye sabke rote hue Chahre

Kyunke sabko yeh Yaqeen ho gaya tha ke ab anju in sab se sirf aur sirf nafrat karegi kyunke anju ne Naksh ki kasam khai Thi aur sab parivar wale jante the ke anju Apne Bhai ki kabhi bi jhooti kasam Nahin Kai gi

Wahi Naksh ki taraf

Main mandir se sidhe samunder main ponch gaya aur samunder main kud gaya jab main Ander gaya toh dekha ke waha per bohut sare boxs bi pade Hain un boxs main se ek box mains utha Liya aur wapis Bahar AA gaya Bahar AA kar Maine box kolkar dekha to main bohut khush ho gaya kyunke us box ke Ander bohut sare gold 🪙 ki ant aur diamond 💎 jewelry padi thi with sab dekar main bohut khush ho gaya aur box wapis band kar diya aur waha se chal diya main Manish Malhotra se Milne

Waha per ponch kar Maine usko Sara gold de diya aur use todi aur bate bi ki aur jab woh Jane Laga toh Meri Nazar achanak waha per pade ek news paper per padi woh utha kar Maine jab padi toh Manish Malhotra se kaha

Main : uncle mujhe yeh bangle chahiye Kitne ka Hoga

Manish Malhotra : beta yeh toh bohut mehenga Hoga kyunke is ko sirf banane per hi 100 million karch hue Hain toh khud socho ke jab auction Hoga tap ishi price Kya Hogi

Main : uncle ao paise ki chinta naa kare jitne bi Lage per mujhe yeh chahiye Matlab chahiye phir chahe isko karidne ke Liye 1000 million hi kyun ma karch Karna pade samje ap

Manish Malhotra : beta woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin ager tumko yeh chahiye ho toh khud Kya n Nahin karid lete

Main : uski ek waja Hain

Manish Malhotra : Kya waha Hain

Main : aj tak mere bank account main 20 hazar se ziyada paise Nahin aye toh ager achanak hi. Maine yeh Bangla karid liya toh police aur CBI ki Nazar muj per pad jayegi aisa main bohut bura ho sakta Hain wahi ager Apne karid liya toh Kisi ko shak nahi Hoga aur ap sabke sabne woh Bangla mere Naam kar Dena aur ager koi pochne toh Keh Dena main apki Mari hui sister ka beta ho toh Kisi ko shak nahi Hoga

Manish Malhotra : plan toh acha Hain phir chal kar dek hi lete Hain Kal subhe thek 8 baje mujhe yahi miln okay


Main : okay bye

Manish Malhotra : bye Sona deyan rakna


Phir dono waha apne Apne rashte chale Gaye


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Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


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Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




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( Note : guys yar koi acha sa Naam toh suggest karo main ek new action revenge story likna Chahta ho Lekin Naam ki Nahin soj Raha please ap sab koi acha sa Naam suggest karo thank you)



Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe udte hue ayi aur Naksh ke body se takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya

Ab aghe


Jab Naksh hosh main aya toh khud ko niche Zameen per diya hua paya toh woh sochne Laga

Naksh : main Yaha kyun soya hua ho aur yeh Kya abhi todi der pahle toh 9 baj rahe the aur abhi 12 kese baj gaye Hain

Abhi yeh soch hi raha the ke waha per ek admi AA gaya aur woh Naksh ko dekar bola

Admi : Kya hua beta Tum Yaha per is tarha kyun bete hue ho

Naksh us admi ki baat sunkar kada ho jata Hain aur use Bolta hain

Naksh : Kuch Nahin kaka mujhe khud ko Samaj Nahin AA Rahi Hain le hua Kya Hain

Admi : ajeeb ho tum bi abhi todi der pahle Maine tumko Yaha dekha tha tab Tum Soo Rahe the mujhe Laga ke Tumhe Kuch ho gaya Hain ishi liye tumko dekne tha
Kher ab Tum thek ho toh yeh Pani pi lo main chalta ho

Naksh ( Pani lete hue ) : thank you kaka Pani ke Liye



Phir woh admi waha se Chala gaya aur main sochne Laga

Naksh : mujhe last baat yeh yad Hain main main Kahi jaa Raha tha aur uper muj per Kuch gira aur main behosh ho gaya

Haa yad AA gaya muj per koi pather gira tha uper se Lekin yeh Kya mujhe toh Kuch bi Nahin hua ( Apne aaspaas dekte hue ) aur naa hi woh pather Hain Yaha per phir kaha gaya

Kuch der sochne ke bad Naksh Bolta hain

Naksh : mujhe Kya bad main jaye pather mujhe toh Kuch Nahin hua mujhe Jana Hoga Yaha se ise pahle ke koi aur problem ho jaye

Phir Naksh waha se Chala jata Hain todi dor jane ke bad ek Mandir AA jata Hain Naksh waha jaakar poja karta Hain aur jab woh waha se Jane wala hota Hain ke Naksh ko ek mahatma ki awaz aati Hain

Mahatma : kaha jaa Rahe ho putra

Naksh uski awaz sun kar ruk jata Hain aur use Bolta hain

Naksh : main Kisi zarori Kam se ja Raha ho mahatma ji

Mahatma : kis baat ki chinta kar Rahe ho tum us baat ki Jo ho chuki Hain ya uski Jo hone wali Hain

Naksh : main samja Nahin mahatma ji

Mahatma : Tum samje Nahin ya na Samaj hone ka dekhawa kar Rahe ho

Naksh : maaf kijiye Lekin main apki baat Samaj Nahin pata Raha ho

Mahatma : putra tumhare Saath AK tak Jo hua Hain woh tumhari pariksha Thi jis main Tum pass ho chuke ho ab uska karmfal tumko milega

Naksh : kesi pariksha aur kesa karmfal mahatma ji

Mahatma : tumhare Saath Jo tumhare parivar ne Kiya aur tumhari premika ne Kiya hain woh aj tak tumhare Saath Jo galat hua Hain woh sab tumhari pariksha Thi jis main Tum pass ho gaye ho ab uska karmfal tumko milega artat woh Sona ( Gold 🪙 ) Jo tumko samunder main Mila tha woh tumhara apna Hain


Naksh us mahatma ki baat sunkar pahle toh heran ho jata Hain phir haste hue Bolta hain

Naksh : Kya baat hain mahatma ji subhe se apko koi aur Nahin Mila Jo mujse Mazak kar Rahe ho


Mahatma : Nahin putra main tumse Mazak Nahin kar Raha ho main Sach bol Raha ho woh sona ( gold 🪙 ) tumhare Apne kazane ka 💯 hissa Hain

Naksh : acha toh Mera Baki ka kazana kaha Hain

Mahatma : woh abhi tumko batane ka Sahi samay Nahin Hain Lekin ha ek baat main tumko zaror bataoga

Naksh : kesi baat mahatma ji boliye

Mahatma : yeh tumhara pahla janm Nahin Hain use pahle bi Tumne bohut se janm Liye Hain is sansar ki Raksha ke liye

Naksh heran hote hue Bolta hain

Naksh : yeh ap Kya bol Rahe ho mahatma ji ager aisi baat Hain toh mujhe kyun Kuch yad Nahin

Mahatma : tumko yad dilane ke Liye hi mujhe Baja gaya Hain Yaha per

Naksh : kis ne bejha Hain apko Yaha

Mahatma (muskurate hue ) : mujhe mere jis ne beja Hain ager Bata diya toh Tum Yaqeen Nahin karoge aur woh bi mujse naraz ho Jayega ishi liye uska Naam Nahin Bata Sakta Lekin ek Kam zaror kar Sakta ho

Naksh : Kya Kam boliye

Mahatma : main tumko apna Gyan aur shaktiyan Dunga jise Tum pata Laga sakte ho ke mujhe kisne Yaha bejha Hain

Naksh : Shama kare Gyan ka toh thek Hain Lekin shaktiyan ka main Kya karoga mujhe Nahin chahiye shaktiyan

Mahatma : shaktiyan toh Tum main AA chuki Hain

Naksh heran hote hue

Naksh : Kya Lekin mujhe kyun Nahin pata


Mahatma : yad Hain Kuch der pahle Tum behosh hue the toh uski waja yahi Thi

Naksh : Matlab woh kese

Mahatma : jab asman main damaka hua tha tab ek pathar
Gira tha woh pather chamatkari pathkari tha jis se Tum main Shaktiyan AA gayi Hain ab Tumhe un shaktiyon
Ko control Karna Hoga

Naksh : Kya Lekin kese karo control

Mahatma : deyan lagakar Jo main Tumhe sikhaoga thek Hain

Naksh : thek Hain mahatma ji phir main kab Aao Apke pass

Mahatma jee : Tum Kal subhe 4 baje AA Jana Yaha per thek hain

Naksh : thek Hain mahatma jee main Kal subhe aa jaoga ab main chalta ho

Mahatma : thek Hain beta sada khush raho

Phir Naksh waha se Chala jata Hain


Wahi Agarwal ke Ghar main


AGERWAL'S desh ke sabse amir logo main se ek the
the AGERWAL'S India ke no 1 businessman the toh world ke top 10 main se no 7 per aate the Kafi takatvar family Hain Agerwal Chahe toh rato rat CM ko bi change kar de koi Kuch Nahin kar Sakta is Ghar ke kuch role the Jo sabko manne padte Jo naa mane toh usko Ghar se nikala jata

12 baj rahe the ke sab family wale khane ki mize per AA gaye koi Kuch Nahin bol Raha the toh is chupi ko todte hue Ghar ke mukya yani Dada ji bole

DAda Ji : beta anju ab tabiyat kesi Hain Teri

Lekin anju ne iski baat ka koi reply Nahin diya bas chupchap khana kha Rahi Thi

2 se 3 bar pochne per bi jab anju ne koi jawab Nahin diya toh anju ke papa ko gussa AA gaya aur woh cilla te hue bole

Anju ke papa : sunai Nahin de Raha behri ho gai hain Kya

Us bar anju bi full gusse main boli

Anju : Kisi bi bap ki nokar Nahin ho main ke har Kisi ki ji hazori Karti ho samje ap and ap ( anju Apne papa se ) kitni bar bola Hain apse ke mujse baat mat Kiya karo mujhe sirf aur sirf nafrat Hain apse nafrat ke sivaye aur Kuch Nahin toh yeh zabardesti ka RISHTA aghe se jodne ki koshish mat karna samje ap

Is ke jawab per anju ni chachi bolti Hain

Anju ki chachi : yeh Kya batamizi Hain anju bado se aise baat karte Hain chalo Mafi mango warna acha Nahin Hoga tumhare liye

Anju ( hate hue ) : Mafi aur in logo se Meri jutti bi naa maghe Mafi aur haa Jo Karna hain karlo ziyada se ziyada Kya Hoga Ghar se Nikal doge yahi toh main Chahti Jo ke Nikal do mujhe is Ghar se main toh kab se Jana Chahti ho Lekin “ NAKSH „ Bhai se wada Kiya tha ke main Yaha se Kahi Nahin jaogi ishi liye roki hue ho warna kab ki Chali jati main

Yeh kehkar anju gusse main waha se Jane lagi aur achanak Piche modkar phir se boli

Anju : Tum logo ne Jo mere Bhai Naksh ke Saath Kiya hain na yahi uski saza Hain bohut Pyar karte ho mujhe Heena toh abse main Anjali urf anju yeh Apne Naksh Bhai ki kasam khati ho ke mere Zindagi main abse Tum logo ke liye nafrat ke sivaye aur Kuch Nahin Hoga aur ager jis din Meri yeh nafrat Pyar main badal gayi toh Samaj Lena ke woh din Anjali ki Zindagi ka akri din Hain

Yeh bolkar anju waha se Chali gayi aur Piche reh gaye sabke rote hue Chahre

Kyunke sabko yeh Yaqeen ho gaya tha ke ab anju in sab se sirf aur sirf nafrat karegi kyunke anju ne Naksh ki kasam khai Thi aur sab parivar wale jante the ke anju Apne Bhai ki kabhi bi jhooti kasam Nahin Kai gi

Wahi Naksh ki taraf

Main mandir se sidhe samunder main ponch gaya aur samunder main kud gaya jab main Ander gaya toh dekha ke waha per bohut sare boxs bi pade Hain un boxs main se ek box mains utha Liya aur wapis Bahar AA gaya Bahar AA kar Maine box kolkar dekha to main bohut khush ho gaya kyunke us box ke Ander bohut sare gold 🪙 ki ant aur diamond 💎 jewelry padi thi with sab dekar main bohut khush ho gaya aur box wapis band kar diya aur waha se chal diya main Manish Malhotra se Milne

Waha per ponch kar Maine usko Sara gold de diya aur use todi aur bate bi ki aur jab woh Jane Laga toh Meri Nazar achanak waha per pade ek news paper per padi woh utha kar Maine jab padi toh Manish Malhotra se kaha

Main : uncle mujhe yeh bangle chahiye Kitne ka Hoga

Manish Malhotra : beta yeh toh bohut mehenga Hoga kyunke is ko sirf banane per hi 100 million karch hue Hain toh khud socho ke jab auction Hoga tap ishi price Kya Hogi

Main : uncle ao paise ki chinta naa kare jitne bi Lage per mujhe yeh chahiye Matlab chahiye phir chahe isko karidne ke Liye 1000 million hi kyun ma karch Karna pade samje ap

Manish Malhotra : beta woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin ager tumko yeh chahiye ho toh khud Kya n Nahin karid lete

Main : uski ek waja Hain

Manish Malhotra : Kya waha Hain

Main : aj tak mere bank account main 20 hazar se ziyada paise Nahin aye toh ager achanak hi. Maine yeh Bangla karid liya toh police aur CBI ki Nazar muj per pad jayegi aisa main bohut bura ho sakta Hain wahi ager Apne karid liya toh Kisi ko shak nahi Hoga aur ap sabke sabne woh Bangla mere Naam kar Dena aur ager koi pochne toh Keh Dena main apki Mari hui sister ka beta ho toh Kisi ko shak nahi Hoga

Manish Malhotra : plan toh acha Hain phir chal kar dek hi lete Hain Kal subhe thek 8 baje mujhe yahi miln okay


Main : okay bye

Manish Malhotra : bye Sona deyan rakna


Phir dono waha apne Apne rashte chale Gaye


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Ek Ladka Jiski age kareeb 20 ke aas pass Thi woh Ek park main Apne Gutno ke Bal Bith kar zor zor se roo Raha tha is waqt park main koi Nahin Tha ager koi hota toh bi is ladke ko koi fark naa padta kyunke aj is se iska Pyar Chala gaya tha jise usne apni jaan se ziyada chaha woh isko tukra kar Chali Gai woh bi sirf chand paiso ke lie
Bohut der tak Rota Raha Rote Rote uske ansu bi asna band ho gaye Lekin ladka Rina band Nahin kar Raha tha ladka uper dekar Bolta hain
Ladka : Khush toh bohut ho gaye honge Meri Zindagi barbad Karke Heena pahle mujse Meri family chin li air ab jise main Pyar karta tha woh mujhe chod kar Chali Gai Hain kyun kyun akhir kyun aisi konsi dusmani nikal Rahe ho mujse Jo pahle mujhe mere hi Ghar se Nikal diya aur ab mujse Mera Pyar bi chin Liya bas ab aur Nahin ab ap mujse koi bi chiz Nahin chin sakoge kyunke main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawal ka jawab Lene
Ladka ( Apne ap se ) : Kya main Jo kar Raha ho woh thek Hain ager dii ko pata Chala toh woh mujhe mar degi Lekin aise Zindagi jeene se toh acha mout achi Hain Kam se Kam waha toh itna Dard naa ho
Phir ladka Apne jad (pocket) se ek choti si picture Nikal kar usko dekne lagta hain aur rote hue bas itna hi Bolta hain
Ladka : I'm sorry Meri Behan ho sakhe toh Apne is nakara Bhai ko maaf kar Dena kyunke maim Kuch naa kar sakha Apne Jo wada mujse Liya tha woh aj main todne jaa Raha ho ho sakhe toh maaf kar Dena mujhe
Phir woh ladka us picture ko kiss Karke wapis Apke jab (pocket) main dal deta Hain aur waha se Nikal kar samunder ( ocean 🌊) ki taraf nikal jata Hain aur waha per ek pahad ki choti per kada ho kar uper dekta Hain aur phir Bolta hain
Ladka : main AA Raha ho apse Apne sawalon ka jawab Lene taiyar rehna

Itna bolkar ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊) main khud jata Hain


Wahi dusri taraf ek bohut Bada Ghar jaha 100 ke karib sirf security aur guards mojud the toh waha 30 se 40 gadiya gerajain kadi thi Ghar se samne ek gold ko Name plate laghi hui Thi jis main likha tha THE AGERWAL'S villa likha hua the

Yeh ek bohut Bada Bangla the pata nahin Kitne kamre the is main aur har chiz perfect tareke se rakhi hui the

Is bangle ke ek kamre main ek bohut beautiful ladki Soo Rahi Thi ke achanak ek zordar chik ke Saath with uth jati Hain chik itni zor ki Thi ke sab Ghar wale bi ek jatke main. Kade ho jate hain aur foran ladki ki room ki taraf bagne lagte Hain jab sab waha ponch kar dekte hain ke ladki roo Rahi hain toh ek aurat aghe bad kar usko Gale Laga ti Hain sur bolti Hain

Aurat : Kya hua beta Tum roo kyun Rahi ho

Ladki ( rote hue ) : maa Maine bohut bura Sapna dekha Hain Bhai ki jaan ko khatra Hain


Aurat : Lekin beta tera Bhai toh woh Raha na phir tu

Yeh bolte bolte woh ruk jati Hain toh ladki bolti Hain

Ladka : Maa main iski baat nahi kar Rahi ho main naksh hi baat kar Rahi ho


Aur yeh Naam sunte hi sabki ankhoo main pahle ansu AA jate Hain phir gusse se lal ho jati Hain hua aurat bolti Hain

Aurat : Kuch Nahin Hoga main hona Tere Saath

Ladki : maa ap please yahi mere Saath Soo jaona

Aurat : jaisa Meri beti ki ichha ho waisa hi Hoga

Phir aurat Badi sabse bolti Hain

Aurat : Tum sab bi chale Jao kyunke subhe Konsa fin Hain Tum log jante ho

Sab : jee hum jante Hain

Yeh bolkar sab waha se chale jate Hain Apne Apne room main aur Soo jate Hain


Woh ladka jab samunder ( ocean 🌊) main girta Hain toh woh dub jata Hain ab is ladke ki Kismat Kaho ya Kuch aur eoh ladka waha per niche girne ke bad bi Marta Nahin hain aur woh ek aisi jagha jata Hain jaha per pura ka pura samunder ka woh hissa gold 🪙 se bara hua the

Yeh dek kar ladke ko bohut herani hui aur woh sidhe waha Chala gaya jaha per gold rakha hua tha waha jaa kar ladka ek gold ki ant utha kar wapis samunder ke uper sa jata Hain aur waha se Nikal kar Chala jata Hain yeh dekne ke Liye ke Kya yeh gold real Hain ya fake


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Guys please support Karna is story ko bi aur Meri dusri story ko bi and week main 2 update iske ayege aur 2 update us story ke thank you 🙏 👍
Nice update withing for next
 

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★ Update 2 ★


Woh ladka samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) se Nikal kar Chala gaya aur sabse pahle usne kapde change Kiya aur phir ek gold ki dukan per Chala gaya aur dukan wale se bola

Ladka : hello sir Kya ap gold lenge

Dukan wala : haa kyun Nahin bechna Hain Kya

Ladka : jee ha bechna Hain yeh raha

Yeh bolkar ladka gold dukan wale ko deta Hain jab dukan wala check karta Hain toh ladka se Bolta hain

Dukan wala : tumhare pass yeh kaha se aya Hain

Ladka (jhoot bolte hue ) : yeh mere dada jee ka Hain aur bi bohut sara rakha hua Hain Lekin filhal mujhe sirf yeh bechna Hain

Dukan wala : thek Hain yeh gold bilkul original Hain aisa gold Maine apni life main. Kabhi Nahin dekha Hain

Ladka : Kya Sacha main toh Kitne paise honge iske

Dukan wala : is ek ant ki qeemat 10 lakh Hain thek Hain

Ladka : okay sir ao mujhe paise de dejiye

Dukan wala : thek Hain ager aur bi bechna Hain toh woh bi mujhe de Dena main usko bi karid lunga okay

Ladka : okay sirf

Dukan wala : yeh lo beta pure 10 lakh Hain thek Hain naa

Ladka : okay uncle main chalta ho

Dukan wala : are are 1 minute rok Jao

Ladka : Kya hua uncle

Dukan wala : Tum toh jante ho aj Kal ke halat toh Kahi aisa na ho ke bad main police aakar tang kare ishi liye apna naam aur address likwa do

Ladka : okay Mera Naam NAKSH Agerwal Hain aur main ******* society main rehta ho

Dukan wala : are wah main bi uski bagal wali society main rehta ho

Naksh : okay uncle phir bad main mulakat Hogi bye

Dukan wala : thek Hain beta bye

Phir Naksh waha se Nikal jata Hain

Ab aghe Kahani Naksh ki jubani Jab 3rd person ki zarorat Hogi toh waha per 3rd person AA jayega

Main jab waha se Chala gaya toh bohut khush tha kyunke ek gold ki ant ke 10 lakh Jo mile the toh waha toh samunder ( ocean 🌊 ) bara hua Hain pata nahin Kitna paise honge un sabke

Main (mam me ) : Lekin Jo bi ho mujhe jald se jald Sara ka Sara gold waha se Nikal Lena chahiye kyunke Meri hi tarha waha koi aur bi jaa Sakta Hain Lekin Nikalo kese itna Sara gold aur ager Nikal bi Liya toh rakhoga kaha yeh Samaj Nahin AA Rahi hain

Abhi main yeh sab Soch hi Raha the keere Kano main Kisi ki rone ki awaz ayi yeh koi admi ke rone ki awaz Thi jab Maine dekha toh park 🏞️ ki and main ek admi Zameen per beth kar to Raha Hain tab mujhe yad aya ke Kuch der pahle toh main bi ishi tarha roo Raha tha tab Kisi ne mujse Nahin pocha ke kyun roo Rahe ho Lekin Kya mujhe us admi ki madad Karni Chahiye Kya has Karni Chahiye

Yeh soch kar main uske pass Chala gaya aur us admi ke pass ponch kar use bola

Main : uncle ap roo kyun Rahe ho

Admi : Kuch Nahin beta apni Kismat per roo Raha ho aur koi bast nahin Hain

Main : koi problem hain toh bolo main tumhari help kar Sakta ho

Admi : Nahin Tum Meri help Nahin kar sakte Tum Jao Yaha se

Main : uncle duk bantbe se Kam hota Hain ao bolo Kya baat hain

Admi : mujhe mere beto aur unki bewiyo ne Apne hi Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain

Main : Soo sad uncle bay tha way maine apko Kahi dekha Hain

Admi : tv per news main dekha Hoga

Main : haa yad AA gaya Hain al wahi Hain naa the business tycoon Manish Malhotra

Admi : has main wahi ho

Main : toh phir apko Apne beti ne Ghar se kyun nikala

Manish : mere beto se dokhe se Mera Sara business Apne Naam Karwa diya Hain aur mujhe Ghar se Bahar Nikal diya Hain kyunke unko paiso ka lalach tha ishi liye use dokhe se mujse sign karwaya ager toh todi sabar karte toh main apna Sara business unko de deta lakin Nahin in hone mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya Hain ab main Kya karo aur kaha Jao

Main : uncle is main main apki help kar Sakta ho

Manish : woh kese beta

Main : main apko paise Dunga business ke Liye ap ek new business Shuru karo paise Sara ka Sara main Dunga aur company bi mere Naam per Hogi


Manish : is main Mera Kya faida aur tumhare pass itne paise kaha se aye

Main : O aam (mango 🥭 ) khao gutliya mere liye chod do aur Rahi apki faide ki baat toh main apko us company ke 10 % main partner bana dunga aur ap hi company ke MD honge Apke pass sari power Hogi har ek decision Lena ka aur jab main dunya ke samne aaoga toh phir main honga aur Jab tak some pass power Hain ap is company ko us unchai tak ponchai ge ke jaha ajj aoki company Thi aur ab Apke beto ki ap Apne beto se badla le Lena us company ko barbad Karke bolo manzor Hain

Manish : woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin itna paise tumhare pass kese aye hain

Main : woh mere Apne paise Hain

Manish : tumhare pass itne sab paise kaha se AA gaye

Main : Meri family I'd ek secret Hain ishi liye woh Meri Apne Hain thek Hain naa

Manish : thek Hain Samaj gaya paise kaha Hain

Main : woh apko aj sham tak mil jayege Lekin main apko adress send kar Dunga aur haa paise toh Nahin Hain Lekin gold 🪙 aur diamond 💎 Hain mere pass woh dedu

Manish : haa de do main Sab thek kar dunga

Main : okay apko aj sham tak mil jayega ap ****hotel AA Jana okay

Manish : okay main AA jaoga

Phir Manish waha se Chala gaya aur naksh wahi reh gaya aur Kuch soch ne laga

Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe update hue ayi aur Naksh ke body ke takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya




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★ Update 3 ★

( Note : guys yar koi acha sa Naam toh suggest karo main ek new action revenge story likna Chahta ho Lekin Naam ki Nahin soj Raha please ap sab koi acha sa Naam suggest karo thank you)



Abhi woh Kuch soch hi Raha the ke uper asman main ek bohut Bada blast ho gaya aur ek bade se pather jaisa koi cize sidhe udte hue ayi aur Naksh ke body se takra Gai takar itni zor ki Thi ke Naksh Piche ki taraf udta hua gaya Ur wahi behosh ho gaya

Ab aghe


Jab Naksh hosh main aya toh khud ko niche Zameen per diya hua paya toh woh sochne Laga

Naksh : main Yaha kyun soya hua ho aur yeh Kya abhi todi der pahle toh 9 baj rahe the aur abhi 12 kese baj gaye Hain

Abhi yeh soch hi raha the ke waha per ek admi AA gaya aur woh Naksh ko dekar bola

Admi : Kya hua beta Tum Yaha per is tarha kyun bete hue ho

Naksh us admi ki baat sunkar kada ho jata Hain aur use Bolta hain

Naksh : Kuch Nahin kaka mujhe khud ko Samaj Nahin AA Rahi Hain le hua Kya Hain

Admi : ajeeb ho tum bi abhi todi der pahle Maine tumko Yaha dekha tha tab Tum Soo Rahe the mujhe Laga ke Tumhe Kuch ho gaya Hain ishi liye tumko dekne tha
Kher ab Tum thek ho toh yeh Pani pi lo main chalta ho

Naksh ( Pani lete hue ) : thank you kaka Pani ke Liye



Phir woh admi waha se Chala gaya aur main sochne Laga

Naksh : mujhe last baat yeh yad Hain main main Kahi jaa Raha tha aur uper muj per Kuch gira aur main behosh ho gaya

Haa yad AA gaya muj per koi pather gira tha uper se Lekin yeh Kya mujhe toh Kuch bi Nahin hua ( Apne aaspaas dekte hue ) aur naa hi woh pather Hain Yaha per phir kaha gaya

Kuch der sochne ke bad Naksh Bolta hain

Naksh : mujhe Kya bad main jaye pather mujhe toh Kuch Nahin hua mujhe Jana Hoga Yaha se ise pahle ke koi aur problem ho jaye

Phir Naksh waha se Chala jata Hain todi dor jane ke bad ek Mandir AA jata Hain Naksh waha jaakar poja karta Hain aur jab woh waha se Jane wala hota Hain ke Naksh ko ek mahatma ki awaz aati Hain

Mahatma : kaha jaa Rahe ho putra

Naksh uski awaz sun kar ruk jata Hain aur use Bolta hain

Naksh : main Kisi zarori Kam se ja Raha ho mahatma ji

Mahatma : kis baat ki chinta kar Rahe ho tum us baat ki Jo ho chuki Hain ya uski Jo hone wali Hain

Naksh : main samja Nahin mahatma ji

Mahatma : Tum samje Nahin ya na Samaj hone ka dekhawa kar Rahe ho

Naksh : maaf kijiye Lekin main apki baat Samaj Nahin pata Raha ho

Mahatma : putra tumhare Saath AK tak Jo hua Hain woh tumhari pariksha Thi jis main Tum pass ho chuke ho ab uska karmfal tumko milega

Naksh : kesi pariksha aur kesa karmfal mahatma ji

Mahatma : tumhare Saath Jo tumhare parivar ne Kiya aur tumhari premika ne Kiya hain woh aj tak tumhare Saath Jo galat hua Hain woh sab tumhari pariksha Thi jis main Tum pass ho gaye ho ab uska karmfal tumko milega artat woh Sona ( Gold 🪙 ) Jo tumko samunder main Mila tha woh tumhara apna Hain


Naksh us mahatma ki baat sunkar pahle toh heran ho jata Hain phir haste hue Bolta hain

Naksh : Kya baat hain mahatma ji subhe se apko koi aur Nahin Mila Jo mujse Mazak kar Rahe ho


Mahatma : Nahin putra main tumse Mazak Nahin kar Raha ho main Sach bol Raha ho woh sona ( gold 🪙 ) tumhare Apne kazane ka 💯 hissa Hain

Naksh : acha toh Mera Baki ka kazana kaha Hain

Mahatma : woh abhi tumko batane ka Sahi samay Nahin Hain Lekin ha ek baat main tumko zaror bataoga

Naksh : kesi baat mahatma ji boliye

Mahatma : yeh tumhara pahla janm Nahin Hain use pahle bi Tumne bohut se janm Liye Hain is sansar ki Raksha ke liye

Naksh heran hote hue Bolta hain

Naksh : yeh ap Kya bol Rahe ho mahatma ji ager aisi baat Hain toh mujhe kyun Kuch yad Nahin

Mahatma : tumko yad dilane ke Liye hi mujhe Baja gaya Hain Yaha per

Naksh : kis ne bejha Hain apko Yaha

Mahatma (muskurate hue ) : mujhe mere jis ne beja Hain ager Bata diya toh Tum Yaqeen Nahin karoge aur woh bi mujse naraz ho Jayega ishi liye uska Naam Nahin Bata Sakta Lekin ek Kam zaror kar Sakta ho

Naksh : Kya Kam boliye

Mahatma : main tumko apna Gyan aur shaktiyan Dunga jise Tum pata Laga sakte ho ke mujhe kisne Yaha bejha Hain

Naksh : Shama kare Gyan ka toh thek Hain Lekin shaktiyan ka main Kya karoga mujhe Nahin chahiye shaktiyan

Mahatma : shaktiyan toh Tum main AA chuki Hain

Naksh heran hote hue

Naksh : Kya Lekin mujhe kyun Nahin pata


Mahatma : yad Hain Kuch der pahle Tum behosh hue the toh uski waja yahi Thi

Naksh : Matlab woh kese

Mahatma : jab asman main damaka hua tha tab ek pathar
Gira tha woh pather chamatkari pathkari tha jis se Tum main Shaktiyan AA gayi Hain ab Tumhe un shaktiyon
Ko control Karna Hoga

Naksh : Kya Lekin kese karo control

Mahatma : deyan lagakar Jo main Tumhe sikhaoga thek Hain

Naksh : thek Hain mahatma ji phir main kab Aao Apke pass

Mahatma jee : Tum Kal subhe 4 baje AA Jana Yaha per thek hain

Naksh : thek Hain mahatma jee main Kal subhe aa jaoga ab main chalta ho

Mahatma : thek Hain beta sada khush raho

Phir Naksh waha se Chala jata Hain


Wahi Agarwal ke Ghar main


AGERWAL'S desh ke sabse amir logo main se ek the
the AGERWAL'S India ke no 1 businessman the toh world ke top 10 main se no 7 per aate the Kafi takatvar family Hain Agerwal Chahe toh rato rat CM ko bi change kar de koi Kuch Nahin kar Sakta is Ghar ke kuch role the Jo sabko manne padte Jo naa mane toh usko Ghar se nikala jata

12 baj rahe the ke sab family wale khane ki mize per AA gaye koi Kuch Nahin bol Raha the toh is chupi ko todte hue Ghar ke mukya yani Dada ji bole

DAda Ji : beta anju ab tabiyat kesi Hain Teri

Lekin anju ne iski baat ka koi reply Nahin diya bas chupchap khana kha Rahi Thi

2 se 3 bar pochne per bi jab anju ne koi jawab Nahin diya toh anju ke papa ko gussa AA gaya aur woh cilla te hue bole

Anju ke papa : sunai Nahin de Raha behri ho gai hain Kya

Us bar anju bi full gusse main boli

Anju : Kisi bi bap ki nokar Nahin ho main ke har Kisi ki ji hazori Karti ho samje ap and ap ( anju Apne papa se ) kitni bar bola Hain apse ke mujse baat mat Kiya karo mujhe sirf aur sirf nafrat Hain apse nafrat ke sivaye aur Kuch Nahin toh yeh zabardesti ka RISHTA aghe se jodne ki koshish mat karna samje ap

Is ke jawab per anju ni chachi bolti Hain

Anju ki chachi : yeh Kya batamizi Hain anju bado se aise baat karte Hain chalo Mafi mango warna acha Nahin Hoga tumhare liye

Anju ( hate hue ) : Mafi aur in logo se Meri jutti bi naa maghe Mafi aur haa Jo Karna hain karlo ziyada se ziyada Kya Hoga Ghar se Nikal doge yahi toh main Chahti Jo ke Nikal do mujhe is Ghar se main toh kab se Jana Chahti ho Lekin “ NAKSH „ Bhai se wada Kiya tha ke main Yaha se Kahi Nahin jaogi ishi liye roki hue ho warna kab ki Chali jati main

Yeh kehkar anju gusse main waha se Jane lagi aur achanak Piche modkar phir se boli

Anju : Tum logo ne Jo mere Bhai Naksh ke Saath Kiya hain na yahi uski saza Hain bohut Pyar karte ho mujhe Heena toh abse main Anjali urf anju yeh Apne Naksh Bhai ki kasam khati ho ke mere Zindagi main abse Tum logo ke liye nafrat ke sivaye aur Kuch Nahin Hoga aur ager jis din Meri yeh nafrat Pyar main badal gayi toh Samaj Lena ke woh din Anjali ki Zindagi ka akri din Hain

Yeh bolkar anju waha se Chali gayi aur Piche reh gaye sabke rote hue Chahre

Kyunke sabko yeh Yaqeen ho gaya tha ke ab anju in sab se sirf aur sirf nafrat karegi kyunke anju ne Naksh ki kasam khai Thi aur sab parivar wale jante the ke anju Apne Bhai ki kabhi bi jhooti kasam Nahin Kai gi

Wahi Naksh ki taraf

Main mandir se sidhe samunder main ponch gaya aur samunder main kud gaya jab main Ander gaya toh dekha ke waha per bohut sare boxs bi pade Hain un boxs main se ek box mains utha Liya aur wapis Bahar AA gaya Bahar AA kar Maine box kolkar dekha to main bohut khush ho gaya kyunke us box ke Ander bohut sare gold 🪙 ki ant aur diamond 💎 jewelry padi thi with sab dekar main bohut khush ho gaya aur box wapis band kar diya aur waha se chal diya main Manish Malhotra se Milne

Waha per ponch kar Maine usko Sara gold de diya aur use todi aur bate bi ki aur jab woh Jane Laga toh Meri Nazar achanak waha per pade ek news paper per padi woh utha kar Maine jab padi toh Manish Malhotra se kaha

Main : uncle mujhe yeh bangle chahiye Kitne ka Hoga

Manish Malhotra : beta yeh toh bohut mehenga Hoga kyunke is ko sirf banane per hi 100 million karch hue Hain toh khud socho ke jab auction Hoga tap ishi price Kya Hogi

Main : uncle ao paise ki chinta naa kare jitne bi Lage per mujhe yeh chahiye Matlab chahiye phir chahe isko karidne ke Liye 1000 million hi kyun ma karch Karna pade samje ap

Manish Malhotra : beta woh sab toh thek Hain Lekin ager tumko yeh chahiye ho toh khud Kya n Nahin karid lete

Main : uski ek waja Hain

Manish Malhotra : Kya waha Hain

Main : aj tak mere bank account main 20 hazar se ziyada paise Nahin aye toh ager achanak hi. Maine yeh Bangla karid liya toh police aur CBI ki Nazar muj per pad jayegi aisa main bohut bura ho sakta Hain wahi ager Apne karid liya toh Kisi ko shak nahi Hoga aur ap sabke sabne woh Bangla mere Naam kar Dena aur ager koi pochne toh Keh Dena main apki Mari hui sister ka beta ho toh Kisi ko shak nahi Hoga

Manish Malhotra : plan toh acha Hain phir chal kar dek hi lete Hain Kal subhe thek 8 baje mujhe yahi miln okay


Main : okay bye

Manish Malhotra : bye Sona deyan rakna


Phir dono waha apne Apne rashte chale Gaye


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