Ye story padh kar aysa lag raha hai. Jayse writer ka dhayan sirf page count badhane mai hai. Story to aage badh hee nahi rahi. Wayse hee story ko gol gol ghuma rahe hai apne writer bhai. Clinic wala incident bhi writer ne itana khencha ke 10 update to uss incident mai laga diye. Ek hee cheez baar baar repeat ho rahi hai. Maa 20 baar moot ke apni gaand aur choot dikha chuki hai. Wahi sab repeat ho raha hai. Ayse boring story maine nahi padhi.
Bhai ko sirf page badhane se matlab hai. Aur yaa phir pic post karne mai. Pichali kuch story toh theek thak thee...... Isme bhi koi naya change nahi hai.
Bhai sabka khayal alag alag hota , sabko maja alag alag tarah se aata hai hume to rohnny bro ki kahaniya pasand hain, tum bhi apni kahani shuru karo to pata chalega padhna aasan hai lekin kahani ki puri kalpna karke usko shabdon me lagataar kai saal tak likhna bahut mushkil hota hai aur jabki writer ko kuch kamai nahi hoti, koi apna jaruri waqt me se kuch time nikaal kar kahani likhta hai to tumhe uski care karni chahiye uska hosala badhana chahiye, aur tumhe kahani kuch alag tarah ki bas sex sex ki pasand hai to bahut se writer honge unki badh lo, sex ki kahani to koi bhi likh leta hai lekin jo ras jo kamukta ka ehsaas rohnny bhai ki kahaniyon me hota hai wo bahut kam writer hi dila sakte hain. Ye mana kaha I ki raftaar dheemi hai aur kahani kai logo ke sath judi hai is liye har kisi ka kahani me hissedari hona bhi jaruri hai.
