Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

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Latest Update ➢ Update 198 ​

 

[Gentle - OSuke]

Tab build up kaha hua tha?

Unke beech ki nok jhok, ladayi, baar -baar qareeb aana aur fir dur jaana, ye sab kaha hua tha? Juhi se rishta mazboot kaha hua tha? Mrs, Tiwari ne Nidhi ke kaan kaha bhare the? Kya ye sab hua tha?

Isliye, to abhi aaya ye scene. Jab Veer Juhi ko wapas se leke aaya. Nidhi ne jab realise kiya. It was evident ki use puraane beetein pal yaad aane hi the.

Aur, maine to aisa kaha hi nahi ki wo dono saath me nahi rahenge end me. Na hi maine ye kaha ki dono ko kuchh nahi hoga.

Maine kaha ki shayad... Shayad unme se koi agar ant tak na raha toh?

Ab yaha 50-50% ki probability hai. Readers ke liye kuchh bhi nirdharit nahi hai. Par, mujhe pata hai kya hona hai. Aur, jab mujhe pata hai ki kya hona hai...

To behtar kaun jaanega ki kaha par kya scene daalna hai?

Haa bhai aapne sahi kaha pahle build up nahi hua tha pr shayad jab veer ne nidhi ko dhruv ko dilane me help ki tab tak vo bond ban chuka tha nidhi aur veer ka bhi aur veer aur juhi kaa bhi.

Pr haa mene ye bhi Manta hu ki ab jab veer ne juhi ko bachaya toh voh bond aur majbut bhi hua.

BS mere kehna itna tha ki ye sequence pehle bhi aa skta tha ya end me bhi aa bhi aa skta tha.

Aur is update me jyada focus veer ke reaction aur disemboweler ki veer ke sath fight ke baad ke haalat ya fir veer ka action jese ke vo kya krta hai jab uska brand opning ceremony me huye dhamake me kon kon shamil tha vo pata lagane me ho.

Chalo bhai jo aapne Kiya sahi kiya bass aur abb me is pr aapke sath argue nahi Krna chahta.

Baki mujhe update thoda weak laga toh bata diya bass baat khatam ..

 

[Werewolf]

Haa bhai aapne sahi kaha pahle build up nahi hua tha pr shayad jab veer ne nidhi ko dhruv ko dilane me help ki tab tak vo bond ban chuka tha nidhi aur veer ka bhi aur veer aur juhi kaa bhi.

Pr haa mene ye bhi Manta hu ki ab jab veer ne juhi ko bachaya toh voh bond aur majbut bhi hua.

BS mere kehna itna tha ki ye sequence pehle bhi aa skta tha ya end me bhi aa bhi aa skta tha.

Aur is update me jyada focus veer ke reaction aur disemboweler ki veer ke sath fight ke baad ke haalat ya fir veer ka action jese ke vo kya krta hai jab uska brand opning ceremony me huye dhamake me kon kon shamil tha vo pata lagane me ho.

Chalo bhai jo aapne Kiya sahi kiya bass aur abb me is pr aapke sath argue nahi Krna chahta.

Baki mujhe update thoda weak laga toh bata diya bass baat khatam ..

Seedha short and simple example deta hu.

Abhi ke readers ne 15 din wait kiya. Update aaya. Mann mutabik cheezein nahi mili. Update weak laga.

Ab, maine maan lo abhi update 197 de diya jisme after effects saare darsha diye gaye hai. Ab ek naya reader aata hai, jo update 1 se update 197 tak padhta hai. Kya wo ye kahega ki update 196 weak tha? Nahi! Kyunki, usko already 197 posted hua mil chuka hai jisme chaos ke baad kya kuchh hua wo sab kuchh darshaya gaya hai. That's the difference.

Baat yahi khatam ho gayi.

 

[Gentle - OSuke]

Seedha short and simple example deta hu.

Abhi ke readers ne 15 din wait kiya. Update aaya. Mann mutabik cheezein nahi mili. Update weak laga.

Ab, maine maan lo abhi update 197 de diya jisme after effects saare darsha diye gaye hai. Ab ek naya reader aata hai, jo update 1 se update 197 tak padhta hai. Kya wo ye kahega ki update 196 weak tha? Nahi! Kyunki, usko already 197 posted hua mil chuka hai jisme chaos ke baad kya kuchh hua wo sab kuchh darshaya gaya hai. That's the difference.

Baat yahi khatam ho gayi.

Yahi bhai Yahi toh mera Point hai.

Aap shayad Puri story ka soch kr update likhte ho pr Hum Reader 1 update ke liye 15 - 20 din wait krte hai .

Ab aap hi batao Itna wait krne ke baad bhi aap ko woh satisfaction naa mile toh aap bhi khush nahi hoge .

BS yahi toh baat thi.

 

[Black]

Yahi bhai Yahi toh mera Point hai.

Aap shayad Puri story ka soch kr update likhte ho pr Hum Reader 1 update ke liye 15 - 20 din wait krte hai .

Ab aap hi batao Itna wait krne ke baad bhi aap ko woh satisfaction naa mile toh aap bhi khush nahi hoge .

BS yahi toh baat thi.

Aapko satisfaction nahi mili
Toh wolfy ko kaahe bata rahe ho
Apne andar rakho

 

[Werewolf]

Yahi bhai Yahi toh mera Point hai.

Aap shayad Puri story ka soch kr update likhte ho pr Hum Reader 1 update ke liye 15 - 20 din wait krte hai .

Ab aap hi batao Itna wait krne ke baad bhi aap ko woh satisfaction naa mile toh aap bhi khush nahi hoge .

BS yahi toh baat thi.

To wahi to kaha. Mujhe iss se thodi farq padta hai ki readers ke mann mutabik scenes likhna hai. Nahi likhunga to bura lagega unhe. Iss baare me sochta hi nahi mein.

Mera focus entirely poori story pe hota hai. Not just on single update. Driver ko pata rehta hai ki kaun si jagah par kaun sa gear lagana hai. Ab passenger ko bhalayi ye lage ki bhai thodi aur tezi se chal dete, ya udhar se chal dete jaldi pahuch jaate. Ab unhe kaun bataaye ki driver kyu iss raaste se le jaa raha aur kyu apne hisaab se gear laga raha hai.

Train me baith ke har passenger bol deta hai ki ye kaisi train chala raha hai. Kaahe ko roka hai idhar outer me. Main maajra to driver ko hi pata rehta hai na ki aage kaise raasta hai aur kya karna sahi hai.

 

[Black]

To wahi to kaha. Mujhe iss se thodi farq padta hai ki readers ke mann mutabik scenes likhna hai. Nahi likhunga to bura lagega unhe. Iss baare me sochta hi nahi mein.

Mera focus entirely poori story pe hota hai. Not just on single update. Driver ko pata rehta hai ki kaun si jagah par kaun sa gear lagana hai. Ab passenger ko bhalayi ye lage ki bhai thodi aur tezi se chal dete, ya udhar se chal dete jaldi pahuch jaate. Ab unhe kaun bataaye ki driver kyu iss raaste se le jaa raha aur kyu apne hisaab se gear laga raha hai.

Train me baith ke har passenger bol deta hai ki ye kaisi train chala raha hai. Kaahe ko roka hai idhar outer me. Main maajra to driver ko hi pata rehta hai na ki aage kaise raasta hai aur kya karna sahi hai.

Paisa maango jo bole update se satisfaction nahi mil raha

 

[Vikas678]

Congratulations For Completed 4500 pages

 

[MaxMan]

Actually, nahi. Mr. X aur Renshu ki baat phone pe ho chuki hai. Crimson arc me ye humne dekha tha. Renshu ye bhi bataata hai ki kisi bhi prakar ka voice modulator use nahi hua tha. Erica ne iski pushti di thi. Update 145 tha shayad ya usi ke around hoga. Ek baar recheck kar sakte ho.

Update 171 me Rinshu ne kha h ki second time jab call aayi tab aavaj modulated nhi thi or vo avaj ek aurat ki thi toh phir vo Mr. X kese hai

 

[MaxMan]

Actually, nahi. Mr. X aur Renshu ki baat phone pe ho chuki hai. Crimson arc me ye humne dekha tha. Renshu ye bhi bataata hai ki kisi bhi prakar ka voice modulator use nahi hua tha. Erica ne iski pushti di thi. Update 145 tha shayad ya usi ke around hoga. Ek baar recheck kar sakte ho.

Crimson arc me sirf Mr. X ke call ki bat Hui thi na kisi prakar ki voice modulator ki

 

[Werewolf]

Update 171 me Rinshu ne kha h ki second time jab call aayi tab aavaj modulated nhi thi or vo avaj ek aurat ki thi toh phir vo Mr. X kese hai

Crimson arc me sirf Mr. X ke call ki bat Hui thi na kisi prakar ki voice modulator ki

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